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Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ohusivun on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithWibia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronHam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itosuezer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinTuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: resedoqujiko on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okocaluq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alissaiw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otosopgi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HaroldGen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oupivuqenu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fipiafuuqiva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelos11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aazemon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oovdafinuu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AmyPef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uidizalbapafi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rapidgator on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: awedacoduwi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anatsoled on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oviridziokaki on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JulianLounc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: irumepuhe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufuducugoq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilxuori on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erkgovinivuxu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iorahifidoti on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utarubsa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Briancen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kittyvh60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SHADYGUY on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MicheleTraic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamAbago on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SusanLoago on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioemk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urokibakirvoj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Derekkef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesassiz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randallat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lyndahr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aiimkotovipi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydeSobre on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lmihaEmaws on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylhq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannen1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijuxodo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolejw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MirnaArext on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglashix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerknorp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieax11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqkizadaroc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mirr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robynug3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ciekasiwobir on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerchora on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miguelid11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamVaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hydrazm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonitaxq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesdox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyubedujula on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barbaramaino on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivedy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejidatacocu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azugixic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristiech11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardSox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondlj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larrysi1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawndo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bobbyinaps on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissom fan on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissfan on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: algolycle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icapokome on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: equxuiyg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RandyTal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avuoroaqahe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exupuled on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnuamb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avimozu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: igimimeh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iminevoatejit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ileraefa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davepv3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hopehi11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardomu60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maricelany60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnnaPag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edeqiba on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioxdv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterdsr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisxk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opoqilafuy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obumeexisih on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Banezasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mudosgeha on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uozhzzis on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asgiqopeduli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituxuhupite on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osipudork on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aredoya on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ahepenayadu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pauelllimb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aforacacakef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uqxunek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidaaq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candiceic69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesHOOKY on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Duglassig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udapeqom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureeyaj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanetteco1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamindus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenpv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linktrunfab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesleycc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonpk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aurorady16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RittsEmaws on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennistn18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertwab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArthurUntor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evozihay on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinglync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojomeriq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaotivuz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aheisuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 24vulkan-24.com on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivmfuqamsous on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: friedafz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelliefi18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewelmq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenkw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osivilinfim on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentMuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audrayq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derricklz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasKah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apapechuv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NudeStripperlwedia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: atokieqehoy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeprusa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricazn18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emuqeqxomara on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlenehu69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexislj3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aguiduri on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iufobiefaqaco on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMorge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettefx2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardhaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaeg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christime2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettanf69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietdj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynezh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldcow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xocifoq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uuipoci on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aahezjaxxo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarinaPag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iixivak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: revaas on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oaliqopehu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeetofafirul on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uruibawoq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulenodobocul on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajiwunu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: famRisse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anndroPag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justincak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxuh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utuefizuaj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Konstantuszdk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keithket on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgeus2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewlob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorxct on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookefz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellygs16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janazi18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqosecomeb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertmib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliajl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvixedukeqoev on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipihafapjataf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzperosibag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzdz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idjuyfodinafa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgepayof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oronatac on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaqh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredas1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianNog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipecepa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icojucoukibi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbieSpado on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelti69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliakp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roberthax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Floydbiabe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zefelubok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanazqz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorirpx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronaary on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphBaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EduardoNeets on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StanleyChede on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidafd4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeTrorn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivantlq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujeyirunatil on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ramirolopay on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronazax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imnopen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisews3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorcek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergcgw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okeaabe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oteyehal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MorrDrody on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krismf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasennqg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcuswz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lydiabv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondTob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenmhx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobxwt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneve60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LadyLauraAnn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlesbz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnyks18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipsnark on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esobikapav on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jayqe4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianen60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francinekh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaitlingr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyvk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyok3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fynjysxasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziteudu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipzc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixicyigyuvid on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inuvadavexoli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentHoW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliajo16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituanakob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PandSr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genehr69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettiecy60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariaImals on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williammuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uhepapomiyan on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinayq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nundendurf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lewiszep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulub4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufejewox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urijsehnodw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyKig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubeqenaljgij on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oniyusugisi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: socorroht60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aurinradasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrenv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancarb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorlf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenag69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitaey11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvajo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wtozizusano on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anumeteginiye on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: burenokdalty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoxisni on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeslieBip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elenakg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoutiqueMipsy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredjs16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inohaodonehe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivexotexexuqm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zkoniumijolut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: acoqiqaful on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jamiif1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelibv69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gilbertreore on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MonicaWep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vilmatq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dostavkaideasmt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marinaypm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vtktfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurenfu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: newveshimt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ihorawit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oletumuti on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawr69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PeterTal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewPreog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ksifuwisef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiecu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azcefeq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scousa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancewy60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanxic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usimabyqoce on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: warrenly4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esebeli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: silviazg1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hro1wardBob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasuht on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanzgz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChapligahaM on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PetrAndreevich on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inufatec on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yfcfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethrg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoexayoaxa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioaba on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufkbrfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolalo60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dfkthfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaxidagij on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morganvk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upyuqica on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ecaqnuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracykl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqatuzimogo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofozekipadat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzagdopegak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aubarkae on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasiliyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyHab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oocuqilo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heyubat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: br2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: up69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiuBS on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orihiazaqkuno on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vfkfyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frannh3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulomowguok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojoteonacez on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raqueldi4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucietib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliliriletu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissadk2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojegerigezo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Everettmooto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ktifasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettyekm3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanbwi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iclegesobupo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eldarzgs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioowd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreim16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ib18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanapgy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardoo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guvihuhijousi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetllkd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondJex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: go4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannela1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivanrvx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oe18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejoliehojix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dadarikixe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergfla on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredtd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriyog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoewohobaya on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikklu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriuyb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryqn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikjou on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginabp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgesig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizai4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evucuqed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinetk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adhileuq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OnenewlimitsSl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vuhutwda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MaximummaxSl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubezoluohu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinagk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yv18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertyt18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeoffit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilabb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenenq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: masirqatai on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipudibi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leworihokuhez on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: djdfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerzy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afayiyjx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikabs2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquerc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifogiqakedifa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufuurxulij on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efawiubxabaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijahomufcaku on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesclene on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettietl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: unohodetustef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulinecg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osodaqoqi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iuposej on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oweqomekehqi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcidk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertayy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apeyivoxeviy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyzi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raegx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uomijetoman on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcju69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudianq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajqerel on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenuv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umejerezkguti on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneyvm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianjk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinajxs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicapk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gholbizarasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliblx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyugexejej on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emoluvoa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ehewutigufic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afiwisuaelewh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayls16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilnu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzbfe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eohegozwo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilososehuyedl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJourf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronatvi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axaliwofenl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vaijelow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinabpu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erqikukutug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeroze on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwapujoeweexu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axecefebagim on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ub3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadyaasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levzba on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianarvh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markof4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ln60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eudukciraifm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniagq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejinayoloaveq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ooxkumowev on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdbs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzaatikir on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geletapasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anezoho on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iromuhcon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinMes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackgs18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levyxu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levwme on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usidwam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliagu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levkoo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levhtg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdiq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterKAH on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimiu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: XMCplkak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajimaabirirod on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yazireybaha on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreySpeab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tennieyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqoqiemaxsomu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiavg1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julidms on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizhz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julinmk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardslomy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julitla on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exifega on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipawidum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertGyday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: giqehokerumo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexco1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipemaby on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidvok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottcom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vbktyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edabigud on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPruck on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheltonjeoda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucxajopoget on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertevani on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaats on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aetavaqojucaq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axisidux on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejecuzip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioAwaig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenpug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephensen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elefehidsowe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogibogi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dbneifasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianagac on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneynax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nidokut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thereseam11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Zalasasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvidurapame on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifixamebizqo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aileenda60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujihuwufwome on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udufotep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oljacirimiyo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandixw1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fivipodi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jimecoto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugahaaburewo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noWarPutinHuylo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alowqauuguq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asanuysupexex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoubeqovire on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugevicexeduk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etezcahiviwg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SexWifeLob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbotte on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcisp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylounk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenutign on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iteuvemaemoxo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnjo18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricexc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbneczasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deeqe16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rn18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GilbertPraps on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traviscoida on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardoju18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevengp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisajw11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julialak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamespneut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IvanMedaWeemn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RiarivEmaws on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: classicpat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardRah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelineic2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyhk2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracedj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosadv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efrosinasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TXsPhaxia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamekaib16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertAgero on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrexThish on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ty1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Freddieboync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Heathwer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirksg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucqtipthyihub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethnex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenasj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaylatz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlacm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avafx1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyzp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroslmc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnzhelikaDrins on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usuyiyiheibei on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: armandozv69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertawags on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trishathich on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryTib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthermr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacksonTup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaih3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fzesxhd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshagb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonawava on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentrom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasogy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerjak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarionTak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josezins on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeruro on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billieasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharonzu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jarrodloabs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujumoxuelqzx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldorivy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yqRFgYfl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterme16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gamerdef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sorryaustralia.com on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vebzankef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeNat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willardmak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altadc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandiNuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwards9Eteby on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAdupt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PlexorK on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RamiroLem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saherezam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LauraPow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHoino on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThelmaSwace on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lb18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waqujikumiva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypaync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinmup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agifiivigumow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JimmySex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennDob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: omimuhe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gh3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olulewum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iansd4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEramb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesoxync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelTuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentSpeld on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielayu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beulahoy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arijekivi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caledutevibi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hermanawarm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelutera on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlere on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamgen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JorgeApage on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennJap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardquasp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogernat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigplusa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMoits on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kizfar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aeryuogsa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardciste on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniebm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GordonFrows on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesglymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianskync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewGon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheqeleijaht on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephaster on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: YoungWrova on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesKaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldROb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieltoopy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasontop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasWoste on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipabato on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BestTranceoi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TravisGow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyDed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upebacevo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stefanieoy2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldbearl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrelweilm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michealfug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carrieec69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldSaW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieSmoli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellPow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesmet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanld18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgefw1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbvkzybyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrinBen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailvu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelstarp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldfug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffordpet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleeok11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karllw11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephDap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AugustRed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stepanid on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyHoods on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DustinDow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Garlandfal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissazy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBeera on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeye3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianPat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiewu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasAxona on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: typodarseisp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettieuu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacobbi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyhq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephstoon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednasa69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyOxice on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganjv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henrytum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeVok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardVoize on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willieicoto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obosevokib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carrollnounc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obikapal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesAmats on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenskinc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: branditm16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyked on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindang3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasPib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rafaellm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyoexapy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejeuqeuvuini on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesLef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannevm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miguelca2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaiu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinJex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avitgop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenIsoff on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiezp60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iacalawu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldBig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PutinImperator on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChicrDob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LelandNOn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglasibum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victornit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennislow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessefus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenaau1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephReult on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aosveshe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidakg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamianCot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackjd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VernonBrums on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernardwed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenso1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielet3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldrq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqemoyuvub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinLor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caraze3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeriiw2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hm11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielsax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randykit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamvc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariedj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomassow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harrythoma on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertFeany on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenfogma on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemarytc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachelleeq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterweert on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorgus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldki60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneylq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencemf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justinced on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorstafe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldgep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyfk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randaldon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardallow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Curtissib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElizabethMus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWonap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganoe2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donovandep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliampaX on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneyt18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonsnuth on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertHot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyNat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CrystalTob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylouhq2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeighaGoafe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jhkz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teresakat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertcew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdrulp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BasilCep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: moniquelk2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BuySoftPrash on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Daniellug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynje1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevengef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kermitmeeva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyrusmox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyRoony on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manuelauz16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertisoke on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hazelzp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Miltonevaks on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryRarne on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eikuvene on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealzu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynuo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayetl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amigiuesecf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricecc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreytot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnell69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacobGrike on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldZeway on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesEldex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Myronshock on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HaroldCax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randallvax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utatuwtoser on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MyronVed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerioz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewSow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannega18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryerors on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleysj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewGrort on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSpeen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilyfe18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencegt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pantonjab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrydenty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioGebra on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leandrowat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarrow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAnope on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xp18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GrahamDryNc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomilx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestersy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenitoByday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shirleylk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ervinriz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FranksBom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornacf60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldevero on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniopdo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryCip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyqn16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubuprule on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blanchewc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clarkpluct on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardIsona on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyReark on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karile60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyWah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPrait on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottefl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremysah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieds4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Егоркаbug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rakipro on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceuu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HelenWeito on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlvinPed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciazt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarryTaite on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angiemj3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanfOn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larryfh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasnUt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicelz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriexw1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyWet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldtoups on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DwightGYCLE on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieav4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipNekly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: id2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesStell on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleygem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipty2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSmers on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellfk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardSnorn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Earlechoig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyzj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettio18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenexern on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisece3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldspamn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SonnyMof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandimi1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietwf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnefc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisTog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cindyaj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesitemo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertfex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthapr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPainc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louby on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelvat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EfuiAwsPag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melanieoh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Led on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevemef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelog4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryHag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BorgesHig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorraineva1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewbep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisee69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaao2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RashadMof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linahv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DexterVag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonJex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ephessoca on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisKek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryrhymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinKak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jefferybriem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneymb2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Palmerhaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinkeext on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesamild on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonynj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tommyundon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneiw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanan69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArchieDax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaea3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertodova on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertPrill on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardocof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vincentij18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BruceviemO on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanled on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixou3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightrem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maralb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marisaphilk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacquelinenit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jennahok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonasynC on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryvah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dallassob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sonnyges on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogeraxorm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardCaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWoomy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joleneda2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kyleuc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coolerproo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertHed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephzc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noellehy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiepx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameslex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidphabe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julianfloky on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannata18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyrix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieau2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernale18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyomidudqmuz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewak1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildagx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellann11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CesarFef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinatoto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewrEeda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ProgdomPaync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuellok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorainejw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inesvk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyZinge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyzk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ralphsyday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeFrabs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heathered1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ritabab923 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacibq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexandraqj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZERAH on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliftonfj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TyroneGrods on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelStuse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonix69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephclova on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ueoqpuma on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderfn2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancart4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisja16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamrasp69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurwanty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andremw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bipnase on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampiept on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terencepiott on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pennykj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessicade4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewledia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topwaterpro on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilpt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiahm11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChongHex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebarz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidhoary on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hillaryza60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliafa1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guyen16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edafeifave on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernieheash on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bryandauts on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelasp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: au18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BurtonAffix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenEvalo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gregorygrind on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Montynit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethkit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWhory on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithqb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coryvm3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliaar16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isdeelidud on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennySix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andydd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owezofevur on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankSlake on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeniferzn11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xiwukbeq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exchangeproo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciahz4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ohahizer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyCes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesjes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryMam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ey16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: addieyq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirtouristpira on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaronoc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonySpefe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelseire on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPoope on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethwhash on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardroppy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylqa2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fkooolayur on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard355 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonixe3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iepoyuj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariego11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelles on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard843 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenflozy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard785 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carsonlusia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciagr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertum4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasbe3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Olafjab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilDadly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasbuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasstymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredcarry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameshes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maggiehe11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewNoW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnadr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ts3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryhok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryjab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vw2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertTwiva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janeal16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesmup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethTilia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aluifilis on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinJok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndreNep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderkd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubenwl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KonkuApelm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielGug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamieOvefe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Melvinbaism on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edadiruqedelo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheldonrot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: consuelofj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannenk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiefu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertZenry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oribehokadid on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyyq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreyug2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etupidoq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffzoown on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwcibeobewiw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urezevehow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenRoose on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriqn2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldenged on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steventoilk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enoluruke on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxinepp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard476 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeyupog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesusGaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leroyenave on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawnyw2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieec4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewmut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenegj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latashanb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisboile on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertmix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaritaap3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniena16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyniz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonorpl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupesh4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolhp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethfw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luisoy2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isutacgi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainSpafE on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliapd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylaz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Fidelsup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carriexm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgieeq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: neilah3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCrins on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianBut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaeltuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uguzizusli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: provenexpert Ger on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipSerce on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieef16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidtut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vselediSlerm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaretss60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankNok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandahl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynarry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantaait on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitalp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyjn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidcoerm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolji11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idkozcofomeq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniowoulp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolafc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hs4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NormanJobby on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharybm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: viceehi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ls2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertDobre on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldRoosy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSiz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nellvs60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SylviaFed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheilawr18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheyz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenziz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorazn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sydneylunny on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelcrype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latishazs69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninefj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bethyb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williegycle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterExces on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traceyrig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitaig18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordondk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbrahr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaRunny on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aviskp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelldp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RicardoTrunc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaCogma on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willardfh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Berryjaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinAlago on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysmish on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandonBum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertiw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrinityElulk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelfus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansysy4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anniexg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojitojihqo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BryceNeulk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sujiwakugeho on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeroyhEr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieat2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieph18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alonsofum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ibbubuer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gm69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnecu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OrlandoGah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uragatije on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NewtonSpumn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: su2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicath3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelten on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waynedilia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettezp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishann16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceygi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ernestbilky on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Unaajab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ry69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenFet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckoning on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizadf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hilaryes18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellalg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itexuep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisanp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erlejab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentfx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlakl60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCoimi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijapilisuca on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harryheisy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: timothyra18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olakautaqox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyodiel on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleynp60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: royzf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hicayoyeseko on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berniceab18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryToxek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryjop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasrew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniatx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: triciapk1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CliftonTew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterfj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydePes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankBoype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emacuis on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterelifs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisonpm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: double pane windows hew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraam3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelSwick on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AngelTycle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxieaf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipwet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardDiC on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciara16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildaqh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollyqt60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyapc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyEmemy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winifredgt60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alberteluse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesLoams on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleqf69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriyg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: megangk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKeerb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andreavd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendyjo16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DashWSteek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelwap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAtofe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinug3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgeqk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KathrynMig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaelhoalf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentnl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancedw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaos2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanfaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanvqz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronniedc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldthofe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelliewh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightdub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jolr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steveagoft on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishakg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvafa1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewpaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWeals on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertpag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamGed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamodord on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelreM on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LloydOpels on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasilisa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithCurce on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejutacikujus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparofz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenawu2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevineralf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onieexibclkku on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esterox1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWaymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethamu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michailxtq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylougg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisNer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardCix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithay2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afehacoxizi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorSaide on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertiepg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonmus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fernandofy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertquard on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharild on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyOrbig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondasb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniely16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aezigidixuuy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinek18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suzannesq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlieny2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oupzujedu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciks4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Luckyemike on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvaod1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willaqm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewojmixozase on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BYEugeneIrraxjexdex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithfh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyLef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilbertWouse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbaap60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GabrielZen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufutiejojolig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tabithakz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ayuezuzavazep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joseog60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyie60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anowvuk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciamj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjenry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwintip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidTum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetso1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linwoodweque on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Allanleaps on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: puxoepeyonati on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeabs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannawx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MilesVesia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malindahl60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jefferygl16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbreap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbymz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonbounk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shamoprumb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calliebo16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blackpeacer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettebj3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisret on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroskix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliayj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coocapamp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Uniloksnapy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okixazewequzu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleysc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieloccam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StewartExany on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseyic4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudefl60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofevuvaef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gaxetoxutoa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolinahj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williear1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sdvillpap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinTorry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertEtept on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianEmeve on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerutite on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAlbup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAMine on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianfj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariact1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zaimpadly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryGaups on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ralphyz16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Basement Window Jaild on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardGek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolqv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenacela on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerarddrync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jameszh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katieqr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnierg1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SammyCep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgienc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjoita on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ui4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanettelr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolahz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedrossur on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieec18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellOpick on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanabt60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenebo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonan16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyCic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamscoof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieErora on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneysix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinaaa18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: irenehr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidspoub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adafr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orafu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyuragotudoj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosehc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umuujuy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldapeme on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSloda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryloucd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otitajadomav on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfluom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antidracer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineme18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ovabomu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floratb2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloisesp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ru3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzayunwagn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandakg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliaju69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettafq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneit16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamTwide on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eduardoso4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janetteft3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyohunowimezu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomaslof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coletteql16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pv18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightdq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishatg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneyc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertAdeva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldlo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneybak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughjc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janoi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onigiyvezak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aspectomtage Window thymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanjr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnenm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanemp60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zeyuyigasotia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynqo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanayy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikawb2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyku3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glendajt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gayym60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewebuwegee on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jodilb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannego11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariems2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VasyaCoere on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillatg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owjehojaupapo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wm16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: galegn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wallaceeb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RachelBip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glencc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilydc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oxayoxuwokoia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisdx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriqueti2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinemc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariezw1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pedroca4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandadr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancaqf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agikeliiqea on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonkv69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epjikopakik on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChesterFelve on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenafd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Agongoodo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithwh4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnzy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elinoree3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HeidiFiedo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbralx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredojw1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephsappy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanpf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: camillejh4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizazf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariyaDug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinPoisy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AhmadneS on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorpe1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealvs69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidnup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renesr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniaiw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olanb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BdondomSerop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinemm3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianemp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afohasxufokej on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiazx60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverSwemo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofidagqalas on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceyjy1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richarddak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanfm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisrg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Majorkar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElcosPaymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyaru60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisyk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendidy1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normasj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylar1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ec11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reqaricene on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onidemasleki on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandiexf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lanceds11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiayc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookela60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdvillKat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utinemibiem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisMycle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ezecayahe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vavadloups on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AuraEarn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosieuo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrixf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: quximijufeic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelcx3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffce60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shaneim4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelyngt16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinkib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerryuv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathRox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennydk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriau2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiejc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenzotoimi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krystally1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandwg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreycr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremyng69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leslieao18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sonyavx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loraoi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinthuff on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertapa1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lauranl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinagy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DorEmaws on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricesp69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinabw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesaub1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnieih2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquemd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fi4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Favorfet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyxp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogultade on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chelsearv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobts4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynct11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliajj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyar69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolekh16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerieqs4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertintax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbruse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielez3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leagp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mathewix16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Horacespado on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenbp69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KoddacEaMC on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andyzf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimefg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obolorav on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jy3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleuf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amyab11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coleendm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorasr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otepaqaoeluzo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenem69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZAABET.COM on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseywd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melaniexy60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uitiyavsec on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fritsusHek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannerb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasClody on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosannebt3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmellagr69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WargamingPlugs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darleneux18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allennk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizxg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zm16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: savannahfc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishayg11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphliery on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracygt2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonbe3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethayf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: staceybb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbywp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marinapn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldkk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidGlymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezyw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herbertgf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taahenimooax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueritemk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneni60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebaph2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednada3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinakl3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normaht18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ni16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeox1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoinetteka60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qerijiwi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphNep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: male on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: matthewod69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajofixoro on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azozinuviguh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettecu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itehuqiwguusa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onupakrarunac on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opipejago on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBeigh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenqk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayi4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanqv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simonene11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dashkasevasts on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerine11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josieng16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucindaan1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chadelel on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyyetedaoli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephruH on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patrickuj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmavu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusrek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinsit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: UC-tex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanneeq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ir3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollypa11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencedh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissaut11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hefavageniwa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: merlenc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgerag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxucaze on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jicakoyuuge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeldadm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosgk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iiculoba on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yihazetop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brucely69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrisnm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyigisaqorhi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidCrots on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyls69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ateehuse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: verabj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorriexd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendykt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerrywl3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aprilnm3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fs16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: egupkohi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandawt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverWhork on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicezm69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eddiehor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosbv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anthonyxp69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaNam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Raymondclupt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardraity on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iafiloq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyty2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cynthiagq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efiwawule on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ekcaevdojop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenezl11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabellajc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanns11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonybu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahja69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifacwiot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanbs60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardneeld on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinesl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afivxuw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ozetidi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rondael69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonnieup18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: almaz2demn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoesphSnany on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyia3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannonst16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannesl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evagb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: garyyk69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frederickbi69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Inquise on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliviadd4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyahaekonc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrahb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasityox69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrienb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinzo2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christianxp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldmoome on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ParfumCop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarencenz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marahv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthavk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gladysec11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxdelubua on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jocelynvo11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osocaxkewz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uwudaxuco on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellezp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elvafh16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparoms18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixiwepiyo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgajw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wildaqa60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganbx60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevievedm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidRoozy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiqueni2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulisagajo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryPhype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hegasajahu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pg888asia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arnoldia2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenye3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TeresaWeift on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaxy2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynxj3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jordonbob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Postlap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianneon11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: plasdtic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronniejoppy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karaow2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthergn18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimgc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: natashafg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyJulup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikavi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanadoz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldieax60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannettewq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sportsbet365 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lenush on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulaf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeBruceval on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lerkblf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorywb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynag11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidamf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarenBah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epemeweh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikkracini on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessiets4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenayu2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annettehz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufadiwuwemim on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommygx2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vezoyuguopij on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: steveol2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrenbex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattiesc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannezp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhulky on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tylerref on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EugeneInids on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ininibyaziono on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonbv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uosoruhafurfe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WendyGot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MinnieRekly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ki2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kevingy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Odorert on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adeleya3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renett18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulettejr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saracs1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephacinc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HorecaPuple on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uworuwaqanim on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandievi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonawu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryFub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertBab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EmanuelVix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topsamaraGuapiff on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joeow16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindaay4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleyclawn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofefome on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarlosNes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonnz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonyonege on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thurmm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Malcomtag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ny60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kuwukemafem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edgargq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscook11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evaud69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinahd18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoa11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycecb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: howardgr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sherisp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsiepv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magikcomik on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanazs18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letayu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyun18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caigryBub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenhoupt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upaqecigogihe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altajh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelnax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PatrickJox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianqd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisoc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christifn11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanlt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleoe3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvophy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianToosy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arnulfodot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellemt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffmf60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfonia on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesNak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellraw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieai11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianfuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijepigh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nikkier18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilahc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieot69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendydg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FordireRok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryTah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryoxync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: endeaws on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenza60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axidagodolizo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvagx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: troywx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshallfq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredame3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivamx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kb60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katesn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneso11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikecr18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellira1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithye16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zs3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenww4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithrr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacywt2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieei3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureliejpik on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziriziveyeea on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianejz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcioniy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ou11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikvsw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyfa16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwainkex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinfw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelmb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertomq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneac1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatricejh16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margerynd4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robnnj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jomwins on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriakf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candacegs2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robwnz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycekp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniagh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kariww3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerianj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannierh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansymc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagangi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsavj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardab69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseyyg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnezu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelesi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannazd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelayf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahaw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scottka3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleyjg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracefa60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willieer69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valarievn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyno18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williamou3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanapq2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apriliq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldxy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanfl60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandako2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckyxs16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyio18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherynce4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlenezk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susanawk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettefo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrakf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineid3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiave1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerriya4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynoy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altayf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcellazi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graceqf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarl16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertabr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinpe11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abigailhg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrijy3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malloryng2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamdj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethavr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolefz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonwyu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidWrara on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolafg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanishatz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pamelamf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannaak18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelxm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesHew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleywa60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinana4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneql4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneyiw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginaey3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondaro18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julipbn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseynf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardzn16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzpfs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charliehh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondaqv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julioim2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmiewx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leighaq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniwo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinlm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianadoa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: od2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredonaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mabelju69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winniewv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayeiu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettevx1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesCob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaKic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitamf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiefu18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwennt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidPesty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterlok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimdc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbawh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KirbyPancy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergbsn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieak3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kayeou4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaod4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldTal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellysb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickgl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarrollCoign on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephHaith on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bl16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinChilK on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielmp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinatf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evaxmu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effieyj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mitchellmj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennck4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterjy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecildv69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiseuf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinShoms on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaqv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherrypq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariewr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellayi18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: norany18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriazx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommylm69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tessamt16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanwa11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisard2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinaeh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikatm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneln11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancheyc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankeliva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinneim16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenexo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertNoinc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFuppy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williameveli on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasitywn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgiacb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darylwj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estermj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeraldmog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opheliatr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: javierkc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandwef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariemb2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raquelza1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mistylb18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninebj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrieke69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: flossiepv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellalf60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrellfc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenemt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipERETA on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrafa69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleydep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliaxg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elizaae2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toddlc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynyi11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolineih1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiadj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliquebx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughsb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonax69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlieyg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudinefh3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: duaness18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WarrenHeata on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlessot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixgt2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terriedo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellemk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahms2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mildredsm16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciauc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenAcoug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynzh16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pq16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinepb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelwex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebeccalg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracievy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneync18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordantt18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeHause on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrunoFeF on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannacn3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornavd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyakf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariettafg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoniaof60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephinewg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgamq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelgc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonkg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethagriz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineml11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinewh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisadu69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: russelliv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raezw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldaf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darcykk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliaml69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michaelue3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miaee2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonke2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettuj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graciegw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanprade on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyxr69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erepjapse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dustinue11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvasa11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottCycle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPlale on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldNunda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonSat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremywt60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariyw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephRaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: np16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrary2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarcusBlils on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnewi2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kentze60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarprags on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyny69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emmavl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniejh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenage11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaov60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tenuall on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: selenabp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanaln2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lyndact2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ce16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenayk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patriciayy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlyn11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deliaqd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietss11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tinafo60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorapb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellack18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleexn3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofeliaic16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alantm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dm69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylvo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrwinEduth on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseysr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPoofs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JordanHeace on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrynef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieyb60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardwer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathewKet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolapi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglaspypet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinagp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdx3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithho18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariek1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vo4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelaoa2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patux60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliazk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karynif3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlahs11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellieiw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinaxe2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanuc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinby16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marisolva18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodoreql11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zg1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheakj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineuu60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adams69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieko2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollieho4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganyh16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiaol16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dannyxt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derrickmu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollierz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: queenuo11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannhn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineqg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresep69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinayn2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldiepr18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianur3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevieveca3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiebm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisyq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinaba16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SerRado on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancasn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancepu60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathywo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernets60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tylerac69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelljf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretss2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaiw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellagr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mi69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitake4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fanniepy1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phylliszj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldap1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hy60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenefn18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinati16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardhc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuagaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CraigGon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianaws18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollievi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charleshon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelinezi11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannazo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisall16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirstentq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haleynx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phyllissh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larayc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryow2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louuz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldshuTs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninetr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: araceligy60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracise60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannlx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnBiose on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankovell on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamquiCt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicoledn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesNease on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltervon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelajm1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qm69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolaxp60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioneq1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellmc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorxp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancazc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: spassub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: territj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ErvinDwesk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliavp16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidayu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricefo60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasen11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doreensb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollyoz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietrf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietmc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrauc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlti69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertlb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleytp18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillyc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayebj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentax3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ll4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscohn3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markak60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillianys4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustama18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laureniu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikidei on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliayw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ninacp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitalx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliend60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonabini on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brucebrurf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leahky11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycegv18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robiniv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leavu2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardar11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiejg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinegx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnin4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughzn11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniezm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolamf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hectorbu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcac60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricatx60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelfh3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondyu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzcn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sabrinaat1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonniewe4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judyee60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: md18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ju16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneed4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliaud1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GradyVor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernestmp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stellayz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleyhd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyvi69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniams2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannabd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisatr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisak16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamKah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliews4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronafbr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pf69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guysg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ol18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnebh11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriadr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ettasp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldinequ4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bessienu60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdeard on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianyy1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickiee3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivyoc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencenw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickyjw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monicaib69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florineyl1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizkc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauriceyo4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieho60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremyetete on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinesv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinapz16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianniq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianai60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaer1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gp4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginarc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnxg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randydt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daisyqm18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luelladt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracieland16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizbw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alejandrasx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennierw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettesm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneyq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyhq18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrapm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyeb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorwk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentlj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wj60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinej60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ingridwx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardAveno on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidDirty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupeet69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretyy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxierg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judymi2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertobr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iancr16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreys11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catherinept3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieey3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rogerqf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briananf4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenamg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davidjc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williambam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rochellegf11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseygz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinji11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannamn16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettejv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elviarq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gertrudetv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ba60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sadielw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: murielgi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deenafv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurajm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannfw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albakb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredasb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredil4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelasz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elbagq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinevk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgenw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eddiejs2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michellegx2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorieeb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelitalp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: li4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinle4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianqo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenagr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debravx2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erickahq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marthalr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodorero2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainemr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dalegl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertaoc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annazz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrytj16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesRex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annmariela4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannemn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianuo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoricgo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patsyem4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danqk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqt16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewellyi60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriln69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: el60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnsu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnvz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryci16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonih18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirandajg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Venomguactop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliffordhc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: whitneyrv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitaji3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuals11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guygd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenqu1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtaurf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisks16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimpv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgetxk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estellakf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmelacv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryPem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcionay69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sueyx3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermankw4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kellymef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rayvv60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harveyga1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankok60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylwm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenelq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezch3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorez60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermanvm60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleohi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinacx16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgealima on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normama18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionneyr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylbd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Annaanaks on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linasx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiejg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genavn11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeSoday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberlynv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: um1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetqe60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonoc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floydpx69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertoPen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiepv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: feleciadl18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agnesio2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordonrg11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancedi11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomigy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: os60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginadx2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottezz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipswert on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeDor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardcof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kylerb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenebe69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathaniu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suemo18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roseannmu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietgl11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenuj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilajl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimebl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yeseniall3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: in1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzte60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dk1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lacykd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenhk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ij1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarioSorma on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lolacat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyFal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastance on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannapj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioiq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittneylf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenorabb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahl16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollyzk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katess60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kd1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankiems18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebekahdq3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrainefg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniegj3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnuw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileener1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldLaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claralx3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniefo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyjg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldMedly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaBok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliokic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldJat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasWaind on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAvala on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NathanWress on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielMup on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Glennscupt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryMor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: byronvl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlescy3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondFus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaseydk60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulca60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noelleoh4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriegw11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Natashaemn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasit3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorispc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathleendy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monaxo11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenrot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecilexd1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphHauth on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardpoill on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leemo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelabz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariMosse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielapj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glengr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnna16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainezu2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonigh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianafn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquels2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peggyga3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyw11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellywt1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nannieog4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquerx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilagb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleengu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tyronelv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettebu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagankm11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardolb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmypk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idahh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelije4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorwf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenelk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasnaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseywa2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernonjt4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keishapr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nzryxcrujoq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandietu69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmanr11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonkm2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekt2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pa11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyala4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinar16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernell11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chandrajp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephaniecr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanoe69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonzt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mattieqg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinekl60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waynefs4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denadz1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleymw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffke2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robinsu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlietow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannysw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantawjy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattyhk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapl3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenjl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineef16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharyel69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronnieqb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kp69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adriennely60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiekr2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghanml2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simoneye4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mn16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvincd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonwl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxb18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldRulge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaof3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahod2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ac2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ul18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleyg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyjd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyacf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosettaut11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightie3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabelletq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannawe4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryesown on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IraKinue on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryPyDay on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniaca3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenejn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyoe2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinatp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karinfk2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubyfl11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldxk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldcd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normabo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deborahoj69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseyze1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethht69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornaos2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredfb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmatc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morriscj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineus2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: seanqi4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tiako1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karljr18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evelynvv4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: if3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 8playfortuna-Sip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosanneyc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniahz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbaraxl2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manueluk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelsd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelBessy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinezp16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AmberTor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudemk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyee11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharrongu16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisdk11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonazb3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelyntc69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlinecj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustagi4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenext11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasax1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryiz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ex11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalcx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ww2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MasnaLnaiva on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittanyde1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheaig4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanqr3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorbof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaqm16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lousu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondragh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandakp11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracynn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleose2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottedd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterez11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioklq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephrix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MerlePal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheliafe2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennysc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenzt18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickigc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randycy3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnmc1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyax2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicholejo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephanienq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalqe16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandycq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldtug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernanu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sethry2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinalx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariannefr60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nancyux11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katykw69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ladonnato16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliace3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawngd69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnehx11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiedf2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandypx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewly1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessiegk18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahv11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestertq2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentnn1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinezg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacyps60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettqj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattieez2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaxy4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelbyrd11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarakh3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerha1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louiseac3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hiramwhody on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightsa2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillayf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadornu2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiees2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cheribc16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolauy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: faybh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: px2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellyqy4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillietg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debrase3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannego69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ad4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ie16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: justinebl3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lewisub1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannaoz2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clydedy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradpi1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparotd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannaft3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretdu11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiazh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniasc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brendanc11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doraoy1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kendycef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellibi2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danapg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josiekq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vx18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: le3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucialv18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonko18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eleanorhw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roycecrype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettehf16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelvd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tashamh18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsygi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marissakk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamFrest on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henrydl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelego11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettmo69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lulamv1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edithle69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilayx4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenyr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cg18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kc3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthagb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgegq60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josefajv2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresfy16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyfo60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracietz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allanng2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertohi3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnienk16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katharinefg3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JudsonZex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrycu4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryhp2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jt11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyhr4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yolandaux60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katyez4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliaqq4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charitysy4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altasc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gloriama1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanqs4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynevb16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedb1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiegh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patnd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virginiacd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: serenaoe3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannetc18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraoc4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellarg11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: crystalke4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susienh69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottieqd60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailzd16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaqv3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikasg2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kzkazpap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ebonyrf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredxh2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bradleysmugs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendire11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceyo16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnniemz60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliekp1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearliefs60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianaot60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markqz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francescaxy18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryqq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ig18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celestelr1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyld18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jesusjj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomizb69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenaiq2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margiezk1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertow2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricewf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghandi69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninelm3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaqh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafu69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineuy11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiatc60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieob16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandph1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phillippi16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimema69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianuw18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wd3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracehu60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpiers on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: va18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyalb11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamsek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosepl4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenbf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseycw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikud3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nz16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucillevz69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ia2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmabn2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanjj11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinald60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansyhp3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckygs16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynod1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottiegp16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyyj2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylit1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audravt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davejo1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adaeg1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jannaer16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florenceua4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliexg4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deantf3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albaiz11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielatj1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylxa69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneqg69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerido1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leors69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxl11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinert11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliveld4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PavelZen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kq69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiajy69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineyi1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattipk4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenabm4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondrasg60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherieio2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycenf69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roslynca69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlav8 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristennz3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saundralt16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannhc2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeqt69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorlw16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effiebs11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeyz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsyut11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latoyaot3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martatb4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenar4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinefj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thelmavr16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiall69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivexj4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonyu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaeo3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alysonet1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denisexv16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herminiayd2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laraiw3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlineiv18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenoraaf69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertolf18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloreswt16 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilaaa2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphoni on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaildol on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiefe11 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kinlochnez on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniozga on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelCop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teddymeete on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keganvoms on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinbip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AldenFek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertPlore on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PercyLab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurcruch on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielmew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldJourA on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lamaslalo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maxwelldic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PaulaInvof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreapam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eugenehub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wallaceglips on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioDop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMiz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardBit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Francisdrice on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphick on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenderCashwes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenjor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneyblacy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesstymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryLal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamDem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuazz18 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElceDiulk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankCox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AliceGeque on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maximdom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LesterUnale on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesvaP on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Orlandovug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyaccip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesPQ on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pancakes som on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ttaletfnxz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasKip on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ryanger on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardknolf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidacini on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryboara on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marthaliady on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oibuntuzusazi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardarord on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelClali on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Johnnyshush on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltercoego on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephMappy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WallacePhymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEsola on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinAvarp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergiodek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelpak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardShova on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonydic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesDaymn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randyneest on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WayneVum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wendellineri on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MajorIcock on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Abrahampum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CalebDudge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevintow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianlag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dannydic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethanypE on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrooksGop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidgat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelbof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieTom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothylox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesunser on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphdit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottPet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IsaiahFox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesonend on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardkek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billyswish on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilburSerie on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSaula on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEvast on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesbuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanAmisy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreybam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardprife on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurevora on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankHek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryDic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyBen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankAmite on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyDek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenGer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardHUB on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidVoido on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonTum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorShubs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chrisbeado on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisDah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeAnese on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentBed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElliottSoort on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasliery on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennisdab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesSoide on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesFLECT on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronZes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigoweda on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonnieSaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewTwisk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeswops on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamNit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AdrianDor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidwag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSlito on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessemoing on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonyClave on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldReort on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeromeshevy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shawnvonge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mathewbog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryPAr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyJorgo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEdino on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerHOW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewIntep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilRhids on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jaimerus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marlonruism on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianTuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyHiz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrancesaBag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamsPah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiriamBus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidQuery on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: homastor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamTon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VodaKaH on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ViktoriyaGop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeple on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DarrellGaisa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StephenEsoft on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentarild on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clydesab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlorn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louissek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentcriny on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasgar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MitchelVek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamonTak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisTug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyHow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianFelty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFraug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertRof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFibly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldBub on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephblodo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamToils on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephhib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdrego on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanfab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gordonles on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnCloge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PerryNab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardUnolf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AllenTuB on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinHaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brettjen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainCat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephWar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianDop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Merlemat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwinZep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shelbyweito on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewtar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PrestonMex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellweddy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieOricy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barryvicle on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarrisEStiX on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MartinCox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryVus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelOrals on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: micheleez4 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTus on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesseRat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyMiz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNeN on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntoniowIlla on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidLot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredhense on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamexeds on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lavillpap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephViexy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDuelm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenadefe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioWer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelamite on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorRhiny on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandfeext on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyRek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottDaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyHex on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clintonsog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevendom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Enriquemig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusmum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPsype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobhog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaVaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aaronpaild on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HermanDEK on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsix on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhoils on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamCab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinMoump on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielcom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredfal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldHouch on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyGrice on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyNox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsieng2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarveyDoupt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanvow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xtoniamhjab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenbug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariolEf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Candaijab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephvoz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottusero on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertobell on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewkit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bali_tloi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martajl69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glenbu69 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyvf1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SOJofFRJT on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondahi8 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgehab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlasu3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lldFvIXz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carloswam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avawk3 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickzw60 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaFab on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colettexw2 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Theronsaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maha-Svanah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharido on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithdx1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldjep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinajh1 on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlrn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlpv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlelh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyPic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanajbt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuadausa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergxnl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasShusy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igoroem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: btaletndmf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonmsz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ntaletarqe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergrtq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Voltugovug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaloo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronamqg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Irinhmn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julioxc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliyfn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evanxf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evazpe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikiuln on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorizcw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidxla on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzaxx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzyki on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithNah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Margaretzrc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzjdd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzjfl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthunyTag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Margareteji on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DorothyGunny on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LewisaFfox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Munich souse on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidbrove on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChesterPuppy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelbem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aarontruff on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoyTommax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DinaSallymax on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lumsefoDync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lindaideor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyWef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglasrep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nzbkLiape on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RickyFlils on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GilbertleW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobbyday on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OknaBox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joycebor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewtut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesLot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaellit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielalacy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Allenlam on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBOW on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pechi_pxkr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bentonexona on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Servis_veor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidrof on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willardguatt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Endocrinologytum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pokrytie_hmEr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ernestodably on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidNaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianver on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tehnichesk_siEt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ketorolactum on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Avtoservis_quKt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Avtoservis_lfer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viza_hcEn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesanync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Recipes mep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelagows on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardCrada on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matras_frKl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keithdor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Insusty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ferrous material recyclin on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplom_fsol on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peteremise on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ismaelroubs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Meshki_jkKr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FstgjeEnubs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Micel#geck[Petogogyhupgef on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dichaelboync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DuaneRal on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donald#gnick[IzbkkeqozyvY on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mel#geck[PetogogyhupgefOQ on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chistka_qsPr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplom_fwet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_lkki on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Saiti_ssPr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Fald#gnick[IzbkkeqozyvYJ, on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SqddpcEnubs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chastnyy_dvpl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pautty on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rysskoe porno hydie_jpot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Top100Vote on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazernoe_cepl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oborydovanie peregovornih on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: porno s trenerom_nbol on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: prodvizhen_osPr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: duessiomi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouiseHop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Promokodi_vwOl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Promokod_baml on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SeeplyMed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shipping car across count on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brayanlck on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bicryptoson on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pereezd v Ispaniu_ygor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kazinopadly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IncovE on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathandug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbrunc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edgardopap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arcarge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Smeshnie kartinki_fvet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JewelMit on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Deteyling_hcSr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Deteyling_sxSi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewCaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BONUSjaf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardvah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryshecy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielNap on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stadsic on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ferrous material recovery on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dublikaty_xrMa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya v sankt p on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LoganNug on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Skolko_yqOr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kazino onlain_xlea on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Okleyka_jqMi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ubrat_ljSn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesjib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrvingLoula on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WinstonCheah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasVom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LloydFuh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pychora on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_znpn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_zgEi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_opEa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kak zarabotat v internete on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: skoraya narkologicheskaya on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephAnaky on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardLurge on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: himchistka_rppr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernicebrusy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: instagram story viewer _ on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_uhpi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_biSl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: himchistka_uuEi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Proizvodst_noer on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: provesti_ysSt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raoyslad on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Razrabotka_sdSi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethbut on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Provedenie_fwKa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ralphpaync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephAmeni on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldlet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tyrniket_etKt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roberttes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kodirovanie ot alkogolizm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Narkolog na dom krasnodar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: instagram story _mcMn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_kd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya krasnodar on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryUtefs on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouieAxole on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertrig on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonven on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EmmaBox on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhaw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelPed on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Metal waste analysis on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefqmf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrdrf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerardhoume on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stomatolog_wpsl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfem on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Coreyblany on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrzod on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JessieGeons on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewamath on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldMotat on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessehooky on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardFuB on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazryfd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_cpOl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kapelnica ot zapoya kolom on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biznes plan cvetochnogo m on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_od on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefugi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya v stacion on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrljm on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kapelnica ot zapoya luber on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazroso on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya moskva_tf on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steveninene on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya chelyabin on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazroib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryCet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrmqp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrijg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrzmx on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldArtep on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jugabet Peru_zrPt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_mv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_ur on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_lq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrowp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xxx_jcoa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_jq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrolv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrwld on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrslp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: narkolog na dom v Krasnod on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fonbet kazino_vyEn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelhok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaellAg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondkiZ on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OscarAppes on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya sochi_unK on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampoerb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrdhg on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya ekaterinb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Coolzino_gyen on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Miguelsop on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronWah on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAsype on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrqld on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrkkl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya sochi_moK on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya sochi_ano on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesalode on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Zacheryterve on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelTaurb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JuanJuan on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilHew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jimmietob on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie zapoya na domy_hz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhaili on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Betflare_htpa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elektrokarniz_uxei on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Franshizi_elSr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Best Pin-up casino Canada on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: XMC-PL-paync on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jugabet_gjpl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryLag on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vino beloe_jgsa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bren Debeaux on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_mw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_vd on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethlok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osyshitel dlya kompressor on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dom prestarelih simferopo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_aj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_qe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ff24e7b/comments_mkmi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: izi drop promokod_hnpi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snyatie lomki narkolog_vq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya rostov_pu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefbuj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: snegohod kypit_fwOr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_yj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_eo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bob#genqwertnick[BjygydiD on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ff24e7b/comments_nnsr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrmhc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Amryn Lovly on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_lv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stamp making online_gqOi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya rostov_bn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: disqus.com_wiEn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya sochi_pzM on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivod iz zapoya Nijnii No on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertlow on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: propysk v moskvy dlya gry on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MRT SPB_dzMi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: porno milfi_ugea on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nemeckoe porno_cyEl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FannyOne on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nemeckoe porno_vdEl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elon casino_acMr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: porno ginekolog_dxet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elon casino_uxsn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marketing on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: porno ginekolog_pnet on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elektrokarnizi somfy_mcmt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Freepornkr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mostbet_piei on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_xqKi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steventok on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardGog on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igrovie avtomati _izEr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidgaund on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_hhSa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mostbet kg_jckl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wikibank.kz_trPn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: programmi 1s _imKi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Uazrexp on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Treflnr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrycj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrthv on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefniz on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zubdokNek on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrkqa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iarioredq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_vyoa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrfkr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrgno on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_kvsr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrrpt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrdmu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jariorpby on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrtljq on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrkib on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eanrwuu on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrskn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrotn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelissaQualoMayoto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrqto on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Treffoi on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: internet provaideri_uqEa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beton ot proizvoditelya_y on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrijj on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jariorpzw on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrwwk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrsxh on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorxmb on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrcgy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazraov on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorvbo on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RayfordNak on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrthqy on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazroaa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrtuqn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlynaJew on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_jvpl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrlnk on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_zbSt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazreir on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_pqOr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michelin_bgon on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eanrxou on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: skypka zolota _kjPn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrybe on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_rvot on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_hksa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mostbet_tgEl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrkxl on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Protezirovanie zybov_ckmr on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lombard chasov_leSa on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xazrsce on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_dtkn on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pin up azerbaycan_utea on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrxmc on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
Title: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sklad_cppt on April 21, 2009, 09:56:27 PM
I am new to this but waned to try a short story.  Any suggestions and comments will be welcome.


Sara walked past Gil?s office, a trash can came flying out the door, it missed her by an inch.
  ?Do you mind telling me what that was all about?? she asked taking the can back into his office.
  He looked at her, ?Sorry.  It is just this case, everything is a dead end.?
  She walked over to him, ?May I?? she asked picking up a few of his notes.
 ?Help yourself,? he said.  ?I am going out side and cool off a little,? he said walking out his office.
  Sara mumbled OK as he left, she sat down and read over the case files.  Something hit her strange about the test results.
  ?That?s not right,? she said to herself, ?I ran that one my self.?
  Sara went to the evidence locker and checked out the box, she reran the test.
  ?I thought so,? she said.
  She picked up her phone, ?Grissom meet me in trace.?
  A little later he walked in the door, ?What??
  She handed him a paper.   ?So,? he said.
  She handed him another one, he looked at it, ?This is way off of the one in the folder,? he said.
 ?This one,? she said pointing to the one in his hand, ?is the one that I ran the day you brought it in.?
 ?If you add this and this,? he said shuffling papers.
  ?Then it puts Nolen not only in town but at the scene of the crime,? she added.
  ?But how did this one get in MY folder?? he wondered.
  ?This one is from Nick?s B&E,? she said.
 ?Floyd, that new guy in trace ran that one the same time I ran this one.?
 ?I got that emergency call and asked him to make sure you got it,? she added.  Floyd walked by, Gil called him in.
  After some questioning Floyd admitted he dropped the papers, ?I must have gotten them mixed up.?
  Gil was mad.  He was about to fly off the handle, say something he should not have, Sara put her hand on his shoulder.
  ?If that happens again,? she said to Floyd, ?Make sure you get the right papers to the right case.  It could be life or death.?
  ?Yes Mrs. Grissom,? he said walking away.
  MRS. GRISSOM.  She was still getting used to it, it made her smile.
  ?Thank you Mrs. Grissom,? Gil said kissing her cheek.
 She smiled at him, ?And I thought it was the expectant mother who had mood swings, not the expectant father??
  He touched her belly then he looked at her.
 ?Thank you,? he said.  Sara looked at him.  ?For marrying me, for loving me and for this little lady.? 

THE END    
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Post by: aiimkotovipi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydeSobre on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lmihaEmaws on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylhq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannen1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijuxodo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolejw4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MirnaArext on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglashix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerknorp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieax11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqkizadaroc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mirr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robynug3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ciekasiwobir on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerchora on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miguelid11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamVaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hydrazm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonitaxq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesdox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyubedujula on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barbaramaino on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivedy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejidatacocu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azugixic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristiech11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardSox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondlj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larrysi1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawndo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bobbyinaps on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissom fan on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissfan on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: algolycle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icapokome on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: equxuiyg on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RandyTal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avuoroaqahe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exupuled on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnuamb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avimozu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: igimimeh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iminevoatejit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ileraefa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davepv3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hopehi11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardomu60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maricelany60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnnaPag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edeqiba on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioxdv on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterdsr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisxk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opoqilafuy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obumeexisih on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Banezasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mudosgeha on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uozhzzis on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asgiqopeduli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituxuhupite on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osipudork on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aredoya on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ahepenayadu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pauelllimb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aforacacakef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uqxunek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidaaq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candiceic69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesHOOKY on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Duglassig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udapeqom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureeyaj on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanetteco1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamindus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenpv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linktrunfab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesleycc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonpk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aurorady16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RittsEmaws on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennistn18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertwab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArthurUntor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evozihay on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinglync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojomeriq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaotivuz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aheisuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 24vulkan-24.com on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivmfuqamsous on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: friedafz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelliefi18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewelmq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenkw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osivilinfim on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentMuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audrayq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derricklz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasKah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apapechuv on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NudeStripperlwedia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: atokieqehoy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeprusa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricazn18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emuqeqxomara on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlenehu69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexislj3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aguiduri on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iufobiefaqaco on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMorge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettefx2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardhaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaeg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christime2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettanf69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietdj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynezh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldcow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xocifoq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uuipoci on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aahezjaxxo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarinaPag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iixivak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: revaas on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oaliqopehu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeetofafirul on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uruibawoq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulenodobocul on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajiwunu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: famRisse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anndroPag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justincak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxuh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utuefizuaj on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Konstantuszdk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keithket on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgeus2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewlob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorxct on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookefz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellygs16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janazi18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqosecomeb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertmib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliajl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvixedukeqoev on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipihafapjataf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzperosibag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzdz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idjuyfodinafa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgepayof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oronatac on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaqh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredas1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianNog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipecepa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icojucoukibi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbieSpado on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelti69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliakp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roberthax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Floydbiabe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zefelubok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanazqz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorirpx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronaary on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphBaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EduardoNeets on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StanleyChede on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidafd4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeTrorn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivantlq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujeyirunatil on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ramirolopay on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronazax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imnopen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisews3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorcek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergcgw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okeaabe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oteyehal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MorrDrody on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krismf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasennqg on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcuswz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lydiabv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondTob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenmhx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobxwt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneve60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LadyLauraAnn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlesbz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnyks18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipsnark on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esobikapav on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jayqe4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianen60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francinekh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaitlingr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyvk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyok3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fynjysxasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziteudu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipzc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixicyigyuvid on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inuvadavexoli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentHoW on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliajo16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituanakob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PandSr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genehr69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettiecy60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariaImals on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williammuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uhepapomiyan on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinayq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nundendurf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lewiszep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulub4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufejewox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urijsehnodw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyKig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubeqenaljgij on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oniyusugisi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: socorroht60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aurinradasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrenv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancarb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorlf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenag69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitaey11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvajo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wtozizusano on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anumeteginiye on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: burenokdalty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoxisni on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeslieBip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elenakg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoutiqueMipsy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredjs16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inohaodonehe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivexotexexuqm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zkoniumijolut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: acoqiqaful on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jamiif1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelibv69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gilbertreore on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MonicaWep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vilmatq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dostavkaideasmt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marinaypm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vtktfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurenfu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: newveshimt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ihorawit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oletumuti on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawr69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PeterTal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewPreog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ksifuwisef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiecu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azcefeq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scousa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancewy60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanxic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usimabyqoce on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: warrenly4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esebeli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: silviazg1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hro1wardBob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasuht on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanzgz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChapligahaM on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PetrAndreevich on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inufatec on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yfcfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethrg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoexayoaxa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioaba on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufkbrfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolalo60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dfkthfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaxidagij on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morganvk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upyuqica on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ecaqnuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracykl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqatuzimogo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofozekipadat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzagdopegak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aubarkae on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasiliyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyHab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oocuqilo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heyubat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: br2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: up69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiuBS on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orihiazaqkuno on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vfkfyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frannh3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulomowguok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojoteonacez on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raqueldi4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucietib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliliriletu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissadk2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojegerigezo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Everettmooto on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ktifasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettyekm3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanbwi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iclegesobupo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eldarzgs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioowd on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreim16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ib18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanapgy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardoo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guvihuhijousi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetllkd on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondJex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: go4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannela1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivanrvx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oe18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejoliehojix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dadarikixe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergfla on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredtd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriyog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoewohobaya on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikklu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriuyb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryqn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikjou on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginabp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgesig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizai4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evucuqed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinetk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adhileuq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OnenewlimitsSl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vuhutwda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MaximummaxSl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubezoluohu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinagk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yv18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertyt18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeoffit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilabb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenenq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: masirqatai on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipudibi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leworihokuhez on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: djdfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerzy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afayiyjx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikabs2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquerc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifogiqakedifa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufuurxulij on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efawiubxabaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijahomufcaku on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesclene on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettietl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: unohodetustef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulinecg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osodaqoqi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iuposej on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oweqomekehqi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcidk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertayy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apeyivoxeviy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyzi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raegx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uomijetoman on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcju69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudianq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajqerel on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenuv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umejerezkguti on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneyvm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianjk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinajxs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicapk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gholbizarasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliblx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyugexejej on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emoluvoa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ehewutigufic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afiwisuaelewh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayls16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilnu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzbfe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eohegozwo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilososehuyedl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJourf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronatvi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axaliwofenl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vaijelow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinabpu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erqikukutug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeroze on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwapujoeweexu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axecefebagim on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ub3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadyaasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levzba on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianarvh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markof4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ln60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eudukciraifm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniagq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejinayoloaveq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ooxkumowev on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdbs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzaatikir on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geletapasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anezoho on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iromuhcon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinMes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackgs18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levyxu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levwme on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usidwam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliagu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levkoo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levhtg on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdiq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterKAH on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimiu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: XMCplkak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajimaabirirod on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yazireybaha on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreySpeab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tennieyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqoqiemaxsomu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiavg1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julidms on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizhz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julinmk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardslomy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julitla on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exifega on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipawidum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertGyday on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: giqehokerumo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexco1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipemaby on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidvok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottcom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vbktyfasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edabigud on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPruck on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheltonjeoda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucxajopoget on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertevani on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaats on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aetavaqojucaq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axisidux on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejecuzip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioAwaig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenpug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephensen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elefehidsowe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogibogi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dbneifasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianagac on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneynax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nidokut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thereseam11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Zalasasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvidurapame on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifixamebizqo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aileenda60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujihuwufwome on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udufotep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oljacirimiyo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandixw1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fivipodi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jimecoto on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugahaaburewo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noWarPutinHuylo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyday on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alowqauuguq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asanuysupexex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoubeqovire on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugevicexeduk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etezcahiviwg on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SexWifeLob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbotte on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcisp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylounk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenutign on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iteuvemaemoxo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnjo18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricexc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbneczasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deeqe16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rn18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GilbertPraps on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traviscoida on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardoju18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevengp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisajw11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julialak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamespneut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IvanMedaWeemn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RiarivEmaws on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: classicpat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardRah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelineic2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyhk2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracedj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosadv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efrosinasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TXsPhaxia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamekaib16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertAgero on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrexThish on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ty1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Freddieboync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Heathwer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirksg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucqtipthyihub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethnex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenasj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaylatz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlacm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avafx1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyzp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroslmc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnzhelikaDrins on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usuyiyiheibei on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: armandozv69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertawags on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trishathich on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryTib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthermr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacksonTup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaih3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fzesxhd on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshagb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonawava on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentrom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasogy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerjak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarionTak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josezins on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeruro on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billieasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharonzu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jarrodloabs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujumoxuelqzx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldorivy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yqRFgYfl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterme16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gamerdef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sorryaustralia.com on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vebzankef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeNat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willardmak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altadc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandiNuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwards9Eteby on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAdupt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PlexorK on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RamiroLem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saherezam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LauraPow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHoino on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThelmaSwace on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lb18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waqujikumiva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypaync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinmup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agifiivigumow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JimmySex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennDob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: omimuhe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gh3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olulewum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iansd4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEramb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesoxync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelTuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentSpeld on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielayu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beulahoy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arijekivi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caledutevibi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hermanawarm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelutera on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlere on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamgen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JorgeApage on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennJap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardquasp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogernat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigplusa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMoits on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kizfar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aeryuogsa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardciste on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniebm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GordonFrows on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesglymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianskync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewGon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheqeleijaht on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephaster on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: YoungWrova on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesKaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldROb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieltoopy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasontop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasWoste on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipabato on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BestTranceoi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TravisGow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyDed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upebacevo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stefanieoy2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldbearl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrelweilm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michealfug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carrieec69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldSaW on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieSmoli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellPow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesmet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanld18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgefw1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbvkzybyasymbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrinBen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailvu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelstarp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldfug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffordpet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleeok11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karllw11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephDap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AugustRed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stepanid on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyHoods on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DustinDow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Garlandfal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissazy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBeera on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeye3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianPat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiewu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasAxona on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: typodarseisp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettieuu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacobbi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyhq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephstoon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednasa69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyOxice on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganjv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henrytum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeVok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardVoize on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willieicoto on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obosevokib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carrollnounc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obikapal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesAmats on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenskinc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: branditm16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyked on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindang3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasPib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rafaellm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyoexapy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejeuqeuvuini on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesLef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannevm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
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Post by: miguelca2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaiu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinJex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avitgop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenIsoff on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiezp60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iacalawu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldBig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PutinImperator on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChicrDob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LelandNOn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglasibum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victornit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennislow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessefus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenaau1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephReult on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aosveshe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidakg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamianCot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackjd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VernonBrums on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernardwed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenso1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielet3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldrq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqemoyuvub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinLor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caraze3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeriiw2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hm11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielsax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randykit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamvc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariedj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomassow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harrythoma on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertFeany on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenfogma on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemarytc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachelleeq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterweert on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorgus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldki60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneylq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencemf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justinced on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorstafe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldgep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyfk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randaldon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardallow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Curtissib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElizabethMus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWonap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganoe2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donovandep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliampaX on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneyt18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonsnuth on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertHot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyNat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CrystalTob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylouhq2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeighaGoafe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jhkz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teresakat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertcew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdrulp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BasilCep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: moniquelk2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BuySoftPrash on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Daniellug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynje1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevengef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kermitmeeva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyrusmox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyRoony on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manuelauz16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertisoke on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hazelzp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Miltonevaks on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryRarne on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eikuvene on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealzu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynuo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayetl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amigiuesecf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricecc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreytot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnell69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacobGrike on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldZeway on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesEldex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Myronshock on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HaroldCax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randallvax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utatuwtoser on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MyronVed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerioz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewSow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannega18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryerors on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleysj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewGrort on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSpeen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilyfe18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencegt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pantonjab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrydenty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioGebra on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leandrowat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarrow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAnope on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xp18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GrahamDryNc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomilx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestersy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenitoByday on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shirleylk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ervinriz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FranksBom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornacf60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldevero on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniopdo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryCip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyqn16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubuprule on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blanchewc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clarkpluct on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardIsona on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyReark on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karile60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyWah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPrait on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottefl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremysah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieds4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Егоркаbug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rakipro on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceuu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HelenWeito on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlvinPed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciazt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarryTaite on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angiemj3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanfOn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larryfh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasnUt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicelz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriexw1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyWet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldtoups on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DwightGYCLE on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieav4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipNekly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: id2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesStell on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleygem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipty2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSmers on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellfk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardSnorn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Earlechoig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyzj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettio18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenexern on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisece3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldspamn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SonnyMof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandimi1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietwf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnefc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisTog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cindyaj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesitemo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertfex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthapr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPainc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louby on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelvat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EfuiAwsPag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melanieoh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Led on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevemef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelog4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryHag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BorgesHig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorraineva1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewbep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisee69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaao2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RashadMof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linahv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DexterVag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonJex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ephessoca on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisKek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryrhymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinKak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jefferybriem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneymb2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Palmerhaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinkeext on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesamild on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonynj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tommyundon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneiw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanan69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArchieDax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaea3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertodova on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertPrill on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardocof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vincentij18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BruceviemO on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanled on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixou3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightrem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maralb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marisaphilk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacquelinenit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jennahok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonasynC on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryvah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dallassob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sonnyges on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogeraxorm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardCaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWoomy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joleneda2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kyleuc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coolerproo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertHed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephzc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noellehy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiepx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameslex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidphabe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julianfloky on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannata18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyrix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieau2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernale18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyomidudqmuz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewak1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildagx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellann11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CesarFef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinatoto on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewrEeda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ProgdomPaync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuellok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorainejw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inesvk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyZinge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyzk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ralphsyday on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeFrabs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heathered1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ritabab923 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacibq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexandraqj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZERAH on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliftonfj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TyroneGrods on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelStuse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonix69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephclova on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ueoqpuma on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderfn2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancart4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisja16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamrasp69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurwanty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andremw4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bipnase on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampiept on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terencepiott on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pennykj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessicade4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewledia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topwaterpro on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilpt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiahm11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChongHex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebarz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidhoary on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hillaryza60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliafa1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guyen16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edafeifave on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernieheash on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bryandauts on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelasp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: au18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BurtonAffix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenEvalo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gregorygrind on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Montynit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethkit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWhory on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithqb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coryvm3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliaar16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isdeelidud on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennySix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andydd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owezofevur on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankSlake on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeniferzn11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xiwukbeq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exchangeproo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciahz4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ohahizer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyCes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesjes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryMam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ey16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: addieyq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirtouristpira on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaronoc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonySpefe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelseire on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPoope on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethwhash on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardroppy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylqa2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fkooolayur on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard355 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonixe3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iepoyuj on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariego11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelles on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard843 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenflozy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard785 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carsonlusia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciagr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertum4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasbe3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Olafjab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilDadly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasbuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasstymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredcarry on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameshes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maggiehe11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewNoW on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnadr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ts3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryhok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryjab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vw2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertTwiva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janeal16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesmup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethTilia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aluifilis on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinJok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndreNep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderkd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubenwl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KonkuApelm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielGug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamieOvefe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Melvinbaism on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edadiruqedelo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheldonrot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: consuelofj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannenk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiefu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertZenry on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oribehokadid on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyyq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreyug2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etupidoq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffzoown on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwcibeobewiw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urezevehow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenRoose on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriqn2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldenged on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steventoilk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enoluruke on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxinepp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard476 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeyupog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesusGaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leroyenave on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawnyw2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieec4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewmut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenegj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latashanb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisboile on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertmix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaritaap3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniena16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyniz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonorpl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupesh4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolhp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethfw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luisoy2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isutacgi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainSpafE on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliapd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylaz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Fidelsup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carriexm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgieeq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: neilah3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCrins on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianBut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaeltuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uguzizusli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: provenexpert Ger on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipSerce on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieef16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidtut on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vselediSlerm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaretss60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankNok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandahl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynarry on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantaait on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitalp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyjn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidcoerm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolji11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idkozcofomeq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniowoulp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolafc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hs4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NormanJobby on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharybm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: viceehi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ls2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertDobre on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldRoosy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSiz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nellvs60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SylviaFed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheilawr18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheyz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenziz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorazn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sydneylunny on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelcrype on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latishazs69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninefj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bethyb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williegycle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterExces on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traceyrig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitaig18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordondk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbrahr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaRunny on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aviskp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelldp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RicardoTrunc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaCogma on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willardfh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Berryjaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinAlago on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysmish on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandonBum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertiw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrinityElulk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelfus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansysy4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anniexg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojitojihqo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BryceNeulk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sujiwakugeho on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeroyhEr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieat2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieph18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alonsofum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ibbubuer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gm69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnecu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OrlandoGah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uragatije on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NewtonSpumn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: su2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicath3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelten on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waynedilia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettezp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishann16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceygi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ernestbilky on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Unaajab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ry69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenFet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckoning on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizadf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hilaryes18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellalg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itexuep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisanp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erlejab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentfx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlakl60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCoimi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijapilisuca on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harryheisy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: timothyra18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olakautaqox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyodiel on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleynp60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: royzf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hicayoyeseko on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berniceab18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryToxek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryjop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasrew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniatx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: triciapk1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CliftonTew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterfj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydePes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankBoype on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emacuis on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterelifs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisonpm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: double pane windows hew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraam3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelSwick on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AngelTycle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxieaf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipwet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardDiC on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciara16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildaqh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollyqt60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyapc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyEmemy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winifredgt60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alberteluse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesLoams on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleqf69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriyg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: megangk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKeerb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andreavd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendyjo16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DashWSteek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelwap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAtofe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinug3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgeqk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KathrynMig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaelhoalf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentnl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancedw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaos2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanfaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanvqz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronniedc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldthofe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelliewh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightdub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jolr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steveagoft on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishakg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvafa1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewpaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWeals on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertpag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamGed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamodord on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelreM on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LloydOpels on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasilisa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithCurce on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejutacikujus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparofz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenawu2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevineralf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onieexibclkku on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esterox1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWaymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethamu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michailxtq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylougg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisNer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardCix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithay2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afehacoxizi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorSaide on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertiepg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonmus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fernandofy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertquard on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharild on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyOrbig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondasb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniely16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aezigidixuuy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinek18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suzannesq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlieny2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oupzujedu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciks4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Luckyemike on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvaod1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willaqm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewojmixozase on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BYEugeneIrraxjexdex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithfh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyLef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilbertWouse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbaap60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GabrielZen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufutiejojolig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tabithakz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ayuezuzavazep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joseog60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyie60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anowvuk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciamj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjenry on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwintip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidTum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetso1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linwoodweque on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Allanleaps on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: puxoepeyonati on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeabs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannawx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MilesVesia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malindahl60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jefferygl16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbreap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbymz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonbounk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shamoprumb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calliebo16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blackpeacer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettebj3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisret on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroskix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliayj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coocapamp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Uniloksnapy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okixazewequzu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleysc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieloccam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StewartExany on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseyic4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudefl60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofevuvaef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gaxetoxutoa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolinahj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williear1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sdvillpap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinTorry on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertEtept on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianEmeve on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerutite on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAlbup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAMine on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianfj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariact1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zaimpadly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryGaups on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ralphyz16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Basement Window Jaild on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardGek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolqv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenacela on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerarddrync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jameszh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katieqr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnierg1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SammyCep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgienc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjoita on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ui4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanettelr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolahz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedrossur on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieec18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellOpick on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanabt60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenebo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonan16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyCic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamscoof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieErora on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneysix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinaaa18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: irenehr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidspoub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adafr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orafu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyuragotudoj on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosehc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umuujuy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldapeme on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSloda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryloucd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otitajadomav on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfluom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antidracer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineme18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ovabomu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floratb2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloisesp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ru3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzayunwagn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandakg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliaju69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettafq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneit16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamTwide on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eduardoso4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janetteft3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyohunowimezu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomaslof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coletteql16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pv18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightdq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishatg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneyc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertAdeva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldlo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneybak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughjc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janoi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onigiyvezak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aspectomtage Window thymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanjr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnenm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanemp60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zeyuyigasotia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynqo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanayy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikawb2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyku3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glendajt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gayym60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewebuwegee on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jodilb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannego11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariems2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VasyaCoere on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillatg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owjehojaupapo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wm16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: galegn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wallaceeb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RachelBip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glencc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilydc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oxayoxuwokoia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisdx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriqueti2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinemc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariezw1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pedroca4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandadr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancaqf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agikeliiqea on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonkv69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epjikopakik on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChesterFelve on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenafd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Agongoodo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithwh4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnzy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elinoree3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HeidiFiedo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbralx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredojw1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephsappy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanpf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: camillejh4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizazf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariyaDug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinPoisy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AhmadneS on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorpe1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealvs69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidnup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renesr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniaiw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olanb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BdondomSerop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinemm3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianemp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afohasxufokej on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiazx60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverSwemo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofidagqalas on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceyjy1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richarddak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanfm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisrg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Majorkar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElcosPaymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyaru60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisyk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendidy1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normasj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylar1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ec11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reqaricene on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onidemasleki on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandiexf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lanceds11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiayc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookela60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdvillKat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utinemibiem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisMycle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ezecayahe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vavadloups on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AuraEarn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosieuo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrixf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: quximijufeic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelcx3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffce60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shaneim4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelyngt16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinkib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerryuv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathRox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennydk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriau2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiejc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenzotoimi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krystally1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandwg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreycr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremyng69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leslieao18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sonyavx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loraoi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinthuff on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertapa1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lauranl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinagy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DorEmaws on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricesp69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinabw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesaub1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnieih2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquemd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fi4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Favorfet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyxp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogultade on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chelsearv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobts4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynct11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliajj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyar69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolekh16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerieqs4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertintax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbruse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielez3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leagp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mathewix16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Horacespado on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenbp69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KoddacEaMC on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andyzf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimefg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obolorav on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jy3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleuf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amyab11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coleendm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorasr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otepaqaoeluzo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenem69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZAABET.COM on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseywd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melaniexy60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uitiyavsec on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fritsusHek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannerb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasClody on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosannebt3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmellagr69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WargamingPlugs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darleneux18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allennk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizxg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zm16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: savannahfc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishayg11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphliery on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracygt2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonbe3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethayf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: staceybb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbywp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marinapn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldkk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidGlymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezyw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herbertgf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taahenimooax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueritemk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneni60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebaph2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednada3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinakl3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normaht18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ni16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeox1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoinetteka60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qerijiwi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphNep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: male on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: matthewod69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajofixoro on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azozinuviguh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettecu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itehuqiwguusa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onupakrarunac on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opipejago on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBeigh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenqk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayi4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanqv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simonene11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dashkasevasts on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerine11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josieng16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucindaan1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chadelel on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyyetedaoli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephruH on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patrickuj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmavu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusrek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinsit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: UC-tex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanneeq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ir3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollypa11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencedh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissaut11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hefavageniwa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: merlenc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgerag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxucaze on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jicakoyuuge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeldadm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosgk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iiculoba on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yihazetop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brucely69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrisnm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyigisaqorhi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidCrots on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyls69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ateehuse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: verabj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorriexd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendykt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerrywl3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aprilnm3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fs16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: egupkohi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandawt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverWhork on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicezm69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eddiehor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosbv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anthonyxp69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaNam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Raymondclupt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardraity on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iafiloq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyty2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cynthiagq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efiwawule on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ekcaevdojop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenezl11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabellajc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanns11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonybu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahja69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifacwiot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanbs60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardneeld on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinesl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afivxuw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ozetidi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rondael69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonnieup18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: almaz2demn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoesphSnany on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyia3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannonst16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannesl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evagb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: garyyk69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frederickbi69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Inquise on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliviadd4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyahaekonc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrahb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasityox69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrienb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinzo2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christianxp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldmoome on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ParfumCop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarencenz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marahv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthavk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gladysec11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxdelubua on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jocelynvo11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osocaxkewz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uwudaxuco on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellezp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elvafh16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparoms18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixiwepiyo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgajw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wildaqa60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganbx60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevievedm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidRoozy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiqueni2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulisagajo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryPhype on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hegasajahu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pg888asia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arnoldia2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenye3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TeresaWeift on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaxy2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynxj3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jordonbob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Postlap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianneon11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: plasdtic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronniejoppy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karaow2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthergn18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimgc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: natashafg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyJulup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikavi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanadoz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldieax60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannettewq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sportsbet365 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lenush on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulaf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeBruceval on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lerkblf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorywb on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynag11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidamf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarenBah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epemeweh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikkracini on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessiets4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenayu2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annettehz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufadiwuwemim on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommygx2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vezoyuguopij on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: steveol2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrenbex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattiesc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannezp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhulky on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tylerref on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EugeneInids on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ininibyaziono on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonbv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uosoruhafurfe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WendyGot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MinnieRekly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ki2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kevingy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Odorert on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adeleya3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renett18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulettejr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saracs1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephacinc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HorecaPuple on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uworuwaqanim on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandievi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonawu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryFub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertBab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EmanuelVix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topsamaraGuapiff on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joeow16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindaay4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleyclawn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofefome on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarlosNes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonnz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonyonege on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thurmm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Malcomtag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ny60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kuwukemafem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edgargq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscook11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evaud69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinahd18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoa11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycecb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: howardgr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sherisp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsiepv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magikcomik on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanazs18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letayu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyun18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caigryBub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenhoupt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upaqecigogihe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altajh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelnax on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PatrickJox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianqd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisoc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christifn11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanlt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleoe3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvophy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianToosy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arnulfodot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellemt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffmf60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfonia on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesNak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellraw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieai11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianfuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijepigh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nikkier18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilahc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieot69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendydg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FordireRok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryTah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryoxync on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: endeaws on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenza60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axidagodolizo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvagx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: troywx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshallfq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredame3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivamx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kb60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katesn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneso11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikecr18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellira1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithye16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zs3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenww4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithrr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacywt2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieei3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureliejpik on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziriziveyeea on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianejz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcioniy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ou11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikvsw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyfa16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwainkex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinfw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelmb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertomq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneac1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatricejh16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margerynd4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robnnj on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jomwins on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriakf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candacegs2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robwnz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycekp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniagh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kariww3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerianj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannierh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansymc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagangi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsavj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardab69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseyyg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnezu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelesi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannazd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelayf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahaw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scottka3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleyjg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracefa60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willieer69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valarievn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyno18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williamou3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanapq2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apriliq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldxy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanfl60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandako2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckyxs16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyio18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherynce4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlenezk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susanawk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettefo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrakf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineid3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiave1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerriya4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynoy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altayf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcellazi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graceqf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarl16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertabr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinpe11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abigailhg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrijy3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malloryng2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamdj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethavr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolefz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonwyu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidWrara on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolafg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanishatz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pamelamf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannaak18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelxm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesHew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleywa60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinana4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneql4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneyiw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginaey3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondaro18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julipbn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseynf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardzn16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzpfs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charliehh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondaqv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julioim2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmiewx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leighaq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniwo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinlm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianadoa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: od2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredonaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mabelju69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winniewv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayeiu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettevx1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesCob on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaKic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitamf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiefu18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwennt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidPesty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterlok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimdc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbawh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KirbyPancy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergbsn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieak3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kayeou4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaod4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldTal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellysb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickgl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarrollCoign on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephHaith on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bl16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinChilK on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielmp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinatf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evaxmu on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effieyj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mitchellmj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennck4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterjy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecildv69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiseuf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinShoms on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaqv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherrypq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariewr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellayi18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: norany18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriazx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommylm69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tessamt16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanwa11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisard2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinaeh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikatm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneln11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancheyc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankeliva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinneim16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenexo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertNoinc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFuppy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williameveli on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasitywn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgiacb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darylwj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estermj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeraldmog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opheliatr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: javierkc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandwef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariemb2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raquelza1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mistylb18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninebj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrieke69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: flossiepv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellalf60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrellfc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenemt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipERETA on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrafa69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleydep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliaxg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elizaae2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toddlc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynyi11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolineih1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiadj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliquebx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughsb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonax69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlieyg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudinefh3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: duaness18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WarrenHeata on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlessot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixgt2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terriedo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellemk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahms2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mildredsm16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciauc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenAcoug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynzh16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pq16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinepb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelwex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebeccalg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracievy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneync18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordantt18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeHause on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrunoFeF on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannacn3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornavd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyakf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariettafg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoniaof60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephinewg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgamq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelgc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonkg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethagriz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineml11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinewh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisadu69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: russelliv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raezw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldaf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darcykk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliaml69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michaelue3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miaee2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonke2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettuj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graciegw4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanprade on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyxr69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erepjapse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dustinue11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvasa11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottCycle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPlale on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldNunda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonSat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremywt60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariyw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephRaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: np16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrary2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarcusBlils on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnewi2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kentze60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarprags on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyny69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emmavl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniejh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenage11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaov60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tenuall on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: selenabp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanaln2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lyndact2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ce16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenayk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patriciayy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlyn11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deliaqd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietss11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tinafo60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorapb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellack18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleexn3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofeliaic16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alantm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dm69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylvo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrwinEduth on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseysr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPoofs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JordanHeace on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrynef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieyb60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardwer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathewKet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolapi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglaspypet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinagp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdx3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithho18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariek1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vo4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelaoa2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patux60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliazk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karynif3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlahs11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellieiw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinaxe2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanuc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinby16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marisolva18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodoreql11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zg1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheakj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineuu60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adams69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieko2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollieho4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganyh16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiaol16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dannyxt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derrickmu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollierz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: queenuo11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannhn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineqg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresep69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinayn2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldiepr18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianur3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevieveca3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiebm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisyq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinaba16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SerRado on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancasn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancepu60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathywo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernets60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tylerac69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelljf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretss2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaiw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellagr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mi69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitake4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fanniepy1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phylliszj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldap1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hy60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenefn18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinati16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardhc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuagaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CraigGon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianaws18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollievi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charleshon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelinezi11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannazo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisall16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirstentq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haleynx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phyllissh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larayc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryow2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louuz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldshuTs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninetr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: araceligy60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracise60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannlx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnBiose on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankovell on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamquiCt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicoledn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesNease on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltervon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelajm1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qm69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolaxp60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioneq1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellmc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorxp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancazc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: spassub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: territj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ErvinDwesk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliavp16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidayu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricefo60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasen11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doreensb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollyoz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietrf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietmc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrauc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlti69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertlb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleytp18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillyc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayebj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentax3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ll4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscohn3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markak60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillianys4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustama18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laureniu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikidei on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliayw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ninacp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitalx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliend60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonabini on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brucebrurf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leahky11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycegv18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robiniv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leavu2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardar11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiejg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinegx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnin4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughzn11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniezm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolamf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hectorbu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcac60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricatx60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelfh3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondyu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzcn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sabrinaat1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonniewe4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judyee60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: md18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ju16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneed4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliaud1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GradyVor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernestmp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stellayz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleyhd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyvi69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniams2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannabd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisatr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisak16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamKah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliews4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronafbr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pf69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guysg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ol18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnebh11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriadr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ettasp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldinequ4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bessienu60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdeard on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianyy1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickiee3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivyoc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencenw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickyjw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monicaib69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florineyl1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizkc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauriceyo4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieho60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremyetete on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinesv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinapz16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianniq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianai60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaer1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gp4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginarc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnxg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randydt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daisyqm18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luelladt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracieland16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizbw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alejandrasx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennierw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettesm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneyq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyhq18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrapm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyeb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorwk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentlj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wj60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinej60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ingridwx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardAveno on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidDirty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupeet69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretyy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxierg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judymi2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertobr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iancr16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreys11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catherinept3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieey3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rogerqf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briananf4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenamg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davidjc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williambam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rochellegf11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseygz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinji11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannamn16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettejv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elviarq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gertrudetv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ba60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sadielw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: murielgi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deenafv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurajm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannfw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albakb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredasb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredil4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelasz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elbagq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinevk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgenw4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eddiejs2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michellegx2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorieeb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelitalp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: li4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinle4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianqo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenagr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debravx2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erickahq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marthalr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodorero2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainemr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dalegl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertaoc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annazz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrytj16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesRex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annmariela4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannemn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianuo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoricgo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patsyem4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danqk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqt16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewellyi60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriln69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: el60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnsu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnvz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryci16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonih18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirandajg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Venomguactop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliffordhc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: whitneyrv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitaji3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuals11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guygd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenqu1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtaurf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisks16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimpv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgetxk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estellakf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmelacv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryPem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcionay69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sueyx3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermankw4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kellymef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rayvv60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harveyga1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankok60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylwm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenelq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezch3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorez60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermanvm60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleohi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinacx16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgealima on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normama18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionneyr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylbd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Annaanaks on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linasx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiejg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genavn11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeSoday on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberlynv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: um1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetqe60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonoc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floydpx69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertoPen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiepv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: feleciadl18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agnesio2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordonrg11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancedi11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomigy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: os60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginadx2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottezz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipswert on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeDor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardcof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kylerb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenebe69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathaniu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suemo18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roseannmu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietgl11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenuj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilajl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimebl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yeseniall3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: in1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzte60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dk1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lacykd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenhk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ij1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarioSorma on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lolacat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyFal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastance on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannapj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioiq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittneylf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenorabb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahl16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollyzk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katess60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kd1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankiems18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebekahdq3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrainefg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniegj3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnuw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileener1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldLaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claralx3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniefo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyjg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldMedly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaBok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliokic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldJat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasWaind on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAvala on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NathanWress on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielMup on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Glennscupt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryMor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: byronvl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlescy3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondFus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaseydk60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
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Post by: raulca60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noelleoh4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriegw11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Natashaemn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasit3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorispc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathleendy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monaxo11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenrot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecilexd1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphHauth on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardpoill on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leemo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelabz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariMosse on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielapj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glengr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnna16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainezu2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonigh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianafn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquels2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peggyga3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyw11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellywt1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nannieog4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquerx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilagb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleengu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tyronelv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettebu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagankm11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardolb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmypk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idahh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelije4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorwf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenelk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasnaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseywa2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernonjt4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keishapr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nzryxcrujoq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandietu69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmanr11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonkm2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekt2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pa11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyala4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinar16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernell11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chandrajp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephaniecr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanoe69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonzt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mattieqg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinekl60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waynefs4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denadz1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleymw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffke2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robinsu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlietow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannysw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantawjy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattyhk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapl3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenjl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineef16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharyel69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronnieqb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kp69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adriennely60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiekr2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghanml2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simoneye4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mn16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvincd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonwl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxb18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldRulge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaof3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahod2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ac2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ul18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleyg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyjd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyacf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosettaut11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightie3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabelletq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannawe4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryesown on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IraKinue on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryPyDay on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniaca3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenejn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyoe2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinatp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karinfk2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubyfl11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldxk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldcd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normabo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deborahoj69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseyze1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethht69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornaos2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredfb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmatc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morriscj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineus2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: seanqi4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tiako1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karljr18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evelynvv4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: if3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 8playfortuna-Sip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosanneyc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniahz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbaraxl2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manueluk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelsd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelBessy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinezp16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AmberTor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudemk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyee11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharrongu16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisdk11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonazb3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelyntc69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlinecj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustagi4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenext11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasax1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryiz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ex11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalcx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ww2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MasnaLnaiva on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittanyde1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheaig4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanqr3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorbof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaqm16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lousu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondragh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandakp11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracynn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleose2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottedd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterez11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioklq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephrix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MerlePal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheliafe2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennysc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenzt18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickigc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randycy3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnmc1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyax2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicholejo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephanienq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalqe16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandycq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldtug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernanu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sethry2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinalx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariannefr60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nancyux11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katykw69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ladonnato16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliace3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawngd69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnehx11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiedf2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandypx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewly1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessiegk18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahv11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestertq2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentnn1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinezg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacyps60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettqj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattieez2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaxy4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelbyrd11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarakh3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerha1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louiseac3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hiramwhody on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightsa2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillayf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadornu2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiees2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cheribc16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolauy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: faybh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: px2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellyqy4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillietg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debrase3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannego69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ad4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ie16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: justinebl3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lewisub1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannaoz2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clydedy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradpi1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparotd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannaft3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretdu11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiazh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniasc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brendanc11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doraoy1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kendycef on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellibi2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danapg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josiekq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vx18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: le3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucialv18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonko18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eleanorhw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roycecrype on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettehf16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelvd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tashamh18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsygi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marissakk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamFrest on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henrydl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelego11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettmo69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lulamv1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edithle69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilayx4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenyr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cg18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kc3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthagb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgegq60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josefajv2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresfy16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyfo60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracietz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allanng2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertohi3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnienk16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katharinefg3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JudsonZex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrycu4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryhp2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jt11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyhr4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yolandaux60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katyez4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliaqq4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charitysy4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altasc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gloriama1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanqs4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynevb16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedb1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiegh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patnd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virginiacd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: serenaoe3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannetc18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraoc4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellarg11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: crystalke4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susienh69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottieqd60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailzd16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaqv3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikasg2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kzkazpap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ebonyrf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredxh2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bradleysmugs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendire11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceyo16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnniemz60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliekp1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearliefs60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianaot60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markqz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francescaxy18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryqq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ig18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celestelr1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyld18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jesusjj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomizb69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenaiq2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margiezk1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertow2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricewf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghandi69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninelm3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaqh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafu69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineuy11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiatc60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieob16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandph1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phillippi16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimema69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianuw18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wd3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracehu60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpiers on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: va18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyalb11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamsek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosepl4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenbf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseycw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikud3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nz16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucillevz69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ia2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmabn2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanjj11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinald60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansyhp3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckygs16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynod1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottiegp16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyyj2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylit1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audravt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davejo1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adaeg1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jannaer16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florenceua4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliexg4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deantf3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albaiz11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielatj1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylxa69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneqg69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerido1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leors69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxl11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinert11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliveld4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PavelZen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kq69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiajy69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineyi1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattipk4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenabm4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondrasg60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherieio2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycenf69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roslynca69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlav8 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristennz3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saundralt16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannhc2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeqt69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorlw16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effiebs11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeyz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsyut11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latoyaot3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martatb4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenar4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinefj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thelmavr16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiall69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivexj4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonyu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaeo3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alysonet1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denisexv16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herminiayd2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laraiw3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlineiv18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenoraaf69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertolf18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloreswt16 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilaaa2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphoni on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaildol on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiefe11 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kinlochnez on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniozga on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelCop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teddymeete on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keganvoms on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinbip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AldenFek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertPlore on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PercyLab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurcruch on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielmew on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldJourA on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lamaslalo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maxwelldic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PaulaInvof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreapam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eugenehub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wallaceglips on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioDop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMiz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardBit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Francisdrice on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphick on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenderCashwes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenjor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneyblacy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesstymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryLal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamDem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuazz18 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElceDiulk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankCox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AliceGeque on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maximdom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LesterUnale on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesvaP on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Orlandovug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyaccip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesPQ on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pancakes som on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ttaletfnxz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasKip on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ryanger on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardknolf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidacini on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryboara on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marthaliady on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oibuntuzusazi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardarord on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelClali on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Johnnyshush on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltercoego on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephMappy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WallacePhymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEsola on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinAvarp on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergiodek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelpak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardShova on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonydic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesDaymn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randyneest on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WayneVum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wendellineri on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MajorIcock on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Abrahampum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CalebDudge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevintow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianlag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dannydic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethanypE on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrooksGop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidgat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelbof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieTom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothylox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesunser on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphdit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottPet on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IsaiahFox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesonend on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardkek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billyswish on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilburSerie on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSaula on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEvast on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesbuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanAmisy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreybam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNok on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardprife on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurevora on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankHek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryDic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyBen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankAmite on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyDek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenGer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardHUB on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidVoido on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonTum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorShubs on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chrisbeado on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisDah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeAnese on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentBed on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElliottSoort on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasliery on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennisdab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesSoide on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesFLECT on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronZes on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigoweda on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonnieSaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewTwisk on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeswops on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamNit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AdrianDor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidwag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSlito on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessemoing on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonyClave on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldReort on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeromeshevy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shawnvonge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mathewbog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryPAr on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyJorgo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEdino on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerHOW on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewIntep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilRhids on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jaimerus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marlonruism on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianTuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyHiz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrancesaBag on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamsPah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiriamBus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidQuery on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: homastor on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamTon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VodaKaH on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ViktoriyaGop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeple on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DarrellGaisa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StephenEsoft on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentarild on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clydesab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlorn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louissek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentcriny on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasgar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MitchelVek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamonTak on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBuh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisTug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyHow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianFelty on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFraug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertRof on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFibly on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldBub on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephblodo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamToils on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephhib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdrego on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanfab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gordonles on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnCloge on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PerryNab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardUnolf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AllenTuB on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinHaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brettjen on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainCat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephWar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianDop on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Merlemat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwinZep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shelbyweito on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewtar on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PrestonMex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellweddy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieOricy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barryvicle on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarrisEStiX on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MartinCox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryVus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelOrals on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: micheleez4 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTus on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesseRat on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyMiz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNeN on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntoniowIlla on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidLot on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredhense on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamexeds on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lavillpap on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephViexy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDuelm on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenadefe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioWer on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelamite on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorRhiny on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandfeext on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyRek on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottDaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyHex on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clintonsog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevendom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Enriquemig on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusmum on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPsype on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobhog on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaVaf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aaronpaild on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HermanDEK on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsix on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhoils on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamCab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinMoump on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielcom on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredfal on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHib on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldHouch on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyGrice on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyNox on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsieng2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarveyDoupt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanvow on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xtoniamhjab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenbug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariolEf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Candaijab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephvoz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottusero on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertobell on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewkit on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bali_tloi on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martajl69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glenbu69 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyvf1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SOJofFRJT on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondahi8 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgehab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlasu3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lldFvIXz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carloswam on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avawk3 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickzw60 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaFab on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colettexw2 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Theronsaw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maha-Svanah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharido on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithdx1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldjep on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinajh1 on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlrn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVon on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlpv on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlelh on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyPic on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanajbt on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuadausa on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergxnl on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasShusy on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igoroem on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: btaletndmf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonmsz on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ntaletarqe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergrtq on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Voltugovug on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaloo on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronamqg on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Irinhmn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julioxc on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliyfn on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evanxf on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evazpe on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikiuln on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorizcw on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidxla on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzaxx on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzyki on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
Real good first attempt.  And welcome to the board.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithNah on April 21, 2009, 10:02:08 PM
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Post by: aazemon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oovdafinuu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AmyPef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uidizalbapafi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rapidgator on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: awedacoduwi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anatsoled on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oviridziokaki on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JulianLounc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: irumepuhe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ufuducugoq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilxuori on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erkgovinivuxu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iorahifidoti on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: utarubsa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Briancen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kittyvh60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SHADYGUY on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MicheleTraic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamAbago on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SusanLoago on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antonioemk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: urokibakirvoj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Derekkef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesassiz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Randallat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lyndahr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aiimkotovipi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ClydeSobre on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lmihaEmaws on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berylhq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maryannen1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijuxodo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nicolejw4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MirnaArext on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Douglashix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogerknorp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mollieax11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqkizadaroc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mirr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robynug3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ciekasiwobir on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogerchora on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miguelid11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamVaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hydrazm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonitaxq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesdox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyubedujula on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barbaramaino on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivedy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejidatacocu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: azugixic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristiech11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GerardSox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raymondlj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: larrysi1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shawndo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bobbyinaps on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Grissom fan on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Grissfan on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: algolycle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: icapokome on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: equxuiyg on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RandyTal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avuoroaqahe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: exupuled on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardnuamb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avimozu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: igimimeh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iminevoatejit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ileraefa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: davepv3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hopehi11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ricardomu60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maricelany60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnnaPag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edeqiba on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antonioxdv on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterdsr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: curtisxk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opoqilafuy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obumeexisih on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Banezasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mudosgeha on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uozhzzis on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asgiqopeduli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ituxuhupite on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: osipudork on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aredoya on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ahepenayadu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pauelllimb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aforacacakef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uqxunek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aidaaq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candiceic69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesHOOKY on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Duglassig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: udapeqom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureeyaj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanetteco1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamindus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stephenpv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linktrunfab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesleycc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonpk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aurorady16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RittsEmaws on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennistn18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertwab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArthurUntor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evozihay on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinglync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojomeriq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaotivuz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aheisuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 24vulkan-24.com on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ivmfuqamsous on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: friedafz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelliefi18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewelmq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenkw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: osivilinfim on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentMuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audrayq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derricklz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasKah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apapechuv on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NudeStripperlwedia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: atokieqehoy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eyeprusa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricazn18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emuqeqxomara on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marlenehu69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alexislj3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aguiduri on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iufobiefaqaco on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMorge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lynnettefx2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardhaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: reginaeg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christime2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: concettanf69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietdj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dwaynezh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldcow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xocifoq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uuipoci on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aahezjaxxo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarinaPag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iixivak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: revaas on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oaliqopehu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aqeetofafirul on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uruibawoq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulenodobocul on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajiwunu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: famRisse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anndroPag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Justincak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maxuh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: utuefizuaj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Konstantuszdk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Keithket on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: georgeus2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewlob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Victorxct on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brookefz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shellygs16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janazi18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iqosecomeb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Albertmib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emiliajl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uvixedukeqoev on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipihafapjataf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uzperosibag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luzdz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: idjuyfodinafa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgepayof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oronatac on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannaqh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaredas1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianNog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipecepa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: icojucoukibi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BobbieSpado on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelti69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ameliakp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Roberthax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Floydbiabe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zefelubok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetlanazqz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viktorirpx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronaary on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphBaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EduardoNeets on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StanleyChede on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidafd4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeTrorn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ivantlq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujeyirunatil on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ramirolopay on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CecilBax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronazax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: imnopen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisews3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorcek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergcgw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okeaabe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oteyehal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MorrDrody on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: krismf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stasennqg on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcuswz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lydiabv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RaymondTob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stasenmhx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobxwt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joanneve60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LadyLauraAnn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlesbz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnnyks18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Philipsnark on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ik3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: esobikapav on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jayqe4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianen60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francinekh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaitlingr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beverleyvk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shellyok3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fynjysxasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uziteudu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipzc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixicyigyuvid on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: inuvadavexoli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentHoW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliajo16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituanakob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PandSr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genehr69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nettiecy60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MariaImals on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williammuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uhepapomiyan on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinayq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Nundendurf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lewiszep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulub4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufejewox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urijsehnodw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyKig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubeqenaljgij on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oniyusugisi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: socorroht60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aurinradasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrenv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancarb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorlf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenag69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitaey11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvajo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wtozizusano on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anumeteginiye on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: burenokdalty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoxisni on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeslieBip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elenakg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoutiqueMipsy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredjs16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inohaodonehe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivexotexexuqm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zkoniumijolut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: acoqiqaful on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jamiif1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelibv69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gilbertreore on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MonicaWep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vilmatq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dostavkaideasmt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marinaypm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vtktfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurenfu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: newveshimt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ihorawit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oletumuti on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawr69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PeterTal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewPreog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ksifuwisef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiecu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azcefeq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scousa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancewy60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanxic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usimabyqoce on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: warrenly4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esebeli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: silviazg1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hro1wardBob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasuht on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanzgz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChapligahaM on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PetrAndreevich on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inufatec on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yfcfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethrg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipoexayoaxa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antonioaba on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ufkbrfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lolalo60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dfkthfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aaxidagij on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: morganvk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pearlqb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: upyuqica on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ecaqnuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracykl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eqatuzimogo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ofozekipadat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uzagdopegak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aubarkae on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vasiliyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BradleyHab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oocuqilo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: heyubat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: br2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: up69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MiuBS on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: orihiazaqkuno on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vfkfyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: frannh3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ulomowguok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ojoteonacez on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raqueldi4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ucietib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aliliriletu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clarissadk2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ojegerigezo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Everettmooto on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ktifasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bettyekm3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bogdanbwi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iclegesobupo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Eldarzgs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antonioowd on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deidreim16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ib18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetlanapgy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leonardoo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: guvihuhijousi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetllkd on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RaymondJex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: go4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeannela1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ivanrvx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oe18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ejoliehojix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dadarikixe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sergfla on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaredtd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viktoriyog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipoewohobaya on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ilushikklu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viktoriuyb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: terryqn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ilushikjou on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: georginabp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgesig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lizai4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evucuqed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katherinetk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adhileuq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: OnenewlimitsSl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vuhutwda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MaximummaxSl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ubezoluohu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edwinagk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yv18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albertyt18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anitasy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgeoffit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leilabb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugenenq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: masirqatai on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipudibi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leworihokuhez on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: djdfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gingerzy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: afayiyjx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erikabs2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: enriquerc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ifogiqakedifa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ufuurxulij on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: efawiubxabaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ijahomufcaku on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesclene on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nettietl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: unohodetustef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: paulinecg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: osodaqoqi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iuposej on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oweqomekehqi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcidk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marimv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertayy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: apeyivoxeviy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: abbyzi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raegx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uomijetoman on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcju69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudianq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ajqerel on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ellenuv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: umejerezkguti on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sidneyvm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vivianjk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kristinajxs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: veronicapk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Gholbizarasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Juliblx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iyugexejej on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emoluvoa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ehewutigufic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: afiwisuaelewh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fayls16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: virgilnu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzbfe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eohegozwo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilososehuyedl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesJourf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Veronatvi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: axaliwofenl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vaijelow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kristinabpu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erqikukutug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: imeroze on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iwapujoeweexu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: axecefebagim on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ub3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nadyaasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levzba on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vilianarvh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: markof4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ln60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eudukciraifm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: soniagq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ejinayoloaveq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ooxkumowev on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levdbs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uzaatikir on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Geletapasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anezoho on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iromuhcon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarvinMes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jackgs18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levyxu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levwme on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: usidwam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ceciliagu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levkoo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levhtg on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Levdiq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WalterKAH on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julimiu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: XMCplkak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ajimaabirirod on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yazireybaha on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreySpeab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Tennieyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eqoqiemaxsomu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: letitiavg1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julidms on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julizhz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julimak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julinmk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardslomy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julitla on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: exifega on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannaq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ipawidum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertGyday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: giqehokerumo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alexco1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Phillipemaby on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidvok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Scottcom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vbktyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edabigud on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardPruck on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sheltonjeoda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ucxajopoget on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertevani on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vilianaats on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aetavaqojucaq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: axisidux on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ejecuzip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonioAwaig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stasenpug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stephensen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elefehidsowe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ogibogi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dbneifasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vilianagac on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rodneynax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nidokut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thereseam11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Zalasasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uvidurapame on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ifixamebizqo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aileenda60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ujihuwufwome on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: udufotep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oljacirimiyo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandixw1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fivipodi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jimecoto on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ugahaaburewo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: noWarPutinHuylo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Cyday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alowqauuguq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: asanuysupexex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ucoubeqovire on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ugevicexeduk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: etezcahiviwg on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lg11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SexWifeLob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelbotte on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcisp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marylounk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenutign on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iteuvemaemoxo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shawnjo18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mauricexc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hbneczasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deeqe16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rn18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GilbertPraps on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Traviscoida on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ricardoju18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stevengp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisajw11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julialak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamespneut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IvanMedaWeemn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RiarivEmaws on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: classicpat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LeonardRah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelineic2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlyhk2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracedj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosadv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: efrosinasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TXsPhaxia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tamekaib16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AlbertAgero on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TrexThish on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ty1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Freddieboync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Heathwer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kirksg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ucqtipthyihub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kennethnex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: helenasj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kaylatz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamlig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marlacm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avafx1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracyzp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pedroslmc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnzhelikaDrins on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: usuyiyiheibei on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: armandozv69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertawags on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Trishathich on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JerryTib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: esthermr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JacksonTup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilaih3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fzesxhd on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marshagb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesTon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brandonawava on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vincentrom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andreasogy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogerjak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarionTak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josezins on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eyeruro on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Billieasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sharonzu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jarrodloabs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ujumoxuelqzx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldorivy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yqRFgYfl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hesterme16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Gamerdef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sorryaustralia.com on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vebzankef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeNat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Willardmak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: altadc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrandiNuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwards9Eteby on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAdupt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: or18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PlexorK on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RamiroLem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: saherezam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LauraPow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHoino on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThelmaSwace on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lb18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waqujikumiva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamBal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Timothypaync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevinmup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: agifiivigumow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JimmySex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GlennDob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: omimuhe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gh3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olulewum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iansd4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyKic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KennethEramb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesoxync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelTuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VincentSpeld on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracielayu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beulahoy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: arijekivi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertCag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caledutevibi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Hermanawarm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelutera on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesPlere on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamgen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JorgeApage on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GlennJap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardquasp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogernat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Craigplusa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamMoits on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kizfar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Aeryuogsa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardciste on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelBum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: minniebm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GordonFrows on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesglymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brianskync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewGon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uheqeleijaht on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephaster on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: YoungWrova on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesKaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldROb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danieltoopy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasontop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasWoste on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Philipabato on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BestTranceoi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TravisGow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BradleyDed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: upebacevo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stefanieoy2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Haroldbearl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Darrelweilm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michealfug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carrieec69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldSaW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WillieSmoli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RussellPow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlesmet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jordanld18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jorgefw1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hbvkzybyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrinBen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gailvu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelstarp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Geraldfug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Cliffordpet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ashleeok11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karllw11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephDap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AugustRed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stepanid on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TommyHoods on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DustinDow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Garlandfal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clarissazy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesBeera on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesWed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maeye3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianPat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amiewu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DouglasAxona on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: typodarseisp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bettieuu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jacobbi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candyhq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephstoon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ednasa69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TracyOxice on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meganjv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Henrytum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeVok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardVoize on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Willieicoto on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: obosevokib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Carrollnounc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: obikapal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesAmats on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenskinc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: branditm16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeffreyked on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindang3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasPib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rafaellm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oyoexapy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ejeuqeuvuini on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesLef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesGox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: diannevm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miguelca2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlaiu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinJex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avitgop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenIsoff on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mamiezp60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iacalawu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldBig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PutinImperator on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChicrDob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LelandNOn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Douglasibum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Victornit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephpak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dennislow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jessefus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sheenaau1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephReult on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aosveshe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aidakg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DamianCot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jackjd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VernonBrums on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bernardwed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kenso1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gabrielet3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ronaldrq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iqemoyuvub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinLor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caraze3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeriiw2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hm11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danielsax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Randykit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miriamvc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valariedj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomassow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Harrythoma on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertFeany on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenfogma on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosemarytc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rachelleeq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Walterweert on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Victorgus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: geraldki60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sidneylq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lawrencemf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Justinced on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Victorstafe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonyLog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldgep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbyfk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Randaldon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardallow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Curtissib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ElizabethMus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryWonap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meganoe2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesGed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donovandep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliampaX on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaimevz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ca60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laverneyt18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasonsnuth on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AlbertHot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JefferyNat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CrystalTob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marylouhq2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LeighaGoafe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jhkz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Teresakat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertcew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertdrulp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BasilCep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: moniquelk2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamMob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BuySoftPrash on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Daniellug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: madelynje1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevengef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kermitmeeva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Cyrusmox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BobbyRoony on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: manuelauz16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertisoke on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hazelzp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Miltonevaks on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BarryRarne on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eikuvene on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: michealzu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: madelynuo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fayetl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amigiuesecf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patricecc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeffreytot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamescot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lynnell69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JacobGrike on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeraldZeway on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesEldex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Myronshock on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HaroldCax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Randallvax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: utatuwtoser on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MyronVed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kerioz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewSow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juliannega18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jerryerors on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kelleysj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MatthewGrort on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinSom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KeithSpeen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emilyfe18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: florencegt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pantonjab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Terrydenty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonioGebra on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Leandrowat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Oscarrow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidAnope on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xp18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardhat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GrahamDryNc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: naomilx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hestersy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BenitoByday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shirleylk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ervinriz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FranksBom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lornacf60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Haroldevero on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antoniopdo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JerryCip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lillyqn16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ubuprule on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: blanchewc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Clarkpluct on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardIsona on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyReark on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karile60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreyWah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonPrait on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlottefl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeremysah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ruthieds4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Егоркаbug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rakipro on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clariceuu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HelenWeito on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AlvinPed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aliciazt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HarryTaite on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angiemj3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: NolanfOn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Gof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: larryfh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasnUt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candicelz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loriexw1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BillyWet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Haroldtoups on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DwightGYCLE on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jessieav4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PhillipNekly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: id2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesStell on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Wesleygem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: philipty2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChrisSmers on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janellfk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardSnorn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Earlechoig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbyzj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harriettio18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenexern on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisece3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Haroldspamn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SonnyMof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandimi1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: julietwf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dionnefc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HollisTog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cindyaj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesitemo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertfex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berthapr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesPainc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williampep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louby on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samuelvat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EfuiAwsPag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melanieoh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Led on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldnax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevemef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rachaelog4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryHag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BorgesHig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorraineva1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andrewbep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louisee69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alisaao2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RashadMof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasFex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: linahv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DexterVag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonJex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ephessoca on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DennisKek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Larryrhymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarvinKak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jefferybriem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: courtneymb2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Palmerhaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevinkeext on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlesamild on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tonynj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Tommyundon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joanneiw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanan69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ArchieDax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wesleyei11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilaea3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertodova on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HerbertPrill on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardocof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vincentij18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BruceviemO on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Nathanled on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: felixou3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dwightrem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maralb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Marisaphilk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jacquelinenit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jennahok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonasynC on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jerryvah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dallassob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sonnyges on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogeraxorm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ov11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EdwardCaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamWoomy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joleneda2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kyleuc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: coolerproo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertHed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: josephzc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: noellehy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: freddiepx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jameslex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidphabe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julianfloky on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johannata18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Timothyrix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jessieau2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ernale18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eyomidudqmuz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andrewak1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hildagx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louellann11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CesarFef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: phoebehc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alvinatoto on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewrEeda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ProgdomPaync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Manuellok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorainejw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: inesvk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonyZinge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: randyzk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ralphsyday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeFrabs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: heathered1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonyLom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ritabab923 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stacibq16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alexandraqj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ZERAH on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cliftonfj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidlam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TyroneGrods on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ManuelStuse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: allysonix69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephclova on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ueoqpuma on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alexanderfn2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: biancart4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: francisja16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tamrasp69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Arthurwanty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andremw4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bipnase on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williampiept on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Terencepiott on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pennykj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jessicade4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andrewledia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesGag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: topwaterpro on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardWaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: virgilpt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nadiahm11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChongHex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cassieyf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonysek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rebarz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidhoary on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hillaryza60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corneliafa1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: guyen16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edafeifave on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bernieheash on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bryandauts on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lelasp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: au18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BurtonAffix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenEvalo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Gregorygrind on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Montynit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kennethkit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamWhory on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: keithqb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: coryvm3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ameliaar16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: isdeelidud on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KennySix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andydd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: owezofevur on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankSlake on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeniferzn11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xiwukbeq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: exchangeproo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marciahz4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ohahizer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonyCes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesjes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HenryMam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ey16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: addieyq16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mirtouristpira on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aaronoc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonySpefe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Manuelseire on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonPoope on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kennethwhash on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardroppy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cherylqa2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fkooolayur on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: smard355 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jonixe3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iepoyuj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosemariego11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samuelles on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: smard843 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Warrenflozy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: smard785 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Carsonlusia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aliciagr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertum4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thomasbe3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Olafjab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VirgilDadly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andreasbuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasstymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alfredcarry on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jameshes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maggiehe11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewNoW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shawnadr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ts3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Larryhok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Henryjab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vw2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertTwiva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janeal16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesmup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KennethTilia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aluifilis on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MelvinJok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndreNep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alexanderkd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rubenwl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KonkuApelm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DanielGug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamieOvefe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Melvinbaism on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edadiruqedelo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sheldonrot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandieh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: consuelofj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maryannenk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katiefu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertZenry on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oribehokadid on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cathyyq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: audreyug2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: etupidoq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelBor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Cliffzoown on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iwcibeobewiw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: urezevehow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenRoose on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: teriqn2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronaldenged on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Steventoilk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: enoluruke on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maxinepp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: smard476 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aqeyupog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JesusGaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Leroyenave on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dawnyw2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tammieec4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andrewmut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilenegj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: latashanb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Louisboile on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertmix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margaritaap3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nanniena16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeffreyniz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leonorpl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lupesh4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carolhp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisabethfw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luisoy2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: isutacgi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrainSpafE on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angeliapd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidMow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cherylaz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Fidelsup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamlox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carriexm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: virgieeq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: neilah3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesCrins on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianBut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rafaeltuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: colleenwy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uguzizusli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: provenexpert Ger on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PhillipSerce on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandieef16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidtut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vselediSlerm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margaretss60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankNok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amandahl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonynarry on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samantaait on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anitalp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beverleyjn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidcoerm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carolji11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: idkozcofomeq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antoniowoulp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lolafc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hs4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamescox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: NormanJobby on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zacharybm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: viceehi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ls2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertDobre on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldRoosy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesSiz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nellvs60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SylviaFed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sheilawr18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uheyz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenziz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorazn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sydneylunny on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelcrype on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: latishazs69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertLak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanninefj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bethyb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williegycle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WalterExces on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Traceyrig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lolitaig18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gordondk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: barbrahr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoshuaRunny on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aviskp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darrelldp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RicardoTrunc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoshuaCogma on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: willardfh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Berryjaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MelvinAlago on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonysmish on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrandonBum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidJum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertiw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TrinityElulk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelfus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pansysy4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anniexg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ojitojihqo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BryceNeulk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sujiwakugeho on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LeroyhEr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonnieat2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonnieph18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alonsofum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ibbubuer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gm69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yvonnecu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: OrlandoGah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uragatije on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: NewtonSpumn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: su2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: veronicath3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Manuelten on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Waynedilia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bettezp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tishann16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: traceygi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ernestbilky on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Unaajab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ry69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenFet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beckoning on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lizadf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hilaryes18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ellalg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: itexuep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melisanp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Erlejab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: millicentfx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlakl60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertCoimi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ijapilisuca on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Harryheisy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: timothyra18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olakautaqox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uyodiel on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stanleynp60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: royzf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hicayoyeseko on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berniceab18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TerryToxek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Larryjop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasrew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertNic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugeniatx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: triciapk1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CliftonTew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: peterfj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ClydePes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankBoype on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emacuis on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Walterelifs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alisonpm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: double pane windows hew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sondraam3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ManuelSwick on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AngelTycle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: roxieaf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Philipwet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardDiC on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aliciara16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hildaqh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dollyqt60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tonyapc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JefferyEmemy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: winifredgt60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alberteluse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesLoams on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: danielleqf69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loriyg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: megangk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyKeerb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andreavd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wendyjo16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DashWSteek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Manuelwap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelAtofe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zz16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caitlinug3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jorgeqk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephtit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KathrynMig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rafaelhoalf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: millicentnl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lancedw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamlok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alisaos2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bogdanfaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bogdanvqz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ronniedc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronaldthofe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kelliewh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dwightdub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jolr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Steveagoft on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tishakg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marvafa1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewpaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesWeals on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Albertpag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamGed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamodord on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelreM on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LloydOpels on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vasilisa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KeithCurce on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ejutacikujus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorizy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amparofz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: magdalenawu2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevineralf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: onieexibclkku on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: esterox1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryWaymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lethamu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michailxtq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryWer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marylougg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HollisNer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LeonardCix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meredithay2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: afehacoxizi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VictorSaide on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bertiepg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wesleyei69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasonmus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fernandofy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertquard on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josepharild on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesfaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreyOrbig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vondasb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: minniely16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aezigidixuuy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: martinek18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: suzannesq16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlieny2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oupzujedu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marciks4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Luckyemike on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melvaod1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: willaqm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ewojmixozase on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BYEugeneIrraxjexdex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: keithfh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelpat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DannyLef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilbertWouse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melbaap60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GabrielZen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ufutiejojolig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tabithakz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ayuezuzavazep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joseog60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kimberleyie60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anowvuk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luciamj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertjenry on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwintip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidTum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: violetso1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Linwoodweque on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Allanleaps on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasbag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: puxoepeyonati on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephCeabs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shannawx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MilesVesia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: malindahl60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jefferygl16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomastok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephbreap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbymz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasonbounk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shamoprumb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: calliebo16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: blackpeacer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yvettebj3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Louisret on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pedroskix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emiliayj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: coocapamp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Uniloksnapy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: okixazewequzu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bradleysc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danieloccam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StewartExany on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caseyic4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudefl60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ofevuvaef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gaxetoxutoa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leenv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carolinahj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: williear1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sdvillpap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinTorry on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertEtept on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianEmeve on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rogerutite on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DennisAlbup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidAMine on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vivianfj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mariact1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zaimpadly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryGaups on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ralphyz16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Basement Window Jaild on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardGek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolqv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenacela on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerarddrync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jameszh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katieqr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonnierg1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SammyCep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgienc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjoita on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ui4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nanettelr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leolahz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedrossur on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonnieec18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RussellOpick on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deanabt60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorenebo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leonan16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreyCic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamscoof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlieErora on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rodneysix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katrinaaa18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: irenehr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidspoub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adafr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: orafu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uyuragotudoj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosehc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: umuujuy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronaldapeme on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSloda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryloucd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: otitajadomav on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfluom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antidracer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristineme18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ovabomu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: floratb2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ra60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eloisesp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ru3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzayunwagn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lawandakg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliaju69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettafq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marleneit16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamTwide on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eduardoso4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janetteft3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eyohunowimezu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomaslof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coletteql16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pv18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightdq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tishatg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: geneyc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertAdeva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: haroldlo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rodneybak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughjc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janoi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onigiyvezak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aspectomtage Window thymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanjr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnenm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanemp60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zeyuyigasotia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynqo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanayy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikawb2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyku3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glendajt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gayym60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewebuwegee on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jodilb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannego11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariems2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VasyaCoere on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillatg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owjehojaupapo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wm16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: galegn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wallaceeb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RachelBip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glencc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilydc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oxayoxuwokoia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: curtisdx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: enriqueti2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristinemc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariezw1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pedroca4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandadr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancaqf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agikeliiqea on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonkv69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epjikopakik on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChesterFelve on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorenafd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Agongoodo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithwh4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnzy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elinoree3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HeidiFiedo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: barbralx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alfredojw1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephsappy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanpf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: camillejh4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lizazf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariyaDug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinPoisy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AhmadneS on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: victorpe1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: michealvs69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidnup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renesr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: toniaiw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olanb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BdondomSerop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corrinemm3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dianemp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: afohasxufokej on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: letitiazx60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: OliverSwemo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ofidagqalas on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: traceyjy1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richarddak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deanfm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dennisrg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Majorkar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ElcosPaymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tanyaru60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dennisyk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wendidy1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: normasj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darrylar1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ec11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: reqaricene on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: onidemasleki on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandiexf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lanceds11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leticiayc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ra1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brookela60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EdvillKat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: utinemibiem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DennisMycle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ezecayahe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vavadloups on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AuraEarn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosieuo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jerrixf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: quximijufeic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelcx3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeffce60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shaneim4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jacquelyngt16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alvinkib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jerryuv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MathRox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yw2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jennydk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: teriau2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbiejc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lorenzotoimi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: krystally1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewDog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rolandwg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: audreycr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlyr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeremyng69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leslieao18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sonyavx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loraoi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevinthuff on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertapa1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lauranl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinagy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DorEmaws on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claricesp69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katrinabw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lesaub1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnnieih2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dominiquemd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fi4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Favorfet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimmyxp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ogultade on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chelsearv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobts4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: madelynct11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ameliajj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: abbyar69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nicolekh16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valerieqs4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertintax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertbruse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: danielez3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leagp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mathewix16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Horacespado on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stevenbp69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KoddacEaMC on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andyzf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaimefg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: obolorav on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jy3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: danielleuf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amyab11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: coleendm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorasr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: otepaqaoeluzo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karenem69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ZAABET.COM on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindseywd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melaniexy60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uitiyavsec on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fritsusHek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juliannerb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DouglasClody on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosannebt3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaimevc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carmellagr69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WargamingPlugs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darleneux18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: allennk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lizxg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zm16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: savannahfc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristenbu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tishayg11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Adolphliery on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracygt2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miltonbe3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lethayf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: staceybb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbywp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marinapn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: reginaldkk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidGlymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: inezyw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: herbertgf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: taahenimooax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margueritemk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laverneni60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rebaph2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ednada3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: celinakl3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: normaht18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ni16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: penelopeox1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: antoinetteka60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: qerijiwi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RalphNep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: male on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leenm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: matthewod69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ajofixoro on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: azozinuviguh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lynettecu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: itehuqiwguusa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: onupakrarunac on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: opipejago on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephBeigh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gretchenqk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: franciscayi4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ryanqv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: simonene11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dashkasevasts on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kerine11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: josieng16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lucindaan1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Chadelel on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oyyetedaoli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephruH on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patrickuj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zelmavu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jesusrek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevinsit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: UC-tex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deanneeq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ir3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pollypa11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lawrencedh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carissaut11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hefavageniwa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: merlenc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgerag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uxucaze on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jicakoyuuge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: imeldadm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: milagrosgk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iiculoba on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yihazetop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brucely69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chrisnm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oyigisaqorhi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidCrots on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mindyls69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ateehuse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: verabj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorriexd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janicedf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wendykt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kerrywl3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aprilnm3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fs16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: egupkohi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wandawt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: OliverWhork on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candicezm69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Eddiehor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: milagrosbv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anthonyxp69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IrinaNam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudiaxj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Raymondclupt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardraity on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iafiloq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rodneyty2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cynthiagq16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: efiwawule on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ekcaevdojop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: imogenezl11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: isabellajc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ryanns11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tonybu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hannahja69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ifacwiot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ivanbs60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardneeld on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristinesl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: afivxuw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristenbn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ozetidi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rondael69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lonnieup18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: almaz2demn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoesphSnany on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shellyia3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shannonst16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: diannesl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evagb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: garyyk69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: frederickbi69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Inquise on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oliviadd4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iyahaekonc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: petrahb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chasityox69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorrienb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: calvinzo2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: christianxp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronaldmoome on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ParfumCop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clarencenz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marahv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berthavk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gladysec11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uxdelubua on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jocelynvo11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: osocaxkewz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertMam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uwudaxuco on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rachellezp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elvafh16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparoms18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ixiwepiyo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olgajw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wildaqa60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meganbx60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: genevievedm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidRoozy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dominiqueni2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ulisagajo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JerryPhype on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hegasajahu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pg888asia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: arnoldia2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stevenye3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TeresaWeift on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ramonaxy2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kathrynxj3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jordonbob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Postlap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marianneon11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: plasdtic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronniejoppy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karaow2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: esthergn18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimgc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: natashafg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyJulup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erikavi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetlanadoz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: goldieax60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeannettewq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sportsbet365 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lenush on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raulaf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LeBruceval on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lerkblf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Igorywb on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jacquelynag11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: freidamf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KarenBah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: epemeweh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mikkracini on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jessiets4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sheenayu2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: annettehz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: enriquedm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ufadiwuwemim on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tommygx2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vezoyuguopij on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: steveol2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Darrenbex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hattiesc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joannezp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardhulky on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Tylerref on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EugeneInids on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ininibyaziono on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldnaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KeithSen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nelsonbv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uosoruhafurfe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WendyGot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MinnieRekly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ki2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kevingy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Odorert on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adeleya3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kn2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: renett18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: paulettejr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: saracs1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephacinc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HorecaPuple on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uworuwaqanim on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandievi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nonawu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JerryFub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertBab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EmanuelVix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: topsamaraGuapiff on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joeow16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindaay4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Wesleyclawn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidJef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ofefome on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CarlosNes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clintonnz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonyonege on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thurmm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Malcomtag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ny60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kuwukemafem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edgargq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: franciscook11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evaud69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: catalinahd18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margueriteoa11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alycecb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: howardgr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sherisp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elsiepv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: magikcomik on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juanazs18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Timothypit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julizow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: letayu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mindyun18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caigryBub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenhoupt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: upaqecigogihe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: altajh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelnax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PatrickJox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesSem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adrianqd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louisoc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: christifn11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jordanlt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: daleoe3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesBib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewvophy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianToosy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Arnulfodot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janellemt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeffmf60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasonfonia on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesNak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Russellraw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lessieai11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brianfuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ijepigh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nikkier18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leilahc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lessieot69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wendydg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eloiselw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FordireRok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HenryTah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Henryoxync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: endeaws on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eileenza60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sa69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carissarg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: axidagodolizo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marvagx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: troywx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marshallfq16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alfredame3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ivamx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: glennhq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kb60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katesn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loreneso11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mikecr18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellira1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xd1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: keithye16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zs3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ellenww4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meredithrr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stacywt2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mollieei3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ureliejpik on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uziriziveyeea on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dianejz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: concepcioniy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ou11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ilushikvsw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stanleyfa16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ov18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dwainkex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caitlinfw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelmb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertomq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marleneac1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beatricejh16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margerynd4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robnnj on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jomwins on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juanahm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valeriakf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeannehm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candacegs2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robwnz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alycekp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: toniagh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kariww3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valerianj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fannierh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pansymc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meagangi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elsavj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: richardab69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kelseyyg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dionnezu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adelesi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joannazd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelayf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sarahaw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: scottka3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shelleyjg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracefa60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: willieer69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valarievn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracyno18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: williamou3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juanapq2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: apriliq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ronaldxy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ryanfl60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amandako2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beckyxs16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandyio18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katherynce4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darlenezk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: susanawk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanettefo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mayrakf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristineid3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leticiave1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jerriya4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gwendolynoy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: altayf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcellazi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: graceqf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carissarl16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bertabr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: calvinpe11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: abigailhg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jerrijy3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: malloryng2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miriamdj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lethavr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carolefz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Leonwyu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidWrara on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nolafg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tanishatz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pamelamf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joannaak18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maribelxm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesHew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shelleywa60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katinana4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loreneql4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: courtneyiw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: georginaey3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondaro18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julipbn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caseynf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: richardzn16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzpfs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charliehh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vondaqv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: julioim2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimmiewx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leighaq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: toniwo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marvinlm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vilianadoa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: od2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alfredonaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mabelju69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: winniewv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fayeiu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yvettevx1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesCob on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoshuaKic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juanitamf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: billiefu18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gwennt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidPesty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Peterlok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimdc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melbawh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KirbyPancy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sergbsn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: debbieak3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: franciscayn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kayeou4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosellaod4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldTal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellysb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rickgl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CarrollCoign on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephHaith on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bl16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JustinChilK on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gabrielmp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinatf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evaxmu on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effieyj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mitchellmj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: glennck4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterjy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cecildv69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiseuf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinShoms on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosellaqv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cherrypq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosemariewr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellayi18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: norany18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valeriazx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tommylm69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tessamt16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanwa11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisard2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinaeh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikatm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneln11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: blancheyc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonynon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankeliva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinneim16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenexo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertNoinc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFuppy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williameveli on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasitywn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgiacb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darylwj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estermj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeraldmog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opheliatr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: javierkc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rolandwef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariemb2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raquelza1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mistylb18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninebj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrieke69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: flossiepv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosellalf60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrellfc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenemt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipERETA on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrafa69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Wesleydep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leliaxg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elizaae2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toddlc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynyi11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carolineih1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiadj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliquebx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughsb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonax69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlieyg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudinefh3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: duaness18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WarrenHeata on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlessot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixgt2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terriedo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rachellemk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sarahms2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mildredsm16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciauc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenAcoug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kathrynzh16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelinepb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Angelwex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rebeccalg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracievy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: courtneync18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jordantt18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeHause on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrunoFeF on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leannacn3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lornavd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kenyakf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mariettafg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardsam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: antoniaof60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: josephinewg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olgamq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maribelgc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miltonkg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kennethagriz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corineml11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristinewh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louisadu69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: russelliv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raezw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: haroldaf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darcykk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juliaml69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: michaelue3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miaee2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nelsonke2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bridgettuj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: graciegw4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Normanprade on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: candyxr69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Erepjapse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dustinue11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melvasa11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ScottCycle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelPlale on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldNunda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonSat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeremywt60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shariyw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephRaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: np16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: myrary2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarcusBlils on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dionnewi2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kentze60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Oscarprags on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wesleyny69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emmavl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanniejh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: magdalenage11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ramonaov60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Tenuall on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: selenabp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shanaln2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lyndact2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ce16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: helenayk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patriciayy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pearlyn11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deliaqd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harrietss11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tinafo60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dorapb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louellack18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ashleexn3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ofeliaic16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alantm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dm69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cherylvo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IrwinEduth on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindseysr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardPoofs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JordanHeace on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Terrynef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jennieyb60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardwer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MathewKet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasdog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nolapi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Douglaspypet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katrinagp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kennethdx3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: judithho18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shariek1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vo4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelaoa2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patux60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amaliazk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karynif3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darlahs11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellieiw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: celinaxe2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jordanuc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marvinby16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marisolva18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: theodoreql11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zg1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dorotheakj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alineuu60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adams69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ruthieko2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dollieho4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meganyh16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nadiaol16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dannyxt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: derrickmu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hollierz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: queenuo11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maryannhn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corineqg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deloresep69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinayn2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: goldiepr18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adrianur3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: genevieveca3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: susiebm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avisyq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelinaba16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SerRado on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: blancasn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lancepu60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kathywo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lavernets60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tylerac69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darrelljf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margretss2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alyssaiw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosellagr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mi69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lolitake4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fanniepy1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: phylliszj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: reginaldap1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hy60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sharlenefn18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: catalinati16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leonardhc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Joshuagaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CraigGon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: julianaws18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: colleenwj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hollievi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charleshon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ik18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margueriteoh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: madelinezi11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannazo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melisall16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kirstentq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: haleynx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: phyllissh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: larayc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: terryow2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louuz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldshuTs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanninetr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sa60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: araceligy60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracise60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannlx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ShawnBiose on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Frankovell on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamquiCt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nicoledn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesNease on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Waltervon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lelajm1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: qm69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lolaxp60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marioneq1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: janellmc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: salvadorxp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: biancazc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: spassub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ok4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adajw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: territj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ErvinDwesk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: liliavp16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: freidayu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claricefo60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thomasen11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: doreensb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pollyoz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harrietrf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamBus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harrietmc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: myrauc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlti69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albertlb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: phoebehc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kelleytp18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jillyc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fayebj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: millicentax3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ll4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: franciscohn3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: markak60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jillianys4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: augustama18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laureniu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vikidei on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: liliayw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ninacp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nitalx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lilliend60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brandonabini on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldtat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brucebrurf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leahky11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joycegv18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robiniv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leavu2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: richardar11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dixiejg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinegx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnin4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hughzn11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nanniezm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nolamf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hectorbu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ca2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marcac60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patricatx60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelfh3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raymondyu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luzcn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sabrinaat1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lonniewe4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: judyee60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: md18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ju16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: geneed4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ceciliaud1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GradyVor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ernestmp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stellayz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bradleyhd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tonyvi69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugeniams2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelinawl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannabd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisatr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: curtisak16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamKah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: milliews4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Veronafbr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pf69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewvat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: guysg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ol18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnebh11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: valeriadr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ettasp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: geraldinequ4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bessienu60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdeard on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianyy1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vickiee3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivyoc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencenw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickyjw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: monicaib69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: florineyl1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beatrizkc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mauriceyo4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jennieho60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeremyetete on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katherinesv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dinapz16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianniq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ianai60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaer1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gp4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginarc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shawnxg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: randydt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daisyqm18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luelladt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracieland16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizbw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alejandrasx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennierw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettesm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneyq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rodneyhq18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mayrapm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlyeb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: victorwk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brentlj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wj60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinej60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ingridwx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardAveno on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidDirty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupeet69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretyy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxierg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judymi2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertobr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: iancr16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deidreys11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidMar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: catherinept3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: debbieey3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rogerqf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: briananf4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: magdalenamg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: davidjc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williambam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rochellegf11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindseygz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edwinji11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johannamn16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lynnettejv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elviarq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gertrudetv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ba60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: henriettapv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sadielw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: murielgi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deenafv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laurajm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leannfw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albakb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alfredasb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaredil4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stevekq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adelasz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elbagq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nadinevk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: georgenw4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eddiejs2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: michellegx2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorieeb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelitalp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: li4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melvinle4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vivianqo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorenagr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: debravx2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erickahq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marthalr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: theodorero2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charmainemr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dalegl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bertaoc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: annazz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harrytj16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesRex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: annmariela4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: diannemn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marianuo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viktoricgo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patsyem4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: danqk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pearlqt16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jewellyi60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loriln69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: el60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnsu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnvz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kerryci16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: miltonih18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mirandajg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Venomguactop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cliffordhc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: whitneyrv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nitaji3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joshuals11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidlab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: guygd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eileenqu1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephtaurf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeannehj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: francisks16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kimpv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bridgetxk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: estellakf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carmelacv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryPem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: concepcionay69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sueyx3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hermankw4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kellymef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rayvv60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harveyga1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: frankok60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berylwm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sharlenelq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: inezch3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: salvadorez60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hermanvm60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cleohi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katinacx16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgealima on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: normama18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dionneyr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berylbd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Annaanaks on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: linasx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amiejg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: genavn11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeSoday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kimberlynv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: um1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetqe60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: allysonoc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floydpx69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertoPen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiepv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: feleciadl18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: agnesio2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gordonrg11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: terrancedi11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: naomigy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: os60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: georginadx2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlottezz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Phillipswert on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeDor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardcof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kylerb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugenebe69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jonathaniu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: suemo18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: roseannmu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harrietgl11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kenuj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilajl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaimebl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yeseniall3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: in1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: luzte60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dk1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lacykd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stephenhk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ij1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarioSorma on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lolacat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BobbyFal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomastance on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannapj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marioiq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brittneylf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lenorabb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahl16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mollyzk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katess60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kd1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: frankiems18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rebekahdq3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorrainefg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanniegj3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shawnuw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eileener1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldLaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claralx3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nanniefo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vickyjg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertMus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldMedly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoshuaBok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesGam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Juliokic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeraldJat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DouglasWaind on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DennisAvala on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: NathanWress on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DanielMup on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Glennscupt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GregoryMor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: byronvl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlescy3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RaymondFus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jj18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kaseydk60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: raulca60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: noelleoh4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: loriegw11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Natashaemn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thomasit3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dorispc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cathleendy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: monaxo11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lorenrot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cecilexd1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RalphHauth on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardpoill on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leemo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lelabz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MariMosse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracielapj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: glengr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnna16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charmainezu2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tonigh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dianafn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dominiquels2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: peggyga3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cassieyw11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellywt1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nannieog4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dominiquerx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: twilagb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: colleengu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tyronelv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lynettebu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meagankm11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ricardolb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimmypk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: anitasz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: idahh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aracelije4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: taylorwf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ilenelk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasnaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: caseywa2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vernonjt4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: keishapr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nzryxcrujoq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandietu69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: velmanr11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claytonkm2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stevekt2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pa11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tanyala4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edwinar16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorizr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lavernell11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chandrajp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stephaniecr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ryanoe69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claytonzt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mattieqg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinekl60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: waynefs4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: denadz1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stanleymw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeffke2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robinsu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlietow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CecilBes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fannysw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samantawjy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pattyhk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: henriettapl3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karenjl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristineef16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zacharyel69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ronnieqb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kp69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adriennely60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: billiekr2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meghanml2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: simoneye4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mn16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: melvincd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ramonwl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudiaxb18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeraldRulge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: emiliahw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: carlaof3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hannahod2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ac2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ul18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: daleyg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jimmyjd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kenyacf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosettaut11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dwightie3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: isabelletq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leannawe4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jerryesown on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: xc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IraKinue on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HenryPyDay on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: soniaca3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugenejn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cathyoe2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinatp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karinfk2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rubyfl11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: reginaldxk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: geraldcd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: normabo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deborahoj69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lindseyze1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elisabethht69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lornaos2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alfredfb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: zelmatc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: morriscj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alineus2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: seanqi4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tiako1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karljr18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evelynvv4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: if3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: 8playfortuna-Sip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosanneyc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugeniahz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: barbaraxl2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: manueluk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: angelsd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ManuelBessy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katherinezp16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AmberTor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudemk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandyee11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sharrongu16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avisdk11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nonazb3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: madelyntc69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: earlinecj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: augustagi4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lorenext11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thomasax1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kerryiz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ex11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: aw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chrystalcx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ww2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MasnaLnaiva on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brittanyde1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dorotheaig4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ivanqr3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Victorbof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: trinaqm16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lousu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sondragh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adajk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wandakp11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracynn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cleose2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charlottedd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: peterez11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antonioklq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephrix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MerlePal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sheliafe2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jennysc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: colleenzt18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vickigc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: randycy3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnmc1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cn69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vickyax2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nicholejo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ritaxf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stephanienq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: chrystalqe16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandycq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ronaldtug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: vernanu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sethry2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: evangelinalx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mariannefr60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nancyux11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katykw69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ladonnato16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: amaliace3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dawngd69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: glennhz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yvonnehx11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mamiedf2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brandypx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: andrewly1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lessiegk18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: juanahv11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hestertq2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brentnn1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corrinezg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: stacyps60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kn60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sq2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bridgettqj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: hattieez2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: benitaxy4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: shelbyrd11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sarakh3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gingerha1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: louiseac3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Hiramwhody on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dwightsa2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: priscillayf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: salvadornu2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katiees2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cheribc16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leolauy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: faybh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: px2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellyqy4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lillietg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: debrase3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeannego69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ad4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ie16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: justinebl3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: soniafv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lewisub1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: briannaoz2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clydedy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bradpi1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparotd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leannaft3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margretdu11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: celiazh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eugeniasc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: brendanc11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: doraoy1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kendycef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kellibi2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: danapg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sq11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josiekq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vx18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: le3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucialv18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nelsonko18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: eleanorhw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Roycecrype on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeanettehf16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rachaelvd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tashamh18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: betsygi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: marissakk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamFrest on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: henrydl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adelego11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: harriettmo69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lulamv1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: edithle69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lilayx4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ellenyr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cg18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kc3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthagb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgegq60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: josefajv2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deloresfy16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lillyfo60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tracietz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: allanng2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: robertohi3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bonnienk16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katharinefg3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JudsonZex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrycu4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gregoryhp2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jt11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bobbyhr4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yolandaux60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: katyez4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corneliaqq4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: charitysy4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altasc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gloriama1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bryanqs4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dwaynevb16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: enriquedb1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dixiegh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: patnd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: virginiacd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: serenaoe3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: diannetc18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sondraoc4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosellarg11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: crystalke4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: uj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: susienh69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lottieqd60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gailzd16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kn4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alyssaqv3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tamikasg2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kzkazpap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ebonyrf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fredxh2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bradleysmugs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wendire11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: clariceyo16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: johnniemz60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: milliekp1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pearliefs60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adrianaot60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: markqz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: francescaxy18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gregoryqq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ig18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: celestelr1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: abbyld18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: fd1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jesusjj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: naomizb69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: helenaiq2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: margiezk1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albertow2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mauricewf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: meghandi69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jeaninelm3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: benitaqh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: soniafu69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bernadineuy11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: claudiatc60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tammieob16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rolandph1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: phillippi16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jaimema69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ianuw18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: wd3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gracehu60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelpiers on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: va18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: tanyalb11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamsek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rosepl4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gretchenbf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kelseycw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: erikud3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephbok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nz16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lucillevz69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ia2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: velmabn2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joanjj11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: dinald60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pansyhp3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: beckygs16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HerbertRaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kathrynod1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lottiegp16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: mt18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: randyyj2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darrylit1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: yw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: audravt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: davejo1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: adaeg1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jannaer16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: florenceua4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lilliexg4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deantf3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albaiz11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: gabrielatj1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: berylxa69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laverneqg69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jerido1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: leors69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ritaxl11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: corinert11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oliveld4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PavelZen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kq69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: letitiajy69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: bernadineyi1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pattipk4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: magdalenabm4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: sondrasg60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: cherieio2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joycenf69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: roslynca69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: pearlav8 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kristennz3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: saundralt16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deannhc2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: maeqt69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: taylorlw16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: effiebs11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: penelopeyz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: betsyut11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latoyaot3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: martatb4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: karenar4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nadinefj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: thelmavr16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: letitiall69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: olivexj4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: jonyu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: benitaeo3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: alysonet1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: denisexv16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: herminiayd2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: laraiw3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: earlineiv18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lenoraaf69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: albertolf18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jasonfub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: deloreswt16 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: twilaaa2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelphoni on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaildol on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: susiefe11 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kinlochnez on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Antoniozga on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelCop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Teddymeete on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Keganvoms on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevinbip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AldenFek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertPlore on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PercyLab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Arthurcruch on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danielmew on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelbuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldJourA on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lamaslalo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Maxwelldic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PaulaInvof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Andreapam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Eugenehub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Wallaceglips on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonioDop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertMiz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EdwardBit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Francisdrice on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelphick on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BenderCashwes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Warrenjor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rodneyblacy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlesstymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TerryLal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamDem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: joshuazz18 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ElceDiulk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankCox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AliceGeque on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Maximdom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LesterUnale on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesvaP on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Orlandovug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Timothyaccip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesPQ on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pancakes som on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ttaletfnxz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DouglasKip on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ryanger on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Edwardknolf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidacini on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Larryboara on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Marthaliady on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: oibuntuzusazi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Howardarord on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelClali on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Johnnyshush on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Waltercoego on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephMappy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WallacePhymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KennethEsola on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MarvinAvarp on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sergiodek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Angelpak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardShova on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Anthonydic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesDaymn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Randyneest on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WayneVum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Wendellineri on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MajorIcock on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Abrahampum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CalebDudge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Kevintow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brianlag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dannydic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KennethanypE on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrooksGop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidgat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samuelbof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlieTom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Timothylox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesMox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesunser on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Adolphdit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ScottPet on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IsaiahFox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jamesonend on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Howardkek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Billyswish on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilburSerie on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChrisSaula on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidEvast on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlesbuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: NolanAmisy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeffreybam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertNok on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardprife on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Arthurevora on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankHek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryDic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyBen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrankAmite on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertLal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TommyDek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StevenGer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardHUB on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidVoido on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JasonTum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Donaldtum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertbig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VictorShubs on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Chrisbeado on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChrisDah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GeorgeAnese on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrentBed on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ElliottSoort on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasliery on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Dennisdab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesSoide on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesFLECT on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AaronZes on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Craigoweda on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonnieSaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MatthewTwisk on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgeswops on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamNit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AdrianDor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidwag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesJat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KevinSlito on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jessemoing on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonyClave on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldReort on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jeromeshevy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Shawnvonge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Mathewbog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BarryPAr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthonyJorgo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidEdino on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RogerHOW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewIntep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VirgilRhids on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jaimerus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Marlonruism on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianTuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BillyHiz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: FrancesaBag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamsPah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MiriamBus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidQuery on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: homastor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamTon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VodaKaH on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ViktoriyaGop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephCeple on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DarrellGaisa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: StephenEsoft on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vincentarild on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Clydesab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesPlorn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Louissek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vincentcriny on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasgar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MitchelVek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DamonTak on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RogerBuh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DennisTug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TracyHow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianFelty on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LarryFraug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertRof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasFibly on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DonaldBub on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephblodo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamToils on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephhib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasdrego on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Nathanfab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Gordonles on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ShawnCloge on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PerryNab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GerardUnolf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AllenTuB on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JustinHaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brettjen on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrainCat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephWar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BrianDop on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Merlemat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: EdwinZep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardWah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Shelbyweito on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewtar on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: PrestonMex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Russellweddy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephBum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WillieOricy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Barryvicle on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HarrisEStiX on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MartinCox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GregoryVus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelOrals on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: micheleez4 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Thomasbal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesTus on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JesseRat on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: CharlesCix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TracyMiz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RobertNeN on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntoniowIlla on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidLot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alfredhense on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamexeds on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lavillpap on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JosephViexy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AndrewDuelm on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevenadefe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonioWer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelamite on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: VictorRhiny on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Rolandfeext on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreyRek on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ScottDaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JeffreyHex on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Clintonsog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stevendom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Enriquemig on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jesusmum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MichaelPsype on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jacobhog on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JoshuaVaf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Aaronpaild on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HermanDEK on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Richardsix on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Williamhoils on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamCab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JustinMoump on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danielcom on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Alfredfal on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AntonioHib on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RonaldHouch on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyGrice on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BillyNox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: elsieng2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HarveyDoupt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Normanvow on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Xtoniamhjab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Stephenbug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: MariolEf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Candaijab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josephvoz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Scottusero on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Robertobell on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewkit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: HerbertRab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bali_tloi on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: martajl69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: glenbu69 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: kimberleyvf1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: SOJofFRJT on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rhondahi8 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Georgehab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: darlasu3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lldFvIXz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Carloswam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: avawk3 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: rickzw60 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: IrinaFab on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: colettexw2 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Theronsaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Maha-Svanah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Josepharido on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: keithdx1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Geraldjep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: trinajh1 on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Igorlrn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LouisVon on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Igorlpv on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetlelh on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: TimothyPic on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Svetlanajbt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Joshuadausa on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sergxnl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ThomasShusy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Igoroem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: btaletndmf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Leonmsz on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ntaletarqe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Sergrtq on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Voltugovug on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vilianaloo on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Veronamqg on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Irinhmn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Julioxc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Juliyfn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Evanxf on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Evazpe on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Vikiuln on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viktorizcw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidxla on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzaxx on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzyki on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: KeithNah on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Margaretzrc on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzjdd on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Serzjfl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: AnthunyTag on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Margareteji on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DorothyGunny on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: LewisaFfox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Munich souse on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidbrove on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: ChesterPuppy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Samuelbem on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Aarontruff on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BoyTommax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DinaSallymax on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: lumsefoDync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Lindaideor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: BillyWef on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Douglasrep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: nzbkLiape on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RickyFlils on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: GilbertleW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Jacobbyday on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: OknaBox on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Joycebor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matthewtut on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: JamesLot on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaellit on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Danielalacy on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Allenlam on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: WilliamBOW on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pechi_pxkr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Bentonexona on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Servis_veor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Davidrof on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Willardguatt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Endocrinologytum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Pokrytie_hmEr on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ernestodably on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: DavidNaw on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Brianver on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Tehnichesk_siEt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Ketorolactum on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Avtoservis_quKt on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Avtoservis_lfer on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Viza_hcEn on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Charlesanync on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Recipes mep on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Michaelagows on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: RichardCrada on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Matras_frKl on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
Very nice little story.  Welcome to our little GSR group.

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Post by: Keithdor on April 22, 2009, 05:47:19 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGed on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardbok on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Post by: HenryTah on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandwef on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryow2 on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinle4 on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Post by: stephaniecr4 on April 22, 2009, 07:49:23 AM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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Post by: Lombard chasov_leSa on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: Xazrsce on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: 1win_dtkn on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: pin up azerbaycan_utea on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: Sazrxmc on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: sklad_cppt on April 22, 2009, 08:22:48 AM
Great story :)
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Post by: ohusivun on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: KeithWibia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AaronHam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: itosuezer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JustinTuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: resedoqujiko on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: okocaluq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alissaiw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: otosopgi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HaroldGen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oupivuqenu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fipiafuuqiva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelos11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aazemon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oovdafinuu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AmyPef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uidizalbapafi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rapidgator on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: awedacoduwi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: anatsoled on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oviridziokaki on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JulianLounc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: irumepuhe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ufuducugoq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ilxuori on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: erkgovinivuxu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iorahifidoti on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: utarubsa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Briancen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kittyvh60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: SHADYGUY on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MicheleTraic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamAbago on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: SusanLoago on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Antonioemk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: urokibakirvoj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Derekkef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jamesassiz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Randallat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lyndahr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aiimkotovipi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ClydeSobre on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lmihaEmaws on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berylhq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maryannen1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ijuxodo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nicolejw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MirnaArext on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Douglashix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Rogerknorp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mollieax11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eqkizadaroc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Mirr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robynug3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ciekasiwobir on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Rogerchora on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: miguelid11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamVaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hydrazm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bonitaxq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jamesdox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uyubedujula on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Barbaramaino on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: olivedy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ejidatacocu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: azugixic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristiech11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GerardSox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: raymondlj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: larrysi1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shawndo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Bobbyinaps on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Grissom fan on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Grissfan on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: algolycle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: icapokome on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: equxuiyg on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RandyTal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: avuoroaqahe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: exupuled on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardnuamb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: avimozu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: igimimeh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iminevoatejit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ileraefa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: davepv3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hopehi11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ricardomu60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maricelany60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AnnaPag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: edeqiba on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Antonioxdv on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Peterdsr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: curtisxk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: opoqilafuy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: obumeexisih on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Banezasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mudosgeha on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uozhzzis on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: asgiqopeduli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ituxuhupite on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: osipudork on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aredoya on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ahepenayadu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pauelllimb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aforacacakef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uqxunek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aidaaq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: candiceic69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CharlesHOOKY on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Duglassig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: udapeqom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ureeyaj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeanetteco1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Charlesfex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Williamindus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stephenpv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Linktrunfab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lesleycc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: clintonpk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aurorady16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RittsEmaws on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dennistn18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robertwab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ArthurUntor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evozihay on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Kevinglync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ojomeriq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ilaotivuz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aheisuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: 24vulkan-24.com on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ivmfuqamsous on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: friedafz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nelliefi18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jewelmq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: colleenkw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: osivilinfim on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: BrentMuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: audrayq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: derricklz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ThomasKah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: apapechuv on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: NudeStripperlwedia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: atokieqehoy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eyeprusa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patricazn18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emuqeqxomara on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marlenehu69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alexislj3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aguiduri on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iufobiefaqaco on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CharlesMorge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynnettefx2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Edwardhaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: reginaeg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: christime2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: concettanf69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: julietdj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dwaynezh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Donaldcow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xocifoq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uuipoci on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aahezjaxxo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: KarinaPag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iixivak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: revaas on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oaliqopehu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aqeetofafirul on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uruibawoq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ulenodobocul on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ajiwunu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: famRisse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: anndroPag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Justincak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maxuh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: utuefizuaj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Konstantuszdk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Keithket on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: georgeus2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Matthewlob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Victorxct on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brookefz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shellygs16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: janazi18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iqosecomeb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Albertmib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emiliajl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uvixedukeqoev on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ipihafapjataf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uzperosibag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: luzdz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: idjuyfodinafa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Georgepayof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oronatac on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deannaqh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jaredas1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianNog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ipecepa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: icojucoukibi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BobbieSpado on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angelti69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ameliakp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Roberthax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Floydbiabe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zefelubok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetlanazqz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Viktorirpx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Veronaary on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RalphBaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: EduardoNeets on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: StanleyChede on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: freidafd4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GeorgeTrorn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Ivantlq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jamesfuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ujeyirunatil on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ramirolopay on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CecilBax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Veronazax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: imnopen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elisews3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Victorcek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sergcgw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: okeaabe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oteyehal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MorrDrody on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: krismf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Stasennqg on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marcuswz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lydiabv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RaymondTob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Stasenmhx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jacobxwt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joanneve60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: LadyLauraAnn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charlesbz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnnyks18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Philipsnark on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ik3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: esobikapav on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jayqe4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marianen60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: francinekh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kaitlingr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beverleyvk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shellyok3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fynjysxasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uziteudu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: philipzc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ixicyigyuvid on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: inuvadavexoli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VincentHoW on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leliajo16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ituanakob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: PandSr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: genehr69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nettiecy60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MariaImals on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Williammuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uhepapomiyan on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: martinayq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Nundendurf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Lewiszep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: paulub4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: qn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufejewox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: urijsehnodw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DannyKig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ubeqenaljgij on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oniyusugisi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: socorroht60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Aurinradasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: or3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrenv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: blancarb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: salvadorlf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ellenag69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: juanitaey11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marvajo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wtozizusano on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: anumeteginiye on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: burenokdalty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marimr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ucoxisni on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeslieBip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elenakg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BoutiqueMipsy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fredjs16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: inohaodonehe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ivexotexexuqm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zkoniumijolut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: acoqiqaful on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jamiif1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aracelibv69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gilbertreore on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MonicaWep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vilmatq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dostavkaideasmt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Marinaypm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vtktfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: laurenfu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: newveshimt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ihorawit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oletumuti on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angelinawr69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PeterTal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MatthewPreog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ksifuwisef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: freddiecu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: azcefeq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: scousa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: terrancewy60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bogdanxic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: usimabyqoce on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: warrenly4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: esebeli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: silviazg1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Hro1wardBob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andreasuht on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bogdanzgz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChapligahaM on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PetrAndreevich on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: inufatec on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephpon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yfcfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kennethrg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ipoexayoaxa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Antonioaba on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ufkbrfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lolalo60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dfkthfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aaxidagij on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: morganvk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pearlqb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: upyuqica on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ecaqnuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tracykl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eqatuzimogo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ofozekipadat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uzagdopegak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aubarkae on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vasiliyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BradleyHab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oocuqilo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: heyubat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: br2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: up69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MiuBS on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: orihiazaqkuno on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vfkfyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: frannh3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ulomowguok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ojoteonacez on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: raqueldi4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ucietib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aliliriletu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: clarissadk2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ojegerigezo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Everettmooto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ktifasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bettyekm3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bogdanbwi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iclegesobupo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Eldarzgs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Antonioowd on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deidreim16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ib18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetlanapgy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leonardoo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: guvihuhijousi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetllkd on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RaymondJex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: go4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeannela1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ivanrvx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oe18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ejoliehojix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dadarikixe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sergfla on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jaredtd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Viktoriyog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ipoewohobaya on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ilushikklu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Viktoriuyb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: terryqn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ilushikjou on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: georginabp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Georgesig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lizai4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: evucuqed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katherinetk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: adhileuq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: OnenewlimitsSl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vuhutwda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MaximummaxSl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ubezoluohu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edwinagk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yv18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: albertyt18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: anitasy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Georgeoffit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leilabb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eugenenq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: masirqatai on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ipudibi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leworihokuhez on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: djdfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gingerzy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: afayiyjx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: erikabs2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: enriquerc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ifogiqakedifa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ufuurxulij on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: efawiubxabaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ijahomufcaku on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesclene on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nettietl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: unohodetustef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: paulinecg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: osodaqoqi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iuposej on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oweqomekehqi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marcidk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marimv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: robertayy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: apeyivoxeviy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: abbyzi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: raegx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uomijetoman on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marcju69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: claudianq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ajqerel on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ellenuv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: umejerezkguti on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sidneyvm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vivianjk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kristinajxs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: veronicapk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gholbizarasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Juliblx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iyugexejej on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: emoluvoa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ehewutigufic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: afiwisuaelewh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fayls16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: virgilnu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Serzbfe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eohegozwo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ilososehuyedl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesJourf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Veronatvi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: axaliwofenl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vaijelow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kristinabpu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: erqikukutug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: imeroze on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iwapujoeweexu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: axecefebagim on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ub3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nadyaasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levzba on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vilianarvh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: markof4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ln60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eudukciraifm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: soniagq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ejinayoloaveq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ooxkumowev on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levdbs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uzaatikir on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Geletapasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: anezoho on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iromuhcon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MarvinMes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jackgs18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levyxu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levwme on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: usidwam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ceciliagu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levkoo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levhtg on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Levdiq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WalterKAH on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julimiu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: XMCplkak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ajimaabirirod on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yazireybaha on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JeffreySpeab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Tennieyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eqoqiemaxsomu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: letitiavg1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julidms on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julizhz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julimak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julinmk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardslomy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julitla on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: exifega on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deannaq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ipawidum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertGyday on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: giqehokerumo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alexco1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Phillipemaby on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidvok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Scottcom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vbktyfasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edabigud on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardPruck on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sheltonjeoda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ucxajopoget on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertevani on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vilianaats on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aetavaqojucaq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: axisidux on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ejecuzip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonioAwaig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stasenpug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stephensen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elefehidsowe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ogibogi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dbneifasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vilianagac on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rodneynax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nidokut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: thereseam11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Zalasasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uvidurapame on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ifixamebizqo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aileenda60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ujihuwufwome on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: udufotep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oljacirimiyo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandixw1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fivipodi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jimecoto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ugahaaburewo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: noWarPutinHuylo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Cyday on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alowqauuguq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: asanuysupexex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ucoubeqovire on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ugevicexeduk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: etezcahiviwg on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lg11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: SexWifeLob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelbotte on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marcisp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marylounk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenutign on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iteuvemaemoxo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shawnjo18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mauricexc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hbneczasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deeqe16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rn18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GilbertPraps on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Traviscoida on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ricardoju18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stevengp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elisajw11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julialak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jamespneut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: IvanMedaWeemn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RiarivEmaws on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: classicpat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeonardRah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angelineic2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carlyhk2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gracedj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosadv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: efrosinasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TXsPhaxia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: xi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tamekaib16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AlbertAgero on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TrexThish on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ty1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Freddieboync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Heathwer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kirksg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ucqtipthyihub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kennethnex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: helenasj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kaylatz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamlig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marlacm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: avafx1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tracyzp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Pedroslmc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnzhelikaDrins on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: usuyiyiheibei on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: armandozv69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertawags on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Trishathich on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JerryTib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: esthermr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JacksonTup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ilaih3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fzesxhd on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marshagb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesTon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Brandonawava on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vincentrom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andreasogy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Rogerjak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MarionTak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josezins on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eyeruro on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Billieasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sharonzu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jarrodloabs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ujumoxuelqzx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Donaldorivy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yqRFgYfl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hesterme16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gamerdef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sorryaustralia.com on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vebzankef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeorgeNat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Willardmak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: altadc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrandiNuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardnag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwards9Eteby on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelAdupt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: or18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PlexorK on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RamiroLem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: saherezam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LauraPow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonioHoino on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ThelmaSwace on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lb18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: waqujikumiva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamBal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Timothypaync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kevinmup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: agifiivigumow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JimmySex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GlennDob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: omimuhe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gh3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: olulewum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iansd4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyKic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KennethEramb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesoxync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelTuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VincentSpeld on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gracielayu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: beulahoy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: arijekivi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertCag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: caledutevibi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Hermanawarm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelutera on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesPlere on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamgen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JorgeApage on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GlennJap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardquasp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rogernat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Craigplusa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamMoits on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kizfar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Aeryuogsa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwardciste on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelBum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: minniebm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GordonFrows on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesglymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Brianskync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewGon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uheqeleijaht on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephaster on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: YoungWrova on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesKaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DonaldROb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Danieltoopy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jasontop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ThomasWoste on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Philipabato on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BestTranceoi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TravisGow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BradleyDed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: upebacevo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stefanieoy2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Haroldbearl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Darrelweilm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michealfug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carrieec69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DonaldSaW on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WillieSmoli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RussellPow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Charlesmet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jordanld18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jorgefw1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hbvkzybyasymbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrinBen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gailvu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelstarp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Geraldfug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffordpet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleeok11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: karllw11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephDap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AugustRed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stepanid on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TommyHoods on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DustinDow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Garlandfal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: clarissazy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesBeera on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesWed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maeye3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianPat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amiewu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DouglasAxona on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: typodarseisp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bettieuu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jacobbi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: candyhq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephstoon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ednasa69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TracyOxice on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: meganjv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Henrytum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeorgeVok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardVoize on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Willieicoto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: obosevokib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Carrollnounc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: obikapal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesAmats on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenskinc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: branditm16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeffreyked on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lindang3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ThomasPib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rafaellm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oyoexapy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ejeuqeuvuini on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesLef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesGox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: diannevm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: miguelca2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carlaiu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinJex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: avitgop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenIsoff on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mamiezp60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iacalawu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RonaldBig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PutinImperator on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChicrDob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LelandNOn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Douglasibum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Victornit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephpak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Dennislow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jessefus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sheenaau1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephReult on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aosveshe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aidakg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DamianCot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jackjd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VernonBrums on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bernardwed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kenso1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gabrielet3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ronaldrq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iqemoyuvub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinLor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: caraze3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeriiw2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hm11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Danielsax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Randykit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: miriamvc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: valariedj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomassow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Harrythoma on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertFeany on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenfogma on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosemarytc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rachelleeq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Walterweert on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Victorgus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: geraldki60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sidneylq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lawrencemf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Justinced on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Victorstafe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonyLog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Donaldgep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bobbyfk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Randaldon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwardallow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Curtissib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ElizabethMus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryWonap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: meganoe2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesGed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Donovandep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliampaX on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jaimevz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ca60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: laverneyt18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jasonsnuth on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AlbertHot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JefferyNat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CrystalTob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marylouhq2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeighaGoafe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jhkz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Teresakat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertcew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertdrulp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BasilCep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: moniquelk2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamMob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BuySoftPrash on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Daniellug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: madelynje1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevengef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kermitmeeva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Cyrusmox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BobbyRoony on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: manuelauz16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertisoke on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hazelzp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Miltonevaks on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BarryRarne on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eikuvene on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: michealzu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: madelynuo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fayetl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amigiuesecf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: patricecc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeffreytot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamescot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lynnell69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JacobGrike on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeraldZeway on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesEldex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Myronshock on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HaroldCax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Randallvax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: utatuwtoser on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MyronVed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kerioz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AndrewSow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: juliannega18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jerryerors on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kelleysj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MatthewGrort on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: KevinSom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: KeithSpeen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emilyfe18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: florencegt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Pantonjab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Terrydenty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AntonioGebra on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Leandrowat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Oscarrow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidAnope on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xp18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardhat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GrahamDryNc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: naomilx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hestersy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: BenitoByday on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shirleylk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Ervinriz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: FranksBom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lornacf60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Haroldevero on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Antoniopdo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JerryCip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lillyqn16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ubuprule on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: blanchewc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Clarkpluct on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RichardIsona on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: TimothyReark on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karile60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JeffreyWah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JasonPrait on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charlottefl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jeremysah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ruthieds4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Егоркаbug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rakipro on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: clariceuu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HelenWeito on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AlvinPed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aliciazt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HarryTaite on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angiemj3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: NolanfOn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Gof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: larryfh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ThomasnUt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: candicelz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: loriexw1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: BillyWet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Haroldtoups on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DwightGYCLE on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jessieav4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: PhillipNekly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: id2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CharlesStell on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Wesleygem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: philipty2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ChrisSmers on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: janellfk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RichardSnorn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Earlechoig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bobbyzj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harriettio18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenexern on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elisece3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Haroldspamn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: SonnyMof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brandimi1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: julietwf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dionnefc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HollisTog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cindyaj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jamesitemo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robertfex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berthapr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JamesPainc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Williampep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: louby on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Samuelvat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: EfuiAwsPag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melanieoh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Led on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Donaldnax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Stevemef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rachaelog4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: LarryHag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: BorgesHig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorraineva1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Andrewbep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: louisee69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alisaao2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RashadMof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ThomasFex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: linahv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DexterVag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JasonJex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ephessoca on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DennisKek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Larryrhymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MarvinKak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jefferybriem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: courtneymb2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Palmerhaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Kevinkeext on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Charlesamild on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tonynj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Tommyundon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joanneiw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeanan69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ArchieDax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wesleyei11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ilaea3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robertodova on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HerbertPrill on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Edwardocof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vincentij18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: BruceviemO on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Nathanled on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: felixou3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Dwightrem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maralb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Marisaphilk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jacquelinenit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jennahok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JasonasynC on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jerryvah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Dallassob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sonnyges on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Rogeraxorm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ov11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: EdwardCaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamWoomy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joleneda2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kyleuc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: coolerproo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RobertHed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: josephzc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: noellehy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: freddiepx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jameslex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidphabe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julianfloky on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: johannata18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Timothyrix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jessieau2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ernale18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eyomidudqmuz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andrewak1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hildagx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louellann11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CesarFef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: phoebehc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alvinatoto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewrEeda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ProgdomPaync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Manuellok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorainejw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: inesvk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonyZinge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: randyzk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ralphsyday on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeorgeFrabs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: heathered1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonyLom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ritabab923 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stacibq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alexandraqj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ZERAH on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cliftonfj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidlam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TyroneGrods on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ManuelStuse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: allysonix69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephclova on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ueoqpuma on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alexanderfn2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: biancart4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: francisja16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tamrasp69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Arthurwanty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andremw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bipnase on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williampiept on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Terencepiott on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pennykj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jessicade4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andrewledia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesGag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: topwaterpro on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardWaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: virgilpt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nadiahm11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChongHex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cassieyf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonysek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rebarz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidhoary on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hillaryza60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corneliafa1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: guyen16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edafeifave on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bernieheash on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bryandauts on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lelasp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: au18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BurtonAffix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenEvalo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gregorygrind on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Montynit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kennethkit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamWhory on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: keithqb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: coryvm3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ameliaar16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: isdeelidud on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KennySix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andydd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: owezofevur on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankSlake on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeniferzn11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: xiwukbeq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: exchangeproo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marciahz4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ohahizer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonyCes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesjes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HenryMam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ey16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: addieyq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mirtouristpira on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aaronoc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonySpefe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Manuelseire on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JasonPoope on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kennethwhash on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardroppy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cherylqa2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fkooolayur on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: smard355 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jonixe3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iepoyuj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosemariego11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Samuelles on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: smard843 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Warrenflozy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: smard785 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Carsonlusia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aliciagr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: robertum4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: thomasbe3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Olafjab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VirgilDadly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andreasbuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasstymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alfredcarry on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jameshes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maggiehe11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewNoW on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shawnadr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ts3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Larryhok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Henryjab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vw2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertTwiva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: janeal16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesmup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KennethTilia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aluifilis on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MelvinJok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndreNep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alexanderkd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rubenwl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KonkuApelm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DanielGug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamieOvefe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Melvinbaism on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edadiruqedelo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sheldonrot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandieh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: consuelofj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maryannenk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katiefu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RobertZenry on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oribehokadid on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cathyyq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: audreyug2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: etupidoq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelBor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Cliffzoown on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: iwcibeobewiw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: urezevehow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenRoose on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: teriqn2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ronaldenged on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Steventoilk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: enoluruke on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maxinepp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: smard476 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aqeyupog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JesusGaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Leroyenave on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dawnyw2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tammieec4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andrewmut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ilenegj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: latashanb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Louisboile on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertmix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: margaritaap3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nanniena16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeffreyniz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leonorpl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lupesh4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carolhp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elisabethfw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: luisoy2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: isutacgi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrainSpafE on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angeliapd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidMow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cherylaz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Fidelsup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamlox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carriexm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: virgieeq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: neilah3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesCrins on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianBut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rafaeltuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: colleenwy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uguzizusli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: provenexpert Ger on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PhillipSerce on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandieef16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidtut on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vselediSlerm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: margaretss60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankNok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amandahl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonynarry on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Samantaait on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: anitalp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwardbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: beverleyjn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidcoerm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carolji11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: idkozcofomeq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Antoniowoulp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lolafc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hs4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamescox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: NormanJobby on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zacharybm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: viceehi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ls2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertDobre on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RonaldRoosy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesSiz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nellvs60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: SylviaFed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sheilawr18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uheyz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenziz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorazn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sydneylunny on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelcrype on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: latishazs69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertLak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeanninefj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bethyb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williegycle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WalterExces on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Traceyrig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lolitaig18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gordondk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: barbrahr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JoshuaRunny on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aviskp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darrelldp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RicardoTrunc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JoshuaCogma on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: willardfh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Berryjaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MelvinAlago on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonysmish on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrandonBum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidJum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: robertiw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TrinityElulk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelfus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pansysy4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: anniexg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ojitojihqo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BryceNeulk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sujiwakugeho on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeroyhEr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bonnieat2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bonnieph18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alonsofum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ibbubuer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gm69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yvonnecu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: OrlandoGah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uragatije on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: NewtonSpumn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: su2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: veronicath3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Manuelten on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Waynedilia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bettezp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tishann16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: traceygi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ernestbilky on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Unaajab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ry69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenFet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: beckoning on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lizadf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hilaryes18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ellalg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: itexuep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melisanp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Erlejab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: millicentfx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carlakl60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertCoimi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ijapilisuca on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Harryheisy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: timothyra18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: olakautaqox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uyodiel on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stanleynp60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: royzf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hicayoyeseko on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: berniceab18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TerryToxek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Larryjop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasrew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertNic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eugeniatx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: triciapk1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CliftonTew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: peterfj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ClydePes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankBoype on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: emacuis on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Walterelifs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alisonpm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: double pane windows hew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sondraam3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ManuelSwick on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AngelTycle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: roxieaf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Philipwet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardDiC on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aliciara16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hildaqh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dollyqt60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tonyapc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JefferyEmemy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: winifredgt60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alberteluse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesLoams on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: danielleqf69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: loriyg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: megangk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyKeerb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andreavd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wendyjo16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DashWSteek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Manuelwap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelAtofe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zz16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: caitlinug3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jorgeqk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephtit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KathrynMig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rafaelhoalf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: millicentnl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lancedw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamlok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alisaos2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bogdanfaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bogdanvqz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ronniedc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ronaldthofe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kelliewh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Dwightdub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jolr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Steveagoft on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tishakg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marvafa1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Matthewpaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesWeals on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Albertpag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamGed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamodord on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelreM on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LloydOpels on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vasilisa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KeithCurce on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ejutacikujus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorizy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amparofz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: magdalenawu2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kevineralf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: onieexibclkku on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: esterox1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryWaymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lethamu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michailxtq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryWer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marylougg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HollisNer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeonardCix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: meredithay2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: afehacoxizi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VictorSaide on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bertiepg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wesleyei69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jasonmus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fernandofy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertquard on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josepharild on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesfaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JeffreyOrbig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vondasb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: minniely16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: aezigidixuuy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: martinek18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: suzannesq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: charlieny2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oupzujedu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marciks4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Luckyemike on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melvaod1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: willaqm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ewojmixozase on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BYEugeneIrraxjexdex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: keithfh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelpat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DannyLef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilbertWouse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melbaap60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GabrielZen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ufutiejojolig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tabithakz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ayuezuzavazep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: joseog60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kimberleyie60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: anowvuk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: luciamj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertjenry on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwintip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidTum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: violetso1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Linwoodweque on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Allanleaps on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Thomasbag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: puxoepeyonati on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephCeabs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shannawx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MilesVesia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: malindahl60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jefferygl16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Thomastok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Josephbreap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bobbymz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jasonbounk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shamoprumb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: calliebo16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: blackpeacer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yvettebj3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Louisret on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Pedroskix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emiliayj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: coocapamp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Uniloksnapy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: okixazewequzu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bradleysc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Danieloccam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StewartExany on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: caseyic4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: claudefl60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ofevuvaef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gaxetoxutoa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leenv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carolinahj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: williear1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sdvillpap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinTorry on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertEtept on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianEmeve on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rogerutite on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DennisAlbup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidAMine on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vivianfj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mariact1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zaimpadly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryGaups on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ralphyz16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Basement Window Jaild on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardGek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carolqv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stephenacela on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gerarddrync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jameszh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katieqr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LouisVam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bonnierg1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: SammyCep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: virgienc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertjoita on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ui4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nanettelr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leolahz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Pedrossur on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bonnieec18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RussellOpick on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deanabt60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorenebo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leonan16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JeffreyCic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamscoof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlieErora on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rodneysix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katrinaaa18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: irenehr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidspoub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: adafr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: orafu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uyuragotudoj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosehc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: umuujuy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ronaldapeme on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KeithSloda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maryloucd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: otitajadomav on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Charlesfluom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Antidracer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kristineme18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ovabomu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: floratb2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ra60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eloisesp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ru3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uzayunwagn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lawandakg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: liliaju69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: concettafq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marleneit16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamTwide on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eduardoso4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: janetteft3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eyohunowimezu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomaslof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: coletteql16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pv18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dwightdq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tishatg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: geneyc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertAdeva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: haroldlo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rodneybak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hughjc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: janoi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: onigiyvezak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Aspectomtage Window thymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jonathanjr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lynnenm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shanemp60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zeyuyigasotia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gwendolynqo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deanayy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: erikawb2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stanleyku3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: glendajt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gayym60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ok69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ewebuwegee on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jodilb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deannego11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: valariems2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VasyaCoere on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: priscillatg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: owjehojaupapo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wm16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: galegn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wallaceeb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RachelBip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: glencc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: emilydc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oxayoxuwokoia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: curtisdx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: enriqueti2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kristinemc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mariezw1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pedroca4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lawandadr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: blancaqf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: agikeliiqea on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leonkv69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: epjikopakik on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChesterFelve on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorenafd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Agongoodo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: judithwh4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnzy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elinoree3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HeidiFiedo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: barbralx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alfredojw1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephsappy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jonathanpf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: camillejh4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lizazf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MariyaDug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinPoisy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AhmadneS on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: victorpe1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: michealvs69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidnup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: renesr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: toniaiw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: olanb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BdondomSerop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corrinemm3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dianemp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: afohasxufokej on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: letitiazx60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: OliverSwemo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ofidagqalas on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: traceyjy1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richarddak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deanfm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dennisrg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Majorkar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ElcosPaymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tanyaru60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dennisyk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wendidy1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: normasj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darrylar1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ec11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: reqaricene on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: onidemasleki on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandiexf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lanceds11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leticiayc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ra1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brookela60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: EdvillKat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: utinemibiem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DennisMycle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ezecayahe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vavadloups on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AuraEarn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosieuo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jerrixf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: quximijufeic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angelcx3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeffce60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shaneim4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jacquelyngt16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alvinkib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jerryuv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MathRox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yw2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jennydk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: teriau2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bobbiejc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Lorenzotoimi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: krystally1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewDog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rolandwg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: audreycr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carlyr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeremyng69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leslieao18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sonyavx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: loraoi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kevinthuff on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: robertapa1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lauranl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: evangelinagy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DorEmaws on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: claricesp69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katrinabw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lesaub1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: johnnieih2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dominiquemd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fi4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Favorfet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jimmyxp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ogultade on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: chelsearv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bobts4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: madelynct11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ameliajj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: abbyar69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nicolekh16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: valerieqs4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Albertintax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertbruse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: danielez3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leagp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mathewix16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Horacespado on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stevenbp69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KoddacEaMC on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andyzf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jaimefg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: obolorav on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jy3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: danielleuf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amyab11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: coleendm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorasr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: otepaqaoeluzo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: karenem69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ZAABET.COM on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lindseywd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melaniexy60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uitiyavsec on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fritsusHek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: juliannerb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DouglasClody on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosannebt3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jaimevc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carmellagr69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WargamingPlugs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darleneux18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: allennk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lizxg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: zm16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: savannahfc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kristenbu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tishayg11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Adolphliery on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tracygt2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: miltonbe3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lethayf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: staceybb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bobbywp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marinapn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: reginaldkk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidGlymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: inezyw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: herbertgf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: taahenimooax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margueritemk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: laverneni60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rebaph2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ednada3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: celinakl3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: normaht18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ni16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: penelopeox1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: antoinetteka60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: qerijiwi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RalphNep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: male on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leenm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: matthewod69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ajofixoro on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: azozinuviguh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynettecu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: itehuqiwguusa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: onupakrarunac on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: opipejago on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JosephBeigh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gretchenqk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: franciscayi4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ryanqv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: simonene11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dashkasevasts on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kerine11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: josieng16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lucindaan1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Chadelel on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oyyetedaoli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JosephruH on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patrickuj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zelmavu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jesusrek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Kevinsit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: UC-tex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deanneeq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ir3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pollypa11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lawrencedh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carissaut11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hefavageniwa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: merlenc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Georgerag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uxucaze on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jicakoyuuge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: imeldadm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: milagrosgk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iiculoba on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yihazetop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brucely69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: chrisnm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oyigisaqorhi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidCrots on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mindyls69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ateehuse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: verabj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorriexd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: janicedf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wendykt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kerrywl3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aprilnm3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fs16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: egupkohi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wandawt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: OliverWhork on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: candicezm69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Eddiehor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: milagrosbv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: anthonyxp69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: IrinaNam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claudiaxj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Raymondclupt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardraity on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iafiloq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rodneyty2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cynthiagq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: efiwawule on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ekcaevdojop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: imogenezl11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: isabellajc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ryanns11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tonybu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hannahja69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ifacwiot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ivanbs60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardneeld on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristinesl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: afivxuw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristenbn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ozetidi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rondael69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lonnieup18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: almaz2demn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JoesphSnany on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shellyia3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shannonst16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: diannesl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evagb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: garyyk69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: frederickbi69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Inquise on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oliviadd4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iyahaekonc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: petrahb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: chasityox69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorrienb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: calvinzo2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: christianxp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Ronaldmoome on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ParfumCop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: clarencenz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marahv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berthavk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gladysec11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uxdelubua on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jocelynvo11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: osocaxkewz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RobertMam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uwudaxuco on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rachellezp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elvafh16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: amparoms18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ixiwepiyo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: olgajw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wildaqa60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meganbx60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: genevievedm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidRoozy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dominiqueni2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ulisagajo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JerryPhype on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hegasajahu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pg888asia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: arnoldia2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stevenye3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TeresaWeift on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ramonaxy2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kathrynxj3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jordonbob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Postlap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marianneon11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: plasdtic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ronniejoppy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karaow2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: esthergn18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jimgc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: natashafg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyJulup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: erikavi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetlanadoz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: goldieax60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeannettewq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sportsbet365 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Lenush on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: raulaf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LeBruceval on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lerkblf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Igorywb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jacquelynag11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: freidamf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KarenBah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: epemeweh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mikkracini on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jessiets4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sheenayu2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: annettehz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: enriquedm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ufadiwuwemim on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tommygx2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vezoyuguopij on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: steveol2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Darrenbex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hattiesc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: joannezp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardhulky on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Tylerref on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: EugeneInids on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ininibyaziono on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Donaldnaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KeithSen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nelsonbv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uosoruhafurfe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WendyGot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MinnieRekly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ki2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kevingy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Odorert on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: adeleya3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kn2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: renett18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: paulettejr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: saracs1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephacinc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HorecaPuple on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: uworuwaqanim on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandievi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nonawu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JerryFub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertBab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: EmanuelVix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: topsamaraGuapiff on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: joeow16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lindaay4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Wesleyclawn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidJef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ofefome on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CarlosNes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: clintonnz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonyonege on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thurmm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Malcomtag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ny60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kuwukemafem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edgargq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: franciscook11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: evaud69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: catalinahd18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: margueriteoa11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alycecb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: howardgr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sherisp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elsiepv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: magikcomik on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: juanazs18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Timothypit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julizow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: letayu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mindyun18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: caigryBub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenhoupt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: upaqecigogihe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: altajh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelnax on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PatrickJox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesSem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: adrianqd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louisoc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: christifn11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jordanlt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: daleoe3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesBib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Matthewvophy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianToosy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Arnulfodot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: janellemt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeffmf60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jasonfonia on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesNak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Russellraw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lessieai11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Brianfuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ijepigh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nikkier18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leilahc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lessieot69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wendydg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eloiselw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FordireRok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HenryTah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Henryoxync on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: endeaws on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eileenza60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sa69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carissarg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: axidagodolizo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marvagx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: troywx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marshallfq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: alfredame3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ivamx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: glennhq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kb60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katesn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: loreneso11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mikecr18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kellira1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xd1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: keithye16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zs3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ellenww4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meredithrr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stacywt2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mollieei3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ureliejpik on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uziriziveyeea on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dianejz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: concepcioniy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ou11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Ilushikvsw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stanleyfa16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ov18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Dwainkex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: caitlinfw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelmb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robertomq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marleneac1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beatricejh16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margerynd4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robnnj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jomwins on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: juanahm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: valeriakf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeannehm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: candacegs2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robwnz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alycekp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: toniagh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kariww3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: valerianj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fannierh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pansymc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meagangi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elsavj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: richardab69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kelseyyg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dionnezu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adelesi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joannazd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelayf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sarahaw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: scottka3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shelleyjg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gracefa60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: willieer69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: valarievn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tracyno18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: williamou3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: juanapq2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: apriliq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ronaldxy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ryanfl60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: amandako2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beckyxs16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brandyio18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katherynce4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: darlenezk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: susanawk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeanettefo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mayrakf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristineid3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leticiave1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jerriya4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gwendolynoy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: altayf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marcellazi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: graceqf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carissarl16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bertabr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: calvinpe11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: abigailhg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jerrijy3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: malloryng2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: miriamdj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lethavr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carolefz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Leonwyu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidWrara on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nolafg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tanishatz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pamelamf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joannaak18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maribelxm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JamesHew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shelleywa60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katinana4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: loreneql4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: courtneyiw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: georginaey3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rhondaro18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Julipbn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: caseynf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: richardzn16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Serzpfs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charliehh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vondaqv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: julioim2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jimmiewx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leighaq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: toniwo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marvinlm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Vilianadoa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: od2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Alfredonaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mabelju69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: winniewv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fayeiu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yvettevx1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JamesCob on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaKic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: juanitamf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: billiefu18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gwennt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidPesty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Peterlok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jimdc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: melbawh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: KirbyPancy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sergbsn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: debbieak3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: franciscayn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kayeou4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rosellaod4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DonaldTal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kellysb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rickgl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CarrollCoign on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JosephHaith on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bl16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JustinChilK on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gabrielmp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katrinatf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Evaxmu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: effieyj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mitchellmj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: glennck4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hesterjy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cecildv69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eloiseuf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinShoms on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosellaqv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cherrypq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosemariewr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louellayi18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: norany18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: valeriazx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tommylm69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tessamt16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bryanwa11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elisard2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corinaeh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tamikatm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maryanneln11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: blancheyc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonynon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Frankeliva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corinneim16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: imogenexo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AlbertNoinc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryFuppy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williameveli on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: chasitywn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: georgiacb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darylwj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: estermj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeraldmog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: opheliatr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: javierkc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rolandwef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: valariemb2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: raquelza1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mistylb18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeaninebj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lorrieke69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: flossiepv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosellalf60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darrellfc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sharlenemt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PhillipERETA on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: petrafa69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Wesleydep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leliaxg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elizaae2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: toddlc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jacquelynyi11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eloiselw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: carolineih1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: celiadj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angeliquebx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hughsb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: claytonax69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pearlieyg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: claudinefh3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: duaness18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WarrenHeata on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Charlessot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: felixgt2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: terriedo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rachellemk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sarahms2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mildredsm16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: luciauc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenAcoug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kathrynzh16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pq16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: angelinepb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Angelwex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rebeccalg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gracievy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: xh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: courtneync18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jordantt18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeorgeHause on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrunoFeF on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leannacn3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lornavd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kenyakf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mariettafg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardsam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: antoniaof60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: josephinewg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: olgamq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: maribelgc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: miltonkg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kennethagriz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corineml11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kristinewh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louisadu69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: russelliv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: raezw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: haroldaf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darcykk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: juliaml69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: michaelue3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: miaee2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nelsonke2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bridgettuj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: graciegw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Normanprade on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: candyxr69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Erepjapse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dustinue11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: melvasa11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ScottCycle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelPlale on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RonaldNunda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JasonSat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeremywt60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shariyw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephRaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: np16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: myrary2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MarcusBlils on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dionnewi2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kentze60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Oscarprags on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wesleyny69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: emmavl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeanniejh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: magdalenage11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ramonaov60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Tenuall on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: selenabp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shanaln2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lyndact2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ce16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: helenayk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patriciayy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pearlyn11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deliaqd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: harrietss11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tinafo60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dorapb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louellack18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ashleexn3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ofeliaic16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alantm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dm69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cherylvo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: IrwinEduth on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lindseysr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RichardPoofs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JordanHeace on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Terrynef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jennieyb60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardwer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MathewKet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Thomasdog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nolapi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Douglaspypet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katrinagp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kennethdx3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: judithho18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shariek1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vo4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelaoa2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patux60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: amaliazk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karynif3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: darlahs11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kellieiw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: celinaxe2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jordanuc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marvinby16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marisolva18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: theodoreql11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zg1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dorotheakj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alineuu60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adams69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ruthieko2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dollieho4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meganyh16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nadiaol16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dannyxt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: derrickmu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hollierz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: queenuo11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maryannhn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: corineqg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deloresep69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evangelinayn2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: goldiepr18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adrianur3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: genevieveca3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: susiebm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: avisyq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelinaba16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: SerRado on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: blancasn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lancepu60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kathywo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lavernets60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tylerac69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: darrelljf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margretss2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alyssaiw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rosellagr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mi69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lolitake4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fanniepy1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: phylliszj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: reginaldap1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hy60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sharlenefn18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: catalinati16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leonardhc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Joshuagaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CraigGon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: julianaws18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: colleenwj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hollievi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Charleshon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ik18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margueriteoh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: madelinezi11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deannazo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: melisall16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kirstentq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: haleynx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: phyllissh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: larayc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: terryow2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: louuz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RonaldshuTs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeanninetr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sa60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: araceligy60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tracise60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deannlx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ShawnBiose on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Frankovell on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamquiCt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nicoledn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CharlesNease on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Waltervon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lelajm1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: qm69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lolaxp60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marioneq1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: janellmc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: salvadorxp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: biancazc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: spassub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ok4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adajw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: territj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ErvinDwesk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: liliavp16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: freidayu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claricefo60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: thomasen11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: doreensb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pollyoz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harrietrf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamBus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harrietmc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: myrauc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carlti69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: albertlb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: phoebehc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kelleytp18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jillyc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fayebj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: millicentax3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ll4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: franciscohn3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: markak60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jillianys4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: augustama18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: laureniu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Vikidei on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: liliayw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ninacp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nitalx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lilliend60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Brandonabini on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Donaldtat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Brucebrurf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leahky11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joycegv18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robiniv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leavu2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: richardar11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dixiejg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evangelinegx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnin4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hughzn11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nanniezm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nolamf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hectorbu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ca2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marcac60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patricatx60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelfh3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: raymondyu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: luzcn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sabrinaat1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lonniewe4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: judyee60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: md18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ju16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: geneed4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ceciliaud1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GradyVor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ernestmp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stellayz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bradleyhd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tonyvi69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eugeniams2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelinawl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deannabd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elisatr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: curtisak16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: WilliamKah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: milliews4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Veronafbr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pf69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Matthewvat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: guysg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ol18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynnebh11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: valeriadr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ettasp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: geraldinequ4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bessienu60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Robertdeard on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: julianyy1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vickiee3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ivyoc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: florencenw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kennethdl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rickyjw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: monicaib69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: florineyl1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beatrizkc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mauriceyo4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jennieho60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jeremyetete on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katherinesv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dinapz16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dianniq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ianai60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: trinaer1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gp4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: georginarc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shawnxg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: randydt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: daisyqm18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: luelladt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gracieland16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beatrizbw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alejandrasx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jennierw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RogerBip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynnettesm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maryanneyq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rodneyhq18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mayrapm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carlyeb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: victorwk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brentlj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wj60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: melvinej60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ingridwx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: EdwardAveno on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidDirty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lupeet69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margretyy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: roxierg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judymi2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robertobr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: iancr16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deidreys11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DavidMar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: catherinept3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: debbieey3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rogerqf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: briananf4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: magdalenamg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: davidjc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Williambam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rochellegf11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lindseygz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: edwinji11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johannamn16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynnettejv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elviarq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gertrudetv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ba60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: henriettapv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sadielw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: murielgi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deenafv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: laurajm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: wn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leannfw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: albakb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alfredasb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jaredil4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adelasz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elbagq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nadinevk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: georgenw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eddiejs2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: michellegx2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorieeb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelitalp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: li4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: melvinle4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vivianqo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorenagr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: debravx2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: erickahq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marthalr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: theodorero2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charmainemr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dalegl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bertaoc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: annazz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harrytj16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: JamesRex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: annmariela4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: diannemn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: marianuo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Viktoricgo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patsyem4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: danqk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pearlqt16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jewellyi60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: loriln69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: el60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnsu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnvz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kerryci16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: miltonih18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mirandajg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Venomguactop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cliffordhc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: whitneyrv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nitaji3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joshuals11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Davidlab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: guygd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eileenqu1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Josephtaurf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeannehj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: francisks16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kimpv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bridgetxk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: estellakf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carmelacv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: LarryPem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: concepcionay69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sueyx3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hermankw4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Kellymef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rayvv60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harveyga1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: frankok60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berylwm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sharlenelq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: inezch3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: salvadorez60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hermanvm60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cleohi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katinacx16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Georgealima on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: normama18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dionneyr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berylbd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Annaanaks on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: linasx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: amiejg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: genavn11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GeorgeSoday on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kimberlynv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: um1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: violetqe60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: allysonoc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: floydpx69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AlbertoPen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bobbiepv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: feleciadl18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: agnesio2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gordonrg11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: terrancedi11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: naomigy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: os60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: georginadx2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charlottezz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Phillipswert on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: GeorgeDor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardcof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kylerb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eugenebe69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jonathaniu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suemo18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: roseannmu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harrietgl11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kenuj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilajl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimebl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yeseniall3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: in1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: luzte60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dk1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lacykd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stephenhk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ij1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarioSorma on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lolacat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyFal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastance on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannapj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioiq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittneylf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenorabb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emiliahl16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mollyzk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katess60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kd1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankiems18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebekahdq3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrainefg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniegj3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: shawnuw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eileener1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: DonaldLaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claralx3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniefo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vickyjg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldMedly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaBok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliokic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldJat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasWaind on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAvala on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NathanWress on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielMup on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Glennscupt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryMor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: byronvl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlescy3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondFus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaseydk60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulca60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: noelleoh4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: loriegw11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Natashaemn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: thomasit3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dorispc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cathleendy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: monaxo11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Lorenrot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cecilexd1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RalphHauth on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Richardpoill on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leemo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lelabz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MariMosse on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gracielapj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: glengr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnna16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: charmainezu2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tonigh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dianafn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dominiquels2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: peggyga3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cassieyw11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kellywt1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nannieog4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dominiquerx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: twilagb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: colleengu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tyronelv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lynettebu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meagankm11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ricardolb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jimmypk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: anitasz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: idahh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aracelije4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: taylorwf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ilenelk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Thomasnaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: caseywa2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: vernonjt4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: keishapr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nzryxcrujoq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandietu69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: velmanr11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claytonkm2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stevekt2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pa11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tanyala4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: edwinar16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorizr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lavernell11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: chandrajp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stephaniecr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ryanoe69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claytonzt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mattieqg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evangelinekl60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: waynefs4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: denadz1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: stanleymw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeffke2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robinsu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Charlietow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: CecilBes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fannysw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Samantawjy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pattyhk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: henriettapl3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karenjl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristineef16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zacharyel69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ronnieqb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kp69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adriennely60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: billiekr2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meghanml2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: simoneye4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mn16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: melvincd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ramonwl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claudiaxb18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeraldRulge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: emiliahw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: carlaof3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: hannahod2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ac2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ul18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: daleyg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jimmyjd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kenyacf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rosettaut11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dwightie3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: isabelletq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leannawe4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jerryesown on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: xc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: IraKinue on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HenryPyDay on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: soniaca3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eugenejn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cathyoe2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evangelinatp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karinfk2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rubyfl11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: reginaldxk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: geraldcd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: normabo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deborahoj69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lindseyze1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: elisabethht69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lornaos2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alfredfb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: zelmatc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: morriscj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alineus2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: seanqi4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tiako1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: karljr18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: evelynvv4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: if3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: 8playfortuna-Sip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rosanneyc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eugeniahz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: barbaraxl2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: manueluk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: angelsd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ManuelBessy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katherinezp16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: AmberTor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claudemk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brandyee11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sharrongu16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: avisdk11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nonazb3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: madelyntc69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: earlinecj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: augustagi4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lorenext11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: thomasax1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kerryiz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ex11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: aw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: chrystalcx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ww2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MasnaLnaiva on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: brittanyde1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dorotheaig4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ivanqr3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Victorbof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: trinaqm16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lousu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sondragh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adajk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wandakp11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tracynn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cleose2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: charlottedd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: peterez11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Antonioklq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephrix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MerlePal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sheliafe2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jennysc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: colleenzt18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vickigc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: fb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: randycy3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: johnmc1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cn69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vickyax2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nicholejo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ritaxf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stephanienq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: chrystalqe16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandycq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ronaldtug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vernanu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sethry2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: evangelinalx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mariannefr60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nancyux11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katykw69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ladonnato16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: amaliace3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: dawngd69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: glennhz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: yvonnehx11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: mamiedf2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brandypx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: andrewly1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lessiegk18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: juanahv11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hestertq2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brentnn1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: corrinezg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: stacyps60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kn60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sq2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bridgettqj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: hattieez2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: benitaxy4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: shelbyrd11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sarakh3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: gingerha1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: louiseac3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Hiramwhody on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dwightsa2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: priscillayf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: salvadornu2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: katiees2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cheribc16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leolauy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: faybh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: px2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kellyqy4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lillietg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: debrase3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeannego69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ad4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ie16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: justinebl3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: soniafv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lewisub1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: briannaoz2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: clydedy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: bradpi1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: amparotd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: leannaft3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: margretdu11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: celiazh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: eugeniasc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: brendanc11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: doraoy1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kendycef on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kellibi2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: danapg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: sq11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: josiekq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: vx18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: le3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lucialv18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: nelsonko18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: eleanorhw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Roycecrype on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jeanettehf16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rachaelvd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tashamh18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: betsygi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: marissakk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamFrest on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: henrydl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: adelego11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: harriettmo69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lulamv1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: edithle69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lilayx4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ellenyr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: cg18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kc3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: berthagb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: pb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: georgegq60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: josefajv2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: deloresfy16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lillyfo60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: jg16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: tracietz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: allanng2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: robertohi3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bonnienk16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katharinefg3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JudsonZex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: harrycu4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gregoryhp2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jt11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bobbyhr4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yolandaux60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: katyez4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: corneliaqq4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: charitysy4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: altasc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gloriama1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bryanqs4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dwaynevb16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: enriquedb1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dixiegh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: patnd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: virginiacd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: serenaoe3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: diannetc18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: sondraoc4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rosellarg11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: crystalke4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: uj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: susienh69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lottieqd60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gailzd16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kn4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alyssaqv3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tamikasg2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kzkazpap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ebonyrf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: fredxh2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Bradleysmugs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wendire11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: clariceyo16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: johnniemz60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: milliekp1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pearliefs60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adrianaot60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: markqz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: francescaxy18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gregoryqq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ig18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: celestelr1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: abbyld18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jesusjj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: naomizb69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: helenaiq2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: margiezk1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: albertow2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mauricewf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: meghandi69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jeaninelm3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: benitaqh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: soniafu69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: bernadineuy11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: claudiatc60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tammieob16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rolandph1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: phillippi16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jaimema69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ianuw18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: wd3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gracehu60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Michaelpiers on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: va18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: tanyalb11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Williamsek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: rosepl4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gretchenbf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kelseycw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: erikud3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Josephbok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nz16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lucillevz69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ia2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: velmabn2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joanjj11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: dinald60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pansyhp3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: beckygs16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: HerbertRaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kathrynod1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lottiegp16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: mt18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: randyyj2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: darrylit1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: yw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: audravt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: davejo1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: adaeg1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jannaer16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: florenceua4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lilliexg4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deantf3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: albaiz11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: gabrielatj1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: berylxa69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: laverneqg69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jerido1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: leors69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: ritaxl11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: corinert11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: oliveld4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PavelZen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kq69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiajy69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineyi1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattipk4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenabm4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondrasg60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: cherieio2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: joycenf69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: roslynca69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: pearlav8 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: kristennz3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: saundralt16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deannhc2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: maeqt69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: taylorlw16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: effiebs11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: penelopeyz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: betsyut11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latoyaot3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martatb4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenar4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: nadinefj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thelmavr16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: letitiall69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivexj4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: jonyu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaeo3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: alysonet1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: denisexv16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: herminiayd2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: laraiw3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: earlineiv18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: lenoraaf69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: albertolf18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jasonfub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: deloreswt16 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: twilaaa2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Michaelphoni on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaildol on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiefe11 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Kinlochnez on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Antoniozga on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MichaelCop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teddymeete on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keganvoms on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinbip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AldenFek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertPlore on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: PercyLab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Arthurcruch on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Danielmew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelbuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DonaldJourA on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Lamaslalo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Maxwelldic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PaulaInvof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Andreapam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Eugenehub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Wallaceglips on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonioDop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertMiz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: EdwardBit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Francisdrice on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelphick on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BenderCashwes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Warrenjor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rodneyblacy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Charlesstymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TerryLal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamDem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: joshuazz18 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ElceDiulk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankCox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AliceGeque on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Maximdom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LesterUnale on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesvaP on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Orlandovug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Timothyaccip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesPQ on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Pancakes som on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ttaletfnxz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DouglasKip on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Ryanger on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Edwardknolf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidacini on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Larryboara on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Marthaliady on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: oibuntuzusazi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Howardarord on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelClali on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Johnnyshush on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Waltercoego on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephMappy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WallacePhymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KennethEsola on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MarvinAvarp on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sergiodek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Angelpak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardShova on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Anthonydic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesDaymn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Randyneest on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WayneVum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Wendellineri on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MajorIcock on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Abrahampum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CalebDudge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Kevintow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Brianlag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Dannydic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KennethanypE on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrooksGop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidgat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Samuelbof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlieTom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Timothylox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesMox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesunser on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Adolphdit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ScottPet on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: IsaiahFox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jamesonend on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Howardkek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Billyswish on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilburSerie on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChrisSaula on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidEvast on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Charlesbuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: NolanAmisy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeffreybam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertNok on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardprife on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Arthurevora on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankHek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryDic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyBen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrankAmite on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertLal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TommyDek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StevenGer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardHUB on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidVoido on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JasonTum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Donaldtum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertbig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VictorShubs on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Chrisbeado on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ChrisDah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GeorgeAnese on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrentBed on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ElliottSoort on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasliery on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Dennisdab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesSoide on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesFLECT on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AaronZes on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Craigoweda on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DonnieSaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MatthewTwisk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Georgeswops on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamNit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AdrianDor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidwag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesJat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KevinSlito on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jessemoing on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonyClave on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RonaldReort on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jeromeshevy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Shawnvonge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Mathewbog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BarryPAr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AnthonyJorgo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidEdino on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RogerHOW on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewIntep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VirgilRhids on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jaimerus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Marlonruism on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianTuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BillyHiz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: FrancesaBag on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamsPah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MiriamBus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidQuery on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: homastor on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamTon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VodaKaH on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ViktoriyaGop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephCeple on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DarrellGaisa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: StephenEsoft on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vincentarild on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Clydesab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesPlorn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Louissek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vincentcriny on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasgar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MitchelVek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DamonTak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RogerBuh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DennisTug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TracyHow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianFelty on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LarryFraug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertRof on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ThomasFibly on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DonaldBub on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephblodo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamToils on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephhib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasdrego on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Nathanfab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Gordonles on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ShawnCloge on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PerryNab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GerardUnolf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AllenTuB on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JustinHaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Brettjen on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrainCat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephWar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BrianDop on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Merlemat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: EdwinZep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RichardWah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Shelbyweito on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Matthewtar on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: PrestonMex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Russellweddy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephBum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WillieOricy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Barryvicle on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HarrisEStiX on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MartinCox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: GregoryVus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelOrals on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: micheleez4 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Thomasbal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JamesTus on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JesseRat on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: CharlesCix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TracyMiz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RobertNeN on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntoniowIlla on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: DavidLot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alfredhense on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamexeds on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Lavillpap on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JosephViexy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AndrewDuelm on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevenadefe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonioWer on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Michaelamite on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: VictorRhiny on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Rolandfeext on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JeffreyRek on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ScottDaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JeffreyHex on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Clintonsog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stevendom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Enriquemig on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jesusmum on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MichaelPsype on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Jacobhog on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JoshuaVaf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Aaronpaild on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HermanDEK on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Richardsix on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Williamhoils on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: WilliamCab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: JustinMoump on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Danielcom on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Alfredfal on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: AntonioHib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: RonaldHouch on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyGrice on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: BillyNox on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: elsieng2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HarveyDoupt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Normanvow on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Xtoniamhjab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Stephenbug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: MariolEf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Candaijab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josephvoz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Scottusero on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Robertobell on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Matthewkit on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: HerbertRab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Bali_tloi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: martajl69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: glenbu69 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: kimberleyvf1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: SOJofFRJT on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rhondahi8 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Georgehab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: darlasu3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: lldFvIXz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Carloswam on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: avawk3 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: rickzw60 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: IrinaFab on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: colettexw2 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Theronsaw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Maha-Svanah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Josepharido on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: keithdx1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Geraldjep on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: trinajh1 on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Igorlrn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: LouisVon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Igorlpv on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetlelh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: TimothyPic on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Svetlanajbt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Joshuadausa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sergxnl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ThomasShusy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Igoroem on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: btaletndmf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Leonmsz on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: ntaletarqe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Sergrtq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Voltugovug on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vilianaloo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Veronamqg on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Irinhmn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Julioxc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Juliyfn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Evanxf on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Evazpe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Vikiuln on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Viktorizcw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Davidxla on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Serzaxx on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Serzyki on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: KeithNah on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Margaretzrc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Serzjdd on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Post by: Serzjfl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
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Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: 1win_vyoa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Mazrfkr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Lazrgno on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_kvsr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sazrrpt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Lazrdmu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Jariorpby on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Dnrtljq on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sazrkib on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Eanrwuu on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Cazrskn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Cazrotn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: MelissaQualoMayoto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Mazrqto on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Treffoi on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: internet provaideri_uqEa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beton ot proizvoditelya_y on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Sazrijj on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jariorpzw on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrwwk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrsxh on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorxmb on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrcgy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazraov on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorvbo on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: RayfordNak on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: Dnrthqy on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazroaa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrtuqn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlynaJew on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_jvpl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrlnk on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_zbSt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazreir on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_pqOr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michelin_bgon on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eanrxou on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
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Post by: skypka zolota _kjPn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrybe on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_rvot on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_hksa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mostbet_tgEl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrkxl on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Protezirovanie zybov_ckmr on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lombard chasov_leSa on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xazrsce on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_dtkn on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pin up azerbaycan_utea on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrxmc on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sklad_cppt on April 22, 2009, 02:45:12 PM
Welcome and very good story, I like how we found out Sara was Mrs. Grissom at the end.
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ohusivun on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithWibia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronHam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itosuezer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinTuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: resedoqujiko on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okocaluq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alissaiw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otosopgi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HaroldGen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oupivuqenu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fipiafuuqiva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelos11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aazemon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oovdafinuu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AmyPef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uidizalbapafi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rapidgator on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: awedacoduwi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anatsoled on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oviridziokaki on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JulianLounc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: irumepuhe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufuducugoq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilxuori on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erkgovinivuxu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iorahifidoti on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utarubsa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Briancen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kittyvh60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SHADYGUY on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MicheleTraic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamAbago on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SusanLoago on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioemk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urokibakirvoj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Derekkef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesassiz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randallat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lyndahr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aiimkotovipi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydeSobre on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lmihaEmaws on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylhq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannen1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijuxodo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolejw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MirnaArext on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglashix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerknorp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieax11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqkizadaroc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mirr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robynug3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ciekasiwobir on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerchora on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miguelid11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamVaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hydrazm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonitaxq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesdox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyubedujula on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barbaramaino on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivedy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejidatacocu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azugixic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristiech11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardSox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondlj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larrysi1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawndo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bobbyinaps on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissom fan on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Grissfan on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: algolycle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icapokome on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: equxuiyg on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RandyTal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avuoroaqahe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exupuled on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnuamb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avimozu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: igimimeh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iminevoatejit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ileraefa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davepv3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hopehi11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardomu60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maricelany60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnnaPag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edeqiba on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioxdv on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterdsr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisxk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opoqilafuy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obumeexisih on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Banezasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mudosgeha on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uozhzzis on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asgiqopeduli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituxuhupite on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osipudork on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aredoya on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ahepenayadu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pauelllimb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aforacacakef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uqxunek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidaaq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candiceic69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesHOOKY on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Duglassig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udapeqom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureeyaj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanetteco1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamindus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenpv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linktrunfab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesleycc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonpk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aurorady16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RittsEmaws on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennistn18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertwab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArthurUntor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evozihay on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinglync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojomeriq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaotivuz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aheisuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 24vulkan-24.com on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivmfuqamsous on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: friedafz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelliefi18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewelmq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenkw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osivilinfim on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentMuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audrayq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derricklz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasKah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apapechuv on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NudeStripperlwedia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: atokieqehoy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeprusa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricazn18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emuqeqxomara on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlenehu69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexislj3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aguiduri on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iufobiefaqaco on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMorge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettefx2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardhaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaeg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christime2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettanf69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietdj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynezh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldcow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xocifoq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uuipoci on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aahezjaxxo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarinaPag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iixivak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: revaas on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oaliqopehu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeetofafirul on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uruibawoq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulenodobocul on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajiwunu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: famRisse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anndroPag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justincak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxuh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utuefizuaj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Konstantuszdk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keithket on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgeus2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewlob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorxct on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookefz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellygs16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janazi18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqosecomeb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertmib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliajl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvixedukeqoev on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipihafapjataf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzperosibag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzdz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idjuyfodinafa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgepayof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oronatac on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaqh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredas1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianNog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipecepa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: icojucoukibi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbieSpado on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelti69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliakp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roberthax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Floydbiabe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zefelubok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanazqz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorirpx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronaary on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphBaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EduardoNeets on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StanleyChede on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidafd4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeTrorn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivantlq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujeyirunatil on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ramirolopay on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronazax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imnopen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisews3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorcek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergcgw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okeaabe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oteyehal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MorrDrody on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krismf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasennqg on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcuswz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lydiabv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondTob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenmhx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobxwt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneve60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LadyLauraAnn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlesbz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnyks18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipsnark on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esobikapav on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jayqe4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianen60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francinekh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaitlingr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyvk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyok3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fynjysxasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziteudu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipzc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixicyigyuvid on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inuvadavexoli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentHoW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliajo16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ituanakob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PandSr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genehr69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettiecy60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariaImals on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williammuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uhepapomiyan on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinayq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zyfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nundendurf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lewiszep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulub4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufejewox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urijsehnodw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyKig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubeqenaljgij on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oniyusugisi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: socorroht60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aurinradasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrenv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancarb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorlf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenag69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitaey11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvajo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wtozizusano on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anumeteginiye on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: burenokdalty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoxisni on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeslieBip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elenakg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoutiqueMipsy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredjs16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inohaodonehe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivexotexexuqm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zkoniumijolut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: acoqiqaful on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jamiif1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelibv69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gilbertreore on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MonicaWep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vilmatq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dostavkaideasmt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marinaypm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vtktfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurenfu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: newveshimt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ihorawit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oletumuti on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawr69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PeterTal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewPreog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ksifuwisef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiecu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azcefeq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scousa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancewy60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanxic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usimabyqoce on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: warrenly4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esebeli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: silviazg1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hro1wardBob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasuht on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanzgz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChapligahaM on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PetrAndreevich on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inufatec on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yfcfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethrg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoexayoaxa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioaba on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufkbrfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolalo60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dfkthfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaxidagij on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morganvk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upyuqica on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ecaqnuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracykl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqatuzimogo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofozekipadat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzagdopegak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aubarkae on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasiliyasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyHab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oocuqilo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heyubat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: br2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: up69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiuBS on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orihiazaqkuno on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vfkfyfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frannh3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulomowguok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojoteonacez on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raqueldi4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucietib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliliriletu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissadk2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojegerigezo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Everettmooto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ktifasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettyekm3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanbwi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iclegesobupo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eldarzgs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioowd on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreim16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ib18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanapgy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardoo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guvihuhijousi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetllkd on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondJex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: go4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannela1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ivanrvx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oe18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejoliehojix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dadarikixe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergfla on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredtd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriyog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipoewohobaya on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikklu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoriuyb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryqn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikjou on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginabp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgesig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizai4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evucuqed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinetk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adhileuq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OnenewlimitsSl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vuhutwda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MaximummaxSl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubezoluohu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinagk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yv18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertyt18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeoffit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilabb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenenq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: masirqatai on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipudibi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leworihokuhez on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: djdfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerzy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afayiyjx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikabs2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquerc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifogiqakedifa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufuurxulij on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efawiubxabaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijahomufcaku on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesclene on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nettietl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: unohodetustef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulinecg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osodaqoqi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iuposej on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oweqomekehqi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcidk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marimv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertayy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apeyivoxeviy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyzi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raegx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uomijetoman on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcju69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudianq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajqerel on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenuv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umejerezkguti on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneyvm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianjk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinajxs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicapk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gholbizarasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliblx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyugexejej on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emoluvoa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ehewutigufic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afiwisuaelewh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayls16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilnu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzbfe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eohegozwo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilososehuyedl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJourf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronatvi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axaliwofenl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vaijelow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kristinabpu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erqikukutug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeroze on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwapujoeweexu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axecefebagim on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ub3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadyaasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levzba on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianarvh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markof4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ln60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eudukciraifm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniagq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejinayoloaveq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ooxkumowev on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdbs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzaatikir on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geletapasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anezoho on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iromuhcon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinMes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackgs18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levyxu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levwme on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usidwam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliagu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levkoo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levhtg on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Levdiq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterKAH on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimiu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: XMCplkak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajimaabirirod on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yazireybaha on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreySpeab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tennieyasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eqoqiemaxsomu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiavg1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julidms on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizhz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julimak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julinmk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardslomy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julitla on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exifega on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannaq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ipawidum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertGyday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: giqehokerumo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexco1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipemaby on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidvok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottcom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vbktyfasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edabigud on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPruck on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheltonjeoda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucxajopoget on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertevani on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaats on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aetavaqojucaq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axisidux on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejecuzip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioAwaig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stasenpug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephensen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elefehidsowe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogibogi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dbneifasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianagac on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneynax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nidokut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thereseam11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Zalasasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uvidurapame on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifixamebizqo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aileenda60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujihuwufwome on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: udufotep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oljacirimiyo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandixw1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fivipodi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jimecoto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugahaaburewo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noWarPutinHuylo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alowqauuguq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: asanuysupexex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucoubeqovire on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ugevicexeduk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etezcahiviwg on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SexWifeLob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbotte on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcisp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylounk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenutign on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iteuvemaemoxo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnjo18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricexc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbneczasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deeqe16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rn18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GilbertPraps on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traviscoida on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardoju18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevengp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisajw11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julialak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamespneut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IvanMedaWeemn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RiarivEmaws on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: classicpat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardRah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelineic2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyhk2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracedj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosadv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efrosinasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TXsPhaxia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamekaib16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertAgero on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrexThish on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ty1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Freddieboync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Heathwer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirksg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ucqtipthyihub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethnex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenasj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaylatz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marlacm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avafx1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyzp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroslmc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnzhelikaDrins on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: usuyiyiheibei on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: armandozv69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertawags on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trishathich on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryTib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthermr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacksonTup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaih3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fzesxhd on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshagb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonawava on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentrom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasogy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerjak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarionTak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josezins on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyeruro on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billieasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharonzu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jarrodloabs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ujumoxuelqzx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldorivy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yqRFgYfl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterme16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gamerdef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sorryaustralia.com on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vebzankef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeNat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willardmak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altadc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandiNuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardnag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwards9Eteby on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAdupt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: or18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PlexorK on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RamiroLem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saherezam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LauraPow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHoino on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThelmaSwace on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lb18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waqujikumiva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypaync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinmup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agifiivigumow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JimmySex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennDob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: omimuhe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gh3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olulewum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iansd4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEramb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesoxync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelTuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VincentSpeld on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielayu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beulahoy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arijekivi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caledutevibi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hermanawarm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelutera on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlere on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamgen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JorgeApage on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GlennJap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardquasp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogernat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigplusa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMoits on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kizfar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aeryuogsa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardciste on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniebm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GordonFrows on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesglymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianskync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewGon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheqeleijaht on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephaster on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: YoungWrova on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesKaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldROb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieltoopy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasontop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasWoste on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipabato on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BestTranceoi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TravisGow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BradleyDed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upebacevo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stefanieoy2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldbearl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrelweilm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michealfug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carrieec69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldSaW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieSmoli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellPow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesmet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanld18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgefw1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hbvkzybyasymbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrinBen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailvu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelstarp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldfug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffordpet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleeok11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karllw11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephDap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AugustRed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stepanid on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyHoods on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DustinDow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Garlandfal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarissazy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBeera on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeye3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianPat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiewu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasAxona on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: typodarseisp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettieuu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacobbi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyhq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephstoon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednasa69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyOxice on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganjv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henrytum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeVok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardVoize on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willieicoto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obosevokib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carrollnounc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obikapal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesAmats on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenskinc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: branditm16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyked on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindang3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasPib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rafaellm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyoexapy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejeuqeuvuini on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesLef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannevm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miguelca2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaiu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinJex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avitgop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenIsoff on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiezp60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iacalawu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldBig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PutinImperator on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChicrDob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LelandNOn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglasibum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victornit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephpak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennislow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessefus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenaau1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephReult on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aosveshe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aidakg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamianCot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jackjd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VernonBrums on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernardwed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenso1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielet3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldrq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iqemoyuvub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinLor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caraze3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeriiw2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hm11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielsax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randykit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamvc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariedj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomassow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harrythoma on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertFeany on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenfogma on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemarytc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachelleeq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterweert on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorgus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldki60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sidneylq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencemf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Justinced on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorstafe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldgep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyfk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randaldon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardallow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Curtissib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElizabethMus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWonap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganoe2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donovandep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliampaX on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneyt18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonsnuth on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertHot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyNat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CrystalTob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylouhq2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeighaGoafe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jhkz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teresakat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertcew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdrulp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BasilCep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: moniquelk2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamMob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BuySoftPrash on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Daniellug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynje1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevengef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kermitmeeva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cyrusmox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyRoony on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manuelauz16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertisoke on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hazelzp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Miltonevaks on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryRarne on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eikuvene on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealzu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynuo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayetl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amigiuesecf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricecc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreytot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnell69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JacobGrike on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldZeway on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesEldex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Myronshock on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HaroldCax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randallvax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utatuwtoser on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MyronVed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerioz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewSow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannega18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryerors on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleysj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewGrort on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSpeen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilyfe18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencegt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pantonjab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrydenty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioGebra on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leandrowat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarrow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAnope on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xp18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GrahamDryNc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomilx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestersy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenitoByday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shirleylk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ervinriz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FranksBom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornacf60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldevero on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniopdo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryCip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyqn16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ubuprule on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blanchewc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clarkpluct on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardIsona on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyReark on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karile60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyWah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPrait on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottefl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremysah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieds4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Егоркаbug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rakipro on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceuu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HelenWeito on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlvinPed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciazt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarryTaite on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angiemj3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanfOn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larryfh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasnUt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicelz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriexw1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyWet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldtoups on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DwightGYCLE on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieav4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipNekly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: id2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesStell on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleygem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: philipty2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSmers on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellfk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardSnorn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Earlechoig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyzj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettio18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenexern on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisece3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Haroldspamn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SonnyMof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandimi1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julietwf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnefc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisTog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cindyaj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesitemo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertfex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthapr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPainc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louby on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelvat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EfuiAwsPag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melanieoh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Led on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevemef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelog4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryHag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BorgesHig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorraineva1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewbep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisee69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaao2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RashadMof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linahv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DexterVag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonJex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ephessoca on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisKek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryrhymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinKak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jefferybriem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneymb2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Palmerhaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinkeext on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesamild on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonynj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tommyundon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanneiw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanan69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ArchieDax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilaea3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertodova on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertPrill on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardocof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vincentij18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BruceviemO on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanled on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixou3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightrem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maralb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marisaphilk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacquelinenit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jennahok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonasynC on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryvah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dallassob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sonnyges on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogeraxorm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardCaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWoomy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joleneda2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kyleuc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coolerproo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertHed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephzc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noellehy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freddiepx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameslex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidphabe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julianfloky on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannata18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyrix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessieau2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernale18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyomidudqmuz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewak1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildagx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellann11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CesarFef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinatoto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewrEeda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ProgdomPaync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuellok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorainejw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inesvk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyZinge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyzk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ralphsyday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeFrabs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: heathered1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyLom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ritabab923 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacibq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexandraqj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZERAH on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliftonfj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TyroneGrods on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelStuse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonix69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephclova on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ueoqpuma on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderfn2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancart4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisja16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamrasp69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurwanty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andremw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bipnase on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williampiept on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terencepiott on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pennykj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessicade4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewledia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesGag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topwaterpro on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgilpt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiahm11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChongHex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebarz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidhoary on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hillaryza60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliafa1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guyen16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edafeifave on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernieheash on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bryandauts on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelasp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: au18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BurtonAffix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenEvalo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gregorygrind on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Montynit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethkit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamWhory on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithqb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coryvm3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliaar16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isdeelidud on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennySix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andydd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owezofevur on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankSlake on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeniferzn11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xiwukbeq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: exchangeproo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciahz4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ohahizer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyCes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesjes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryMam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ey16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: addieyq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirtouristpira on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aaronoc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonySpefe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelseire on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonPoope on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethwhash on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardroppy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylqa2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fkooolayur on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard355 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonixe3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iepoyuj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariego11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelles on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard843 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenflozy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard785 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carsonlusia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciagr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertum4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasbe3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Olafjab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilDadly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreasbuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasstymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredcarry on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jameshes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maggiehe11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewNoW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnadr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ts3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryhok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryjab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vw2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertTwiva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janeal16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesmup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethTilia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aluifilis on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinJok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndreNep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alexanderkd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubenwl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KonkuApelm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielGug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamieOvefe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Melvinbaism on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edadiruqedelo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sheldonrot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: consuelofj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannenk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiefu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertZenry on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oribehokadid on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyyq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreyug2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: etupidoq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelBor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cliffzoown on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iwcibeobewiw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: urezevehow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenRoose on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriqn2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldenged on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steventoilk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enoluruke on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maxinepp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: smard476 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aqeyupog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesusGaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leroyenave on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawnyw2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieec4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andrewmut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenegj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latashanb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisboile on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertmix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaritaap3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniena16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreyniz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonorpl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupesh4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolhp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethfw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luisoy2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isutacgi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainSpafE on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliapd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylaz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Fidelsup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carriexm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgieeq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: neilah3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCrins on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianBut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaeltuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uguzizusli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: provenexpert Ger on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipSerce on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandieef16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidtut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vselediSlerm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margaretss60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankNok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandahl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynarry on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantaait on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitalp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beverleyjn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidcoerm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolji11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idkozcofomeq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniowoulp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolafc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hs4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamescox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NormanJobby on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharybm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: viceehi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ls2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertDobre on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldRoosy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSiz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nellvs60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SylviaFed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheilawr18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uheyz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenziz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorazn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sydneylunny on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelcrype on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latishazs69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninefj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bethyb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williegycle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WalterExces on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Traceyrig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitaig18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordondk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbrahr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaRunny on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aviskp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelldp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RicardoTrunc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaCogma on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willardfh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Berryjaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelvinAlago on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonysmish on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrandonBum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertiw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TrinityElulk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelfus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansysy4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anniexg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ojitojihqo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BryceNeulk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sujiwakugeho on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeroyhEr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieat2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieph18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alonsofum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ibbubuer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gm69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnecu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OrlandoGah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uragatije on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NewtonSpumn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: su2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: veronicath3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelten on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waynedilia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bettezp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishann16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceygi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ernestbilky on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Unaajab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ry69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenFet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckoning on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizadf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hilaryes18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellalg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itexuep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisanp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erlejab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentfx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlakl60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertCoimi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijapilisuca on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Harryheisy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: timothyra18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olakautaqox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyodiel on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleynp60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: royzf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hicayoyeseko on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berniceab18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryToxek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryjop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasrew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniatx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: triciapk1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CliftonTew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterfj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ClydePes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankBoype on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emacuis on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Walterelifs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisonpm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: double pane windows hew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraam3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelSwick on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AngelTycle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxieaf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Philipwet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardDiC on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aliciara16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hildaqh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollyqt60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyapc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JefferyEmemy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winifredgt60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alberteluse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesLoams on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleqf69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriyg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: megangk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyKeerb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andreavd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendyjo16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DashWSteek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Manuelwap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelAtofe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinug3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jorgeqk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KathrynMig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rafaelhoalf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentnl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancedw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamlok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alisaos2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanfaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bogdanvqz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronniedc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldthofe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelliewh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwightdub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jolr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steveagoft on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishakg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvafa1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewpaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesWeals on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertpag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamGed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamodord on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelreM on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LloydOpels on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vasilisa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithCurce on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ejutacikujus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparofz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenawu2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevineralf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onieexibclkku on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esterox1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWaymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethamu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michailxtq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryWer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marylougg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HollisNer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeonardCix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithay2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afehacoxizi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorSaide on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertiepg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyei69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonmus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fernandofy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertquard on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharild on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyOrbig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondasb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: minniely16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aezigidixuuy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martinek18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suzannesq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlieny2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oupzujedu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marciks4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Luckyemike on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvaod1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willaqm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewojmixozase on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BYEugeneIrraxjexdex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithfh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DannyLef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilbertWouse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbaap60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GabrielZen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufutiejojolig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tabithakz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ayuezuzavazep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joseog60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyie60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anowvuk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciamj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjenry on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwintip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidTum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetso1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Linwoodweque on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Allanleaps on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: puxoepeyonati on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeabs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannawx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MilesVesia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malindahl60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jefferygl16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbreap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbymz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonbounk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shamoprumb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calliebo16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blackpeacer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettebj3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louisret on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedroskix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliayj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coocapamp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Uniloksnapy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: okixazewequzu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleysc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danieloccam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StewartExany on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseyic4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudefl60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofevuvaef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gaxetoxutoa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolinahj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williear1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sdvillpap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinTorry on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertEtept on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianEmeve on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rogerutite on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAlbup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidAMine on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianfj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariact1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zaimpadly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryGaups on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ralphyz16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Basement Window Jaild on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardGek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolqv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenacela on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerarddrync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jameszh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katieqr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnierg1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SammyCep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virgienc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertjoita on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ui4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanettelr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolahz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pedrossur on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnieec18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RussellOpick on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanabt60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenebo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonan16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyCic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamscoof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieErora on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneysix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinaaa18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: irenehr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidspoub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adafr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: orafu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uyuragotudoj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosehc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: umuujuy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldapeme on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSloda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryloucd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otitajadomav on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesfluom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antidracer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineme18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ovabomu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floratb2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloisesp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ru3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uzayunwagn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandakg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliaju69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concettafq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneit16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamTwide on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eduardoso4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janetteft3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eyohunowimezu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomaslof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coletteql16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pv18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightdq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishatg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneyc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertAdeva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldlo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneybak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughjc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janoi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onigiyvezak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aspectomtage Window thymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanjr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnenm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanemp60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zeyuyigasotia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynqo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanayy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikawb2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyku3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glendajt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gayym60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ewebuwegee on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jodilb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannego11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariems2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VasyaCoere on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillatg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: owjehojaupapo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wm16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: galegn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wallaceeb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RachelBip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glencc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emilydc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oxayoxuwokoia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisdx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriqueti2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinemc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariezw1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pedroca4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawandadr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancaqf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agikeliiqea on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonkv69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epjikopakik on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChesterFelve on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenafd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Agongoodo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithwh4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnzy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elinoree3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HeidiFiedo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbralx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredojw1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephsappy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathanpf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: camillejh4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizazf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariyaDug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinPoisy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AhmadneS on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorpe1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michealvs69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidnup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renesr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniaiw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olanb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BdondomSerop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinemm3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianemp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afohasxufokej on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiazx60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverSwemo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofidagqalas on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: traceyjy1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richarddak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanfm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisrg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Majorkar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElcosPaymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyaru60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dennisyk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendidy1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normasj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylar1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ec11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reqaricene on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onidemasleki on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandiexf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lanceds11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiayc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ra1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brookela60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdvillKat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: utinemibiem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisMycle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ezecayahe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vavadloups on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AuraEarn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosieuo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrixf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: quximijufeic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelcx3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffce60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shaneim4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelyngt16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alvinkib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerryuv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathRox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennydk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: teriau2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiejc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenzotoimi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: krystally1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandwg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audreycr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremyng69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leslieao18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sonyavx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loraoi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinthuff on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertapa1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lauranl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinagy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DorEmaws on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricesp69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinabw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lesaub1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnnieih2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquemd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fi4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Favorfet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyxp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ogultade on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chelsearv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobts4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelynct11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ameliajj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyar69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicolekh16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerieqs4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Albertintax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbruse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielez3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leagp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mathewix16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Horacespado on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenbp69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KoddacEaMC on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andyzf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimefg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: obolorav on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jy3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danielleuf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amyab11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: coleendm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorasr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: otepaqaoeluzo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenem69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ZAABET.COM on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseywd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melaniexy60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uitiyavsec on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fritsusHek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliannerb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasClody on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosannebt3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimevc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmellagr69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WargamingPlugs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darleneux18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allennk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lizxg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zm16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: savannahfc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tishayg11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphliery on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracygt2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonbe3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethayf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: staceybb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbywp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marinapn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldkk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidGlymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezyw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herbertgf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taahenimooax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueritemk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneni60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebaph2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ednada3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinakl3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normaht18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ni16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeox1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoinetteka60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qerijiwi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphNep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: male on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leenm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: matthewod69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ajofixoro on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: azozinuviguh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettecu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: itehuqiwguusa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: onupakrarunac on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opipejago on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBeigh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenqk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayi4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanqv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simonene11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dashkasevasts on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerine11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josieng16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucindaan1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chadelel on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyyetedaoli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephruH on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patrickuj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmavu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusrek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinsit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: UC-tex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deanneeq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ir3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollypa11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lawrencedh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissaut11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hefavageniwa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: merlenc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgerag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxucaze on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jicakoyuuge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imeldadm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosgk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iiculoba on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yihazetop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brucely69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrisnm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oyigisaqorhi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidCrots on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyls69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ateehuse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: verabj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorriexd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendykt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerrywl3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aprilnm3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fs16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: egupkohi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandawt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OliverWhork on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candicezm69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eddiehor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milagrosbv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anthonyxp69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaNam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Raymondclupt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardraity on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iafiloq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyty2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cynthiagq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: efiwawule on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ekcaevdojop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenezl11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabellajc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanns11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonybu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahja69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ifacwiot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanbs60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardneeld on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinesl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: afivxuw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristenbn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ozetidi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rondael69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonnieup18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: almaz2demn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoesphSnany on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shellyia3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shannonst16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannesl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evagb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: garyyk69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frederickbi69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Inquise on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliviadd4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iyahaekonc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrahb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasityox69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrienb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinzo2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christianxp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldmoome on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ParfumCop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clarencenz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marahv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthavk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gladysec11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uxdelubua on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jocelynvo11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: osocaxkewz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uwudaxuco on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellezp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elvafh16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparoms18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ixiwepiyo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgajw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wildaqa60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganbx60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevievedm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidRoozy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiqueni2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ulisagajo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryPhype on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hegasajahu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pg888asia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arnoldia2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevenye3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TeresaWeift on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaxy2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynxj3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jordonbob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Postlap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianneon11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: plasdtic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronniejoppy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karaow2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: esthergn18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimgc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: natashafg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyJulup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikavi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanadoz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldieax60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannettewq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sportsbet365 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lenush on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulaf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LeBruceval on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lerkblf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorywb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynag11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidamf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KarenBah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: epemeweh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikkracini on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jessiets4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheenayu2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annettehz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ufadiwuwemim on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommygx2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vezoyuguopij on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: steveol2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Darrenbex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattiesc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannezp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardhulky on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tylerref on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EugeneInids on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ininibyaziono on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldnaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithSen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonbv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uosoruhafurfe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WendyGot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MinnieRekly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ki2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kevingy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Odorert on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adeleya3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: renett18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: paulettejr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saracs1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephacinc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HorecaPuple on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uworuwaqanim on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandievi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonawu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryFub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertBab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EmanuelVix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: topsamaraGuapiff on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joeow16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindaay4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleyclawn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidJef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofefome on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarlosNes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clintonnz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonyonege on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thurmm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Malcomtag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ny60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kuwukemafem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edgargq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscook11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evaud69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinahd18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoa11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycecb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: howardgr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sherisp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsiepv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magikcomik on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanazs18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothypit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julizow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letayu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mindyun18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caigryBub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenhoupt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: upaqecigogihe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altajh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelnax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PatrickJox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesSem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianqd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisoc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: christifn11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanlt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleoe3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesBib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvophy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianToosy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arnulfodot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellemt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffmf60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfonia on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesNak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellraw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieai11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianfuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ijepigh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nikkier18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leilahc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessieot69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendydg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FordireRok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryTah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Henryoxync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: endeaws on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenza60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: axidagodolizo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvagx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: troywx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marshallfq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredame3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivamx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kb60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katesn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneso11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mikecr18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellira1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithye16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zs3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenww4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meredithrr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacywt2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollieei3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ureliejpik on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uziriziveyeea on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianejz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcioniy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ou11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ilushikvsw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleyfa16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ov18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dwainkex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caitlinfw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelmb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertomq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marleneac1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatricejh16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margerynd4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robnnj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jomwins on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriakf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candacegs2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robwnz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alycekp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniagh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kariww3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valerianj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannierh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansymc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagangi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsavj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardab69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseyyg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnezu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelesi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannazd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelayf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahaw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: scottka3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleyjg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracefa60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: willieer69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valarievn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracyno18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: williamou3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanapq2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: apriliq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronaldxy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanfl60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amandako2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckyxs16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyio18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherynce4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlenezk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susanawk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettefo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrakf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineid3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leticiave1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerriya4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwendolynoy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altayf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcellazi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graceqf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carissarl16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertabr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: calvinpe11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abigailhg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerrijy3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: malloryng2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miriamdj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lethavr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolefz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonwyu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidWrara on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolafg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanishatz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pamelamf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joannaak18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelxm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesHew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelleywa60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinana4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loreneql4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneyiw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginaey3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondaro18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julipbn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseynf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardzn16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzpfs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charliehh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vondaqv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julioim2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmiewx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leighaq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toniwo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinlm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianadoa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: od2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredonaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mabelju69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: winniewv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayeiu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvettevx1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesCob on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaKic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanitamf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiefu18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gwennt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidPesty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peterlok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimdc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melbawh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KirbyPancy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergbsn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieak3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscayn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kayeou4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaod4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldTal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellysb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickgl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CarrollCoign on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephHaith on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bl16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinChilK on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielmp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinatf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evaxmu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effieyj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mitchellmj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennck4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hesterjy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecildv69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiseuf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinShoms on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellaqv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherrypq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosemariewr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellayi18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: norany18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriazx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tommylm69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tessamt16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanwa11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisard2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinaeh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikatm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneln11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancheyc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonynon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankeliva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinneim16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: imogenexo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertNoinc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFuppy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williameveli on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chasitywn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgiacb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darylwj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estermj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeraldmog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: opheliatr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: javierkc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandwef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valariemb2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raquelza1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mistylb18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninebj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrieke69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: flossiepv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellalf60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrellfc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenemt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PhillipERETA on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: petrafa69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wesleydep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leliaxg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elizaae2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: toddlc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jacquelynyi11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eloiselw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carolineih1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiadj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angeliquebx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughsb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonax69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlieyg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudinefh3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: duaness18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WarrenHeata on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlessot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: felixgt2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terriedo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachellemk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarahms2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mildredsm16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luciauc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenAcoug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynzh16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pq16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinepb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelwex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebeccalg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracievy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: courtneync18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordantt18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeHause on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrunoFeF on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannacn3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornavd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyakf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariettafg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: antoniaof60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josephinewg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olgamq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maribelgc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonkg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethagriz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineml11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristinewh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louisadu69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: russelliv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raezw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haroldaf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darcykk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juliaml69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michaelue3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miaee2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonke2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettuj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: graciegw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanprade on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: candyxr69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Erepjapse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dustinue11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvasa11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottCycle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPlale on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldNunda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonSat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeremywt60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariyw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephRaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: np16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrary2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarcusBlils on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionnewi2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kentze60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oscarprags on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wesleyny69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emmavl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniejh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenage11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonaov60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tenuall on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: selenabp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shanaln2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lyndact2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ce16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenayk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patriciayy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlyn11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deliaqd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietss11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tinafo60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorapb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louellack18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ashleexn3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ofeliaic16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alantm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dm69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherylvo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrwinEduth on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseysr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardPoofs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JordanHeace on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Terrynef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieyb60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardwer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MathewKet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolapi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglaspypet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katrinagp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdx3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judithho18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shariek1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vo4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelaoa2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patux60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliazk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karynif3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlahs11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellieiw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celinaxe2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jordanuc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marvinby16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marisolva18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodoreql11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zg1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheakj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineuu60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adams69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ruthieko2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dollieho4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meganyh16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadiaol16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dannyxt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: derrickmu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollierz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: queenuo11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryannhn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corineqg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresep69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinayn2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: goldiepr18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianur3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genevieveca3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiebm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisyq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinaba16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SerRado on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: blancasn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lancepu60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathywo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernets60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tylerac69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrelljf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretss2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaiw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellagr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mi69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolitake4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fanniepy1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phylliszj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldap1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hy60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenefn18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catalinati16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leonardhc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuagaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CraigGon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianaws18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenwj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hollievi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charleshon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ik18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margueriteoh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelinezi11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannazo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melisall16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kirstentq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: haleynx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phyllissh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: larayc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terryow2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louuz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldshuTs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanninetr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sa60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: araceligy60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracise60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannlx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnBiose on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Frankovell on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamquiCt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicoledn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesNease on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltervon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelajm1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: qm69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lolaxp60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioneq1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janellmc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorxp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: biancazc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: spassub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ok4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: territj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ErvinDwesk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliavp16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: freidayu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claricefo60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasen11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doreensb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pollyoz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietrf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietmc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: myrauc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlti69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertlb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phoebehc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelleytp18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillyc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fayebj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: millicentax3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ll4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: franciscohn3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markak60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jillianys4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustama18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laureniu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikidei on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: liliayw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ninacp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitalx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliend60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brandonabini on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brucebrurf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leahky11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycegv18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robiniv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leavu2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: richardar11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiejg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinegx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnin4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hughzn11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniezm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nolamf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hectorbu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ca2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marcac60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patricatx60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelfh3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raymondyu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzcn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sabrinaat1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lonniewe4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judyee60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: md18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ju16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geneed4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ceciliaud1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GradyVor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ernestmp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stellayz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradleyhd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonyvi69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniams2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelinawl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannabd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisatr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: curtisak16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamKah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliews4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronafbr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pf69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewvat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guysg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ol18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnebh11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: valeriadr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ettasp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldinequ4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bessienu60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertdeard on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: julianyy1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickiee3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivyoc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florencenw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kennethdl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickyjw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monicaib69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florineyl1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizkc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauriceyo4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennieho60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeremyetete on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinesv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinapz16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianniq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianai60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaer1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gp4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginarc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnxg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randydt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daisyqm18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luelladt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracieland16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beatrizbw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alejandrasx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennierw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettesm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maryanneyq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rodneyhq18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mayrapm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlyeb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: victorwk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentlj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wj60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinej60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ingridwx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardAveno on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidDirty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lupeet69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretyy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roxierg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: judymi2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertobr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: iancr16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deidreys11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidMar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: catherinept3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debbieey3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rogerqf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briananf4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenamg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davidjc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williambam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rochellegf11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseygz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinji11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johannamn16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynnettejv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elviarq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gertrudetv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ba60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sadielw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: murielgi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deenafv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laurajm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannfw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albakb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredasb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaredil4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelasz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elbagq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinevk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgenw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eddiejs2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michellegx2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorieeb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelitalp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: li4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvinle4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vivianqo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenagr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debravx2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erickahq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marthalr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: theodorero2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainemr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dalegl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bertaoc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annazz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrytj16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesRex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: annmariela4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannemn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marianuo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktoricgo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patsyem4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danqk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlqt16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jewellyi60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriln69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: el60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnsu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnvz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryci16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: miltonih18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mirandajg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Venomguactop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cliffordhc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: whitneyrv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nitaji3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuals11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidlab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: guygd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileenqu1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephtaurf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannehj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francisks16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimpv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgetxk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: estellakf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carmelacv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryPem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: concepcionay69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sueyx3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermankw4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kellymef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rayvv60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harveyga1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankok60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylwm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharlenelq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: inezch3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadorez60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hermanvm60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleohi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katinacx16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgealima on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normama18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dionneyr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylbd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Annaanaks on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: linasx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amiejg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: genavn11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeSoday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberlynv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: um1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: violetqe60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allysonoc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: floydpx69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlbertoPen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbiepv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: feleciadl18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: agnesio2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gordonrg11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: terrancedi11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomigy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: os60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georginadx2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottezz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Phillipswert on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeDor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardcof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kylerb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenebe69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonathaniu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: suemo18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roseannmu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrietgl11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenuj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilajl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimebl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yeseniall3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: in1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: janicedp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: luzte60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dk1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lacykd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephenhk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ij1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarioSorma on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lolacat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BobbyFal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomastance on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannapj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marioiq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittneylf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenorabb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahl16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mollyzk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katess60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kd1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: frankiems18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rebekahdq3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorrainefg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanniegj3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shawnuw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eileener1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldLaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claralx3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nanniefo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyjg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldMedly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaBok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesGam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliokic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldJat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasWaind on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisAvala on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NathanWress on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielMup on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Glennscupt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryMor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: byronvl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlescy3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RaymondFus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jj18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kaseydk60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raulca60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: noelleoh4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: loriegw11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Natashaemn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasit3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorispc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathleendy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: monaxo11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lorenrot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cecilexd1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RalphHauth on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardpoill on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leemo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lelabz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariMosse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracielapj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glengr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnna16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charmainezu2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tonigh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dianafn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquels2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peggyga3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cassieyw11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellywt1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nannieog4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dominiquerx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilagb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleengu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tyronelv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lynettebu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meagankm11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ricardolb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmypk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: anitasz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: idahh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aracelije4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorwf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ilenelk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasnaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: caseywa2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernonjt4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keishapr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nzryxcrujoq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandietu69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmanr11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonkm2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stevekt2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pa11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyala4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edwinar16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorizr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lavernell11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chandrajp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephaniecr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ryanoe69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claytonzt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mattieqg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinekl60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: waynefs4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denadz1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stanleymw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeffke2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robinsu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlietow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CecilBes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fannysw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samantawjy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattyhk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henriettapl3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenjl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristineef16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zacharyel69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ronnieqb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kp69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adriennely60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: billiekr2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghanml2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: simoneye4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mn16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: melvincd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ramonwl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiaxb18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeraldRulge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: emiliahw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: carlaof3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hannahod2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ac2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ul18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: daleyg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jimmyjd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kenyacf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosettaut11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightie3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: isabelletq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannawe4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryesown on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: xc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IraKinue on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HenryPyDay on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniaca3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugenejn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cathyoe2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinatp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karinfk2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rubyfl11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: reginaldxk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: geraldcd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: normabo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deborahoj69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lindseyze1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elisabethht69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lornaos2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alfredfb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zelmatc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: morriscj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alineus2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: seanqi4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tiako1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karljr18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evelynvv4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: if3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 8playfortuna-Sip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosanneyc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniahz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: barbaraxl2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: manueluk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: angelsd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelBessy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katherinezp16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AmberTor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudemk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandyee11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sharrongu16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avisdk11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nonazb3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: madelyntc69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlinecj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: augustagi4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lorenext11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thomasax1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kerryiz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ex11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: aw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalcx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ww2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MasnaLnaiva on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brittanyde1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dorotheaig4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ivanqr3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Victorbof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinaqm16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lousu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondragh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adajk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wandakp11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracynn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cleose2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charlottedd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: peterez11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antonioklq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephrix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MerlePal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sheliafe2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jennysc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colleenzt18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickigc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randycy3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnmc1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cn69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vickyax2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nicholejo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stephanienq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: chrystalqe16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandycq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ronaldtug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vernanu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sethry2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: evangelinalx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mariannefr60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nancyux11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katykw69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ladonnato16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amaliace3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dawngd69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glennhz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yvonnehx11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mamiedf2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brandypx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: andrewly1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lessiegk18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: juanahv11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hestertq2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brentnn1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corrinezg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stacyps60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bridgettqj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: hattieez2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaxy4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shelbyrd11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sarakh3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gingerha1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: louiseac3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Hiramwhody on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwightsa2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: priscillayf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: salvadornu2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katiees2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cheribc16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leolauy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: faybh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: px2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellyqy4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillietg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: debrase3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeannego69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ad4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ie16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: justinebl3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lewisub1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: briannaoz2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clydedy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bradpi1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: amparotd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leannaft3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margretdu11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celiazh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eugeniasc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: brendanc11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: doraoy1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kendycef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kellibi2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: danapg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sq11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josiekq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: vx18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: le3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucialv18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nelsonko18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: eleanorhw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roycecrype on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeanettehf16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rachaelvd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tashamh18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsygi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: marissakk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamFrest on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: henrydl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adelego11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harriettmo69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lulamv1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: edithle69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilayx4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ellenyr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cg18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kc3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berthagb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: georgegq60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: josefajv2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloresfy16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lillyfo60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jg16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tracietz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: allanng2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: robertohi3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bonnienk16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katharinefg3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JudsonZex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: harrycu4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryhp2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jt11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bobbyhr4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yolandaux60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: katyez4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corneliaqq4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: charitysy4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: altasc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gloriama1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bryanqs4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dwaynevb16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: enriquedb1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dixiegh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: patnd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: virginiacd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: serenaoe3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: diannetc18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondraoc4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosellarg11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: crystalke4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: uj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susienh69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottieqd60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gailzd16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kn4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alyssaqv3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tamikasg2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kzkazpap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ebonyrf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fredxh2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bradleysmugs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wendire11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: clariceyo16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: johnniemz60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: milliekp1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearliefs60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adrianaot60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: markqz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: francescaxy18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gregoryqq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ig18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: celestelr1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: abbyld18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: fd1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jesusjj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: naomizb69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: helenaiq2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: margiezk1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertow2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mauricewf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: meghandi69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jeaninelm3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaqh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: soniafu69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineuy11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: claudiatc60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tammieob16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rolandph1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: phillippi16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jaimema69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ianuw18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wd3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gracehu60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelpiers on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: va18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tanyalb11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamsek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rosepl4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gretchenbf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kelseycw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: erikud3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephbok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nz16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lucillevz69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ia2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: velmabn2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joanjj11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dinald60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pansyhp3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beckygs16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kathrynod1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lottiegp16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mt18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: randyyj2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darrylit1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: yw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: audravt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: davejo1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: adaeg1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jannaer16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: florenceua4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lilliexg4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deantf3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albaiz11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: gabrielatj1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: berylxa69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laverneqg69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jerido1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: leors69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ritaxl11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: corinert11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oliveld4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PavelZen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kq69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiajy69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: bernadineyi1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pattipk4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: magdalenabm4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sondrasg60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: cherieio2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joycenf69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: roslynca69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pearlav8 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kristennz3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: saundralt16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deannhc2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: maeqt69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: taylorlw16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: effiebs11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: penelopeyz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: betsyut11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: latoyaot3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martatb4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: karenar4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nadinefj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: thelmavr16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: letitiall69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: olivexj4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: jonyu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: benitaeo3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: alysonet1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: denisexv16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: herminiayd2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: laraiw3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: earlineiv18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lenoraaf69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: albertolf18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonfub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: deloreswt16 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: twilaaa2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphoni on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaildol on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: susiefe11 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kinlochnez on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Antoniozga on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelCop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Teddymeete on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keganvoms on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevinbip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AldenFek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertPlore on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PercyLab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurcruch on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielmew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldJourA on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lamaslalo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maxwelldic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PaulaInvof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Andreapam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eugenehub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wallaceglips on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioDop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertMiz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardBit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Francisdrice on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelphick on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BenderCashwes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Warrenjor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rodneyblacy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesstymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TerryLal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamDem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: joshuazz18 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElceDiulk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankCox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AliceGeque on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maximdom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LesterUnale on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesvaP on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Orlandovug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothyaccip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesPQ on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pancakes som on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ttaletfnxz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasKip on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ryanger on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardknolf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidacini on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Larryboara on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marthaliady on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: oibuntuzusazi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardarord on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelClali on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Johnnyshush on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Waltercoego on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephMappy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WallacePhymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethEsola on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MarvinAvarp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergiodek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Angelpak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardShova on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Anthonydic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesDaymn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Randyneest on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WayneVum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Wendellineri on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MajorIcock on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Abrahampum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CalebDudge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kevintow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianlag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dannydic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KennethanypE on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrooksGop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidgat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelbof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlieTom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Timothylox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesMox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesunser on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Adolphdit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottPet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IsaiahFox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesonend on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Howardkek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Billyswish on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilburSerie on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisSaula on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEvast on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesbuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: NolanAmisy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeffreybam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardprife on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Arthurevora on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankHek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryDic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyBen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrankAmite on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertLal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TommyDek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StevenGer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardHUB on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidVoido on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JasonTum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldtum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertbig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorShubs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chrisbeado on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChrisDah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GeorgeAnese on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrentBed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ElliottSoort on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasliery on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dennisdab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesSoide on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesFLECT on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AaronZes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Craigoweda on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonnieSaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewTwisk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgeswops on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamNit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AdrianDor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidwag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesJat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KevinSlito on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jessemoing on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonyClave on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldReort on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jeromeshevy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shawnvonge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mathewbog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BarryPAr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthonyJorgo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidEdino on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerHOW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewIntep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VirgilRhids on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jaimerus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Marlonruism on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianTuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyHiz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FrancesaBag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamsPah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MiriamBus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidQuery on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: homastor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamTon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VodaKaH on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ViktoriyaGop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephCeple on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DarrellGaisa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: StephenEsoft on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentarild on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clydesab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesPlorn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Louissek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vincentcriny on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasgar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MitchelVek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DamonTak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RogerBuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DennisTug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyHow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianFelty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LarryFraug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertRof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasFibly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DonaldBub on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephblodo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamToils on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephhib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasdrego on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathanfab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gordonles on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ShawnCloge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PerryNab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GerardUnolf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AllenTuB on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinHaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brettjen on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrainCat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephWar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BrianDop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Merlemat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwinZep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardWah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Shelbyweito on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewtar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: PrestonMex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Russellweddy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephBum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WillieOricy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Barryvicle on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarrisEStiX on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MartinCox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GregoryVus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelOrals on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: micheleez4 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Thomasbal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesTus on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JesseRat on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: CharlesCix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TracyMiz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RobertNeN on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntoniowIlla on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidLot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredhense on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamexeds on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lavillpap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephViexy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AndrewDuelm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevenadefe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioWer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelamite on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: VictorRhiny on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Rolandfeext on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyRek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ScottDaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JeffreyHex on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Clintonsog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stevendom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Enriquemig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jesusmum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MichaelPsype on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobhog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JoshuaVaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aaronpaild on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HermanDEK on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Richardsix on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhoils on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamCab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JustinMoump on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielcom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Alfredfal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AntonioHib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RonaldHouch on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyGrice on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyNox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: elsieng2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HarveyDoupt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Normanvow on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xtoniamhjab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stephenbug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MariolEf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Candaijab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josephvoz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Scottusero on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertobell on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewkit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: HerbertRab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bali_tloi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: martajl69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: glenbu69 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kimberleyvf1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SOJofFRJT on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rhondahi8 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Georgehab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: darlasu3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lldFvIXz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Carloswam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: avawk3 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rickzw60 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrinaFab on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: colettexw2 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Theronsaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Maha-Svanah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Josepharido on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: keithdx1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Geraldjep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: trinajh1 on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlrn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouisVon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igorlpv on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlelh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: TimothyPic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Svetlanajbt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joshuadausa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergxnl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ThomasShusy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igoroem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: btaletndmf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Leonmsz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ntaletarqe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sergrtq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Voltugovug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vilianaloo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Veronamqg on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Irinhmn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Julioxc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Juliyfn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evanxf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Evazpe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vikiuln on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viktorizcw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidxla on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzaxx on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzyki on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: KeithNah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Margaretzrc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzjdd on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Serzjfl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AnthunyTag on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Margareteji on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DorothyGunny on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LewisaFfox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Munich souse on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidbrove on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ChesterPuppy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Samuelbem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Aarontruff on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BoyTommax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DinaSallymax on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: lumsefoDync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lindaideor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BillyWef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Douglasrep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: nzbkLiape on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RickyFlils on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: GilbertleW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jacobbyday on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: OknaBox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Joycebor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matthewtut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JamesLot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaellit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Danielalacy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Allenlam on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WilliamBOW on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pechi_pxkr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bentonexona on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Servis_veor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidrof on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Willardguatt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Endocrinologytum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pokrytie_hmEr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ernestodably on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DavidNaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brianver on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Tehnichesk_siEt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ketorolactum on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Avtoservis_quKt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Avtoservis_lfer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Viza_hcEn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Charlesanync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Recipes mep on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelagows on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardCrada on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Matras_frKl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Keithdor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Insusty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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secondly this is a good story
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ferrous material recyclin on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplom_fsol on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Peteremise on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ismaelroubs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Meshki_jkKr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: FstgjeEnubs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Micel#geck[Petogogyhupgef on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dichaelboync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DuaneRal on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donald#gnick[IzbkkeqozyvY on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mel#geck[PetogogyhupgefOQ on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chistka_qsPr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplom_fwet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_lkki on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Saiti_ssPr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Fald#gnick[IzbkkeqozyvYJ, on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SqddpcEnubs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Chastnyy_dvpl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pautty on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: rysskoe porno hydie_jpot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Top100Vote on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazernoe_cepl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Oborydovanie peregovornih on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: porno s trenerom_nbol on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: prodvizhen_osPr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: duessiomi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouiseHop on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Promokodi_vwOl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Promokod_baml on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: SeeplyMed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: shipping car across count on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Brayanlck on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bicryptoson on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pereezd v Ispaniu_ygor on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kazinopadly on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IncovE on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Nathandug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Michaelbrunc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edgardopap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: arcarge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Smeshnie kartinki_fvet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JewelMit on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Deteyling_hcSr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Deteyling_sxSi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MatthewCaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: BONUSjaf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Edwardvah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jerryshecy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DanielNap on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: stadsic on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ferrous material recovery on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: dublikaty_xrMa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya v sankt p on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LoganNug on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Skolko_yqOr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: kazino onlain_xlea on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Okleyka_jqMi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ubrat_ljSn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesjib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: IrvingLoula on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: WinstonCheah on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: DouglasVom on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LloydFuh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Pychora on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_znpn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_zgEi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_opEa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kak zarabotat v internete on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: skoraya narkologicheskaya on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephAnaky on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RichardLurge on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: himchistka_rppr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Bernicebrusy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: instagram story viewer _ on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_uhpi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Himchistka_biSl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: himchistka_uuEi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Proizvodst_noer on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: provesti_ysSt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: raoyslad on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Razrabotka_sdSi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kennethbut on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Provedenie_fwKa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Ralphpaync on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JosephAmeni on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Donaldlet on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: tyrniket_etKt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Roberttes on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Kodirovanie ot alkogolizm on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Narkolog na dom krasnodar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: instagram story _mcMn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya rostov_kd on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Vivod iz zapoya krasnodar on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: JerryUtefs on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: LouieAxole on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Robertrig on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jasonven on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EmmaBox on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Williamhaw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: ManuelPed on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Metal waste analysis on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefqmf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrdrf on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Gerardhoume on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Stomatolog_wpsl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jamesfem on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Coreyblany on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrzod on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
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Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
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and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mostbet_piei on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_xqKi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Steventok on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: EdwardGog on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Igrovie avtomati _izEr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Davidgaund on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_hhSa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mostbet kg_jckl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: wikibank.kz_trPn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: programmi 1s _imKi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Uazrexp on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Treflnr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrycj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrthv on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Trefniz on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: zubdokNek on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrkqa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iarioredq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_vyoa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrfkr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrgno on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_kvsr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrrpt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrdmu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jariorpby on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrtljq on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrkib on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eanrwuu on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrskn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrotn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: MelissaQualoMayoto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrqto on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Treffoi on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: internet provaideri_uqEa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: beton ot proizvoditelya_y on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrijj on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Jariorpzw on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazrwwk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrsxh on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorxmb on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Mazrcgy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazraov on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Iariorvbo on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: RayfordNak on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrthqy on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Cazroaa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Dnrtuqn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: AlynaJew on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_jvpl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrlnk on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Diplomi_zbSt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazreir on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_pqOr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: michelin_bgon on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Eanrxou on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: skypka zolota _kjPn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrybe on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_rvot on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_hksa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: mostbet_tgEl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lazrkxl on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Protezirovanie zybov_ckmr on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Lombard chasov_leSa on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Xazrsce on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: 1win_dtkn on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: pin up azerbaycan_utea on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: Sazrxmc on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...
Title: Re: Thank You, Sara
Post by: sklad_cppt on May 07, 2009, 08:23:54 PM
firstly, welcome to the madness that is boardrats lol. just kidding about the madness. lol.
secondly this is a good story
and thirdly please keep writing...